Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFRVAESCNRHZ0WTK0MN

Run Details

Duration:
28.2s
Cost:
$0.015873
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The forest invited them in with whispered promises of ancient secrets and otherworldly wonders. Aurora led the way, her bright blue eyes wide with awe as she passed under the towering oak gateway. Nyx, the living shadow, flowed at her side, an ever-present companion. The fading sunlight slanted through the canopy above, illuminating dust motes that danced in the air like captured stars. Aurora's steps faltered as the world around them seemed to shift, like a painting whose perspective bent slightly askew. She glanced back at Nyx, seeing her own amazement mirrored in the Shade's glowing violet eyes. "Are you feeling it too, Nyx?" Aurora whispered, her voice hushed with reverence. "This place... it's like nothing I've ever experienced." Nyx's form swirled, taking on more substance, their voice like wind through dry leaves. "The boundary between realms is thin here. It brushes against your mortal senses in ways they were never meant to perceive." As they ventured deeper into the grove, the air grew heavier with the scent of wildflowers, their blooms a riot of color beneath the trees. Each step brought new discoveries: mushrooms with bioluminescent caps that illuminated the forest floor, shy fae creatures darting between the trunks, and the distant music of wind in the trees that seemed almost like laughter. "There's magic here, Nyx," Aurora murmured. The farther they progressed, the more aware she became of the Veil's presence, as if it were an invisible current in the air, tingling across her skin. Nyx's shadow doubled back, swirling up the trunk of a massive oak in a silent gesture for Aurora to follow. She scrambled up after them, the rough bark scraping her palms. They emerged onto a thick branch, where Nyx gestured towards the vista ahead. What lay before them took Aurora's breath away. The heart of the grove was a clearing where time seemed to have stood still. Sun-dappled grass swayed in a gentle breeze, surrounded by a circle of standing stones that glowed with an inner light. At the center, a small pond reflected the sky's amber hue, its surface rippling with the movement of unseen creatures. "It's beautiful," Aurora breathed, her eyes drinking in the ethereal sight. "It feels like a place out of a dream." Nyx's whisper carried on the wind. "It is a place between worlds. Your kind is not meant to stay long in such liminal spaces." Aurora hopped down from the branch, her heart quickening with anticipation. She strode towards the pond, her black hair swaying against her shoulders. As she neared the water's edge, a ripple spread outwards from the center, as if something had disturbed the surface from below. "Who's there?" Aurora called out, her voice echoing across the glade. "We mean no harm. We've come seeking knowledge and the promise of..." She trailed off, her hand straying to the Heartstone Pendant at her throat, its deep crimson glow pulsing faintly against her skin. "You have found the Fae Grove," came a reply, as if the wind itself had learned to speak. "Not all who enter return unchanged, human child." The water of the pond parted, and a figure rose from its center. Isolde, the Seer, stepped onto the bank, her silver hair gleaming in the soft light. Her pale lavender eyes held an ageless wisdom and a mischievous gleam. She padded across the grass, her footfalls making no sound or impression on the earth. "Isolde," Nyx acknowledged with a subtle bow of their shadowy head. "We seek your counsel." The Seer's eyes flickered from Aurora to the pendant around her neck. "The Heartstone has guided you well, Aurora Carter. It is a token of favor from Prince Belphegor himself, ensuring safe passage through the mortal realm." Aurora's hand flew to the pendant, her eyes widening. "A gift from Dymas? But why?" Isolde offered a cryptic smile. "All shall be revealed in due time. For now, you must prepare for what is to come." She held out her hand, and a dagger appeared in her grip, its moonsilver blade shimmering with power. "This gift shall serve you well, child. Take it and embrace your destiny." Aurora accepted the Fae-Forged Blade with reverence, its hilt surprisingly cold against her palm. "How can I possibly repay you for this, Isolde?" Isolde's laughter trilled through the air like chimes. "No repayment is necessary, my friend. Fate weaves the web; I merely pluck at its threads. The gift is yours to wield, as is your part in what is to come." Aurora and Nyx shared a glance, both understanding that Isolde spoke in riddles as much to conceal meaning as to reveal it. This place, caught between worlds and time, was both a sanctuary and a portent of danger. They had found the oracle they sought. Now, they must wait for the prophecies to unravel. The warmth of the setting sun bathed the grove, casting long shadows across the grass. Aurora, Nyx, and Isolde stood together at the edge of the pond, their forms reflected in the still water, waiting for the night to bring what it may.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount851
