Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFQMPCAYDK0TKTEMY04

Run Details

Duration:
27.9s
Cost:
$0.034602
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open to reveal Lucien, his platinum hair catching the dim hallway light. Aurora's fingers tightened around the doorknob, her heart skipping several beats. "What are you doing here?" The words came out sharper than she intended. Lucien's mismatched eyes met hers, his expression unreadable. "May I come in?" She hesitated, glancing over her shoulder at Eva's cluttered flat. Books teetered in precarious towers on every surface, and Ptolemy lounged across a stack of ancient scrolls. "Eva's not here." "I know." He leaned on his cane, the ivory handle gleaming. "I came to see you, Aurora." The way he said her name — soft, almost reverent — made her chest ache. Six months had passed since that night at his office, since she'd walked away from whatever had sparked between them. "Fine." She stepped aside, letting him enter. His cologne, subtle notes of cedar and spice, stirred memories she'd tried to bury. Ptolemy raised his head, yellow eyes tracking Lucien's movement through the flat. The half-demon navigated around the book towers with practiced grace, finding the only clear spot against a wall. "You look well," he said. Aurora crossed her arms. "Did you really come here for small talk?" A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "When have I ever been one for small talk?" He shifted his weight, fingers drumming against his cane. "The situation with the Crimson Court has escalated. They're asking questions about you." "I can handle myself." "Like you handled the warlock in Southwark?" His voice carried an edge now. "You nearly died, Aurora." She touched her left wrist unconsciously, where the crescent scar sat just below fresh bruises. "I got what we needed." "At what cost?" Lucien stepped closer, and she forced herself not to retreat. "You're being reckless." "That's rich, coming from you." Heat crept into her cheeks. "You're the one who taught me to take risks, to push boundaries. Or was that only acceptable when I was following your lead?" His jaw tightened. "This isn't about control." "Isn't it?" She met his gaze, refusing to look away from those strange, beautiful eyes. "You disappeared for three weeks after I kissed you. No word, no explanation. Just silence." "I was protecting you." "From what? From you?" Aurora laughed, the sound brittle. "I'm not some fragile thing that needs protecting, Lucien. I thought you of all people understood that." He closed the distance between them, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. "I understand that I'm half demon. That everything I touch eventually burns." "That's not your decision to make." Her voice wavered. "You don't get to decide what I can handle." Ptolemy meowed, breaking the tension. Aurora realized she'd backed up against one of Eva's book towers, Lucien's tall frame nearly pressed against her. "No," he said softly, "I suppose I don't." His free hand rose, fingers hovering near her cheek but not quite touching. "I've missed you, mon coeur." The French endearment, spoken so tenderly, cracked something in her chest. "Then why did you stay away?" "Because watching you walk into danger, knowing I led you into this world..." He dropped his hand. "The thought of you getting hurt because of what I am, what I've done—" "I chose this world," she cut in. "I chose to stay, to learn, to fight. And I chose you, Lucien. But you didn't choose me back." His expression softened, vulnerability replacing his usual careful mask. "You're wrong about that. I chose you the moment you walked into my office with that stolen grimoire, clever and fearless and absolutely maddening." He touched her cheek at last, his thumb tracing her jaw. "I've been choosing you every day since, even when I tried to stop."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped aside [aside]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.111
76.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount626
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"tenderly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
2"tenderly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount626
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"wavered"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"absolutely"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"gleaming"
2"navigated"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"wavered"
6"tension"
7"absolutely"
8"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences34
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences34
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences55
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords627
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount343
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien5
Eva2
Ptolemy3
Aurora4
Heat1
French1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
4"Heat"
places(empty)
globalScore0.771
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touching"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount627
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean22.39
std11.67
cv0.521
sampleLengths
026
113
212
330
417
535
621
730
85
912
1039
114
1217
1320
1416
1533
167
1730
184
1926
2032
2118
2223
2326
2417
2531
2626
2757
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs67
matches(empty)
90.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences55
ratio0.018
matches
0"The way he said her name — soft, almost reverent — made her chest ache."
99.18% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount342
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.04093567251461988
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.014619883040935672
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean11.4
std6.28
cv0.551
sampleLengths
015
111
213
38
44
510
617
73
811
96
1015
1120
127
1314
1412
1518
165
174
188
198
2018
2113
224
2313
244
2515
265
2713
283
2910
3023
313
324
3315
3415
354
369
3717
3820
3912
409
419
425
4318
4421
455
4611
476
4817
4914
78.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4909090909090909
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences33
matches
0"She hesitated, glancing over her"
1"He leaned on his cane,"
2"She stepped aside, letting him"
3"His cologne, subtle notes of"
4"He shifted his weight, fingers"
5"His voice carried an edge"
6"She touched her left wrist"
7"His jaw tightened."
8"She met his gaze, refusing"
9"He closed the distance between"
10"Her voice wavered"
11"he said softly, His free"
12"He dropped his hand"
13"she cut in"
14"His expression softened, vulnerability replacing"
15"He touched her cheek at"
ratio0.485
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences33
matches
0"The door creaked open to"
1"Aurora's fingers tightened around the"
2"The words came out sharper"
3"Lucien's mismatched eyes met hers,"
4"She hesitated, glancing over her"
5"Books teetered in precarious towers"
6"He leaned on his cane,"
7"The way he said her"
8"She stepped aside, letting him"
9"His cologne, subtle notes of"
10"Ptolemy raised his head, yellow"
11"The half-demon navigated around the"
12"Aurora crossed her arms."
13"A ghost of a smile"
14"He shifted his weight, fingers"
15"His voice carried an edge"
16"She touched her left wrist"
17"Lucien stepped closer, and she"
18"Heat crept into her cheeks"
19"His jaw tightened."
ratio0.97
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He leaned, the ivory handle gleaming"
1"He shifted, fingers drumming against his cane"
2"She met, refusing to look away from those strange, beautiful eyes"
3"He touched, his thumb tracing her jaw"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.056
77.1496%