| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.421 | | leniency | 0.842 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 851 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 851 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "anticipation" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "gleaming" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "ensuring" | | 7 | "sanctuary" | | 8 | "unravel" | | 9 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 87.12% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "e with awe" | | 1 | "g with anticipation" |
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| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 848 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.64% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 646 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.17 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 9 | | Shade | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Aurora | 14 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | globalScore | 0.416 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 848 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "understanding that Isolde" |
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| 68.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 38.55 | | std | 14.98 | | cv | 0.389 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 43 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.91% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "\"No repayment is necessary, my friend. Fate weaves the web; I merely pluck at its threads. The gift is yours to wield, as is your part in what is to come.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 649 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.020030816640986132 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007704160246533128 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 55 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 55 | | mean | 15.42 | | std | 7.64 | | cv | 0.495 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 72.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.45454545454545453 | | totalSentences | 55 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 1 | "She scrambled up after them," | | 2 | "They emerged onto a thick" | | 3 | "She strode towards the pond," | | 4 | "She trailed off, her hand" | | 5 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 6 | "She padded across the grass," | | 7 | "She held out her hand," | | 8 | "They had found the oracle" |
| | ratio | 0.209 | |
| 41.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "The forest invited them in" | | 1 | "Aurora led the way, her" | | 2 | "Nyx, the living shadow, flowed" | | 3 | "The fading sunlight slanted through" | | 4 | "Aurora's steps faltered as the" | | 5 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 6 | "Aurora whispered, her voice hushed" | | 7 | "Nyx's form swirled, taking on" | | 8 | "Each step brought new discoveries:" | | 9 | "The farther they progressed, the" | | 10 | "Nyx's shadow doubled back, swirling" | | 11 | "She scrambled up after them," | | 12 | "They emerged onto a thick" | | 13 | "The heart of the grove" | | 14 | "Aurora breathed, her eyes drinking" | | 15 | "Nyx's whisper carried on the" | | 16 | "Aurora hopped down from the" | | 17 | "She strode towards the pond," | | 18 | "Aurora called out, her voice" | | 19 | "She trailed off, her hand" |
| | ratio | 0.837 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, they must wait for" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 44.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The fading sunlight slanted through the canopy above, illuminating dust motes that danced in the air like captured stars." | | 1 | "Each step brought new discoveries: mushrooms with bioluminescent caps that illuminated the forest floor, shy fae creatures darting between the trunks, and the d…" | | 2 | "The farther they progressed, the more aware she became of the Veil's presence, as if it were an invisible current in the air, tingling across her skin." | | 3 | "Sun-dappled grass swayed in a gentle breeze, surrounded by a circle of standing stones that glowed with an inner light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora called out, her voice echoing across the glade" | | 1 | "She held out, and a dagger appeared in her grip, its moonsilver blade shimmering with power" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Aurora called out (call out)" | | 4 | "Nyx acknowledged (acknowledge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.263 | | leniency | 0.526 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.526 | |