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount851
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"anticipation"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"ensuring"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"unravel"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"whisper"
2"anticipation"
3"echoing"
4"gleaming"
5"flickered"
6"ensuring"
7"sanctuary"
8"unravel"
9"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
87.12% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences44
matches
0"e with awe"
1"g with anticipation"
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences55
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords848
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
41.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount646
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.17
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx9
Shade1
Veil1
Aurora14
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Seer2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde5
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Veil"
2"Aurora"
3"Seer"
4"Blade"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Shade"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
globalScore0.416
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount848
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"understanding that Isolde"
68.19% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean38.55
std14.98
cv0.389
sampleLengths
063
135
221
335
460
533
644
763
820
924
1045
1145
1226
1355
1415
1537
1615
1753
1823
1939
2054
2143
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs101
matches(empty)
90.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences55
ratio0.018
matches
0"\"No repayment is necessary, my friend. Fate weaves the web; I merely pluck at its threads. The gift is yours to wield, as is your part in what is to come.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount649
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.020030816640986132
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007704160246533128
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean15.42
std7.64
cv0.495
sampleLengths
014
119
211
319
419
516
613
78
814
921
1025
1135
126
1327
1420
1511
1613
178
1815
1920
2020
2111
229
236
2418
2511
2612
2722
2811
2934
3018
318
3213
3315
3412
3515
3611
374
3812
3925
409
416
425
4335
4413
4514
469
478
4831
4922
72.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45454545454545453
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences43
matches
0"She glanced back at Nyx,"
1"She scrambled up after them,"
2"They emerged onto a thick"
3"She strode towards the pond,"
4"She trailed off, her hand"
5"Her pale lavender eyes held"
6"She padded across the grass,"
7"She held out her hand,"
8"They had found the oracle"
ratio0.209
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences43
matches
0"The forest invited them in"
1"Aurora led the way, her"
2"Nyx, the living shadow, flowed"
3"The fading sunlight slanted through"
4"Aurora's steps faltered as the"
5"She glanced back at Nyx,"
6"Aurora whispered, her voice hushed"
7"Nyx's form swirled, taking on"
8"Each step brought new discoveries:"
9"The farther they progressed, the"
10"Nyx's shadow doubled back, swirling"
11"She scrambled up after them,"
12"They emerged onto a thick"
13"The heart of the grove"
14"Aurora breathed, her eyes drinking"
15"Nyx's whisper carried on the"
16"Aurora hopped down from the"
17"She strode towards the pond,"
18"Aurora called out, her voice"
19"She trailed off, her hand"
ratio0.837
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"Now, they must wait for"
ratio0.023
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The fading sunlight slanted through the canopy above, illuminating dust motes that danced in the air like captured stars."
1"Each step brought new discoveries: mushrooms with bioluminescent caps that illuminated the forest floor, shy fae creatures darting between the trunks, and the d…"
2"The farther they progressed, the more aware she became of the Veil's presence, as if it were an invisible current in the air, tingling across her skin."
3"Sun-dappled grass swayed in a gentle breeze, surrounded by a circle of standing stones that glowed with an inner light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora called out, her voice echoing across the glade"
1"She held out, and a dagger appeared in her grip, its moonsilver blade shimmering with power"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
2"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
3"Aurora called out (call out)"
4"Nyx acknowledged (acknowledge)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.526
78.6334%