Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFSJNN8XWEX5673TTK7

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's heart pounded as she swung open the door, her breath catching in her throat. Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic eyes piercing through her with an intensity that made her knees weak. The ivory-handled cane he always carried was gripped tightly in his hand, a silent testament to the tension between them. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth and low, like velvet brushing against her skin. She swallowed hard, trying to keep her composure. "Lucien. What are you doing here?" He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the cramped flat. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed and darted under the sofa. Lucien's gaze swept over the room, taking in the books, scrolls, and research notes scattered across every surface. "I need your help," he said, his tone leaving no room for argument. Aurora crossed her arms, leaning against the doorframe. "You have a lot of nerve showing up here after everything." Lucien's eyes softened, a flicker of regret passing through them. "I know. But this is important." She sighed, her resolve wavering. "Fine. What is it?" He handed her a folded piece of paper, his fingers brushing against hers. The touch sent a jolt of electricity through her, memories of their past flooding back. She unfolded the paper, her eyes scanning the cryptic symbols and unfamiliar language. "It's a summoning ritual," Lucien explained. "Someone's trying to bring a demon into our world. I need you to help me stop it." Aurora's eyes widened. "A demon? Are you serious?" Lucien nodded, his expression grave. "Deadly serious. If they succeed, it could mean the end of everything." She bit her lip, her mind racing. "Why me? Why not someone else?" "Because you're the best," he said simply. "And because I trust you." Aurora's heart ached at his words, the old wounds reopening. She had trusted him once, and it had nearly destroyed her. But the urgency in his voice, the desperation in his eyes, made her reconsider. "Alright," she said finally. "I'll help you. But this doesn't change anything between us." Lucien's lips curved into a sad smile. "I know." They worked in silence, the tension between them palpable. Aurora deciphered the symbols, her mind focused on the task at hand. Lucien watched her, his gaze unwavering, as if he were afraid she might disappear if he looked away. "How did you find out about this?" Aurora asked, breaking the silence. "An informant," Lucien replied. "He was killed before he could tell me everything." Aurora shivered, the gravity of the situation sinking in. "Do you know who's behind it?" Lucien shook his head. "Not yet. But I have a few leads." She nodded, her fingers tracing the symbols on the paper. "This is going to be dangerous." Lucien's eyes darkened. "I know. But we don't have a choice." Aurora's resolve hardened. "Then let's get to work." Hours passed as they pieced together the ritual, their minds working in tandem. The tension between them eased, replaced by a sense of camaraderie. They had always been a good team, despite everything. As the sun began to set, Aurora leaned back, her eyes tired but determined. "I think we've got it." Lucien nodded, his expression relieved. "Good. Now we just need to find the location." Aurora's heart sank. "That could take days." Lucien's eyes met hers, a spark of determination in them. "Then we'll start now." They gathered their things, preparing to leave. Aurora's mind raced with thoughts of the past, the hurt and betrayal that had driven them apart. But as she looked at Lucien, she couldn't deny the connection that still lingered between them. "Lucien," she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper. He turned to her, his eyes searching hers. "Yes?" "Why did you come to me?" she asked, her heart aching for the truth. Lucien's gaze softened, his expression vulnerable. "Because I never stopped caring about you. And because I knew you would help me, despite everything." Aurora's breath caught in her throat, the weight of his words settling over her. She had spent years trying to forget him, to move on from the pain he had caused. But now, standing here with him, she realized that some wounds never truly healed. "Let's go," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. Lucien nodded, his eyes filled with a mixture of hope and regret. "Together." They stepped out into the night, the cool air wrapping around them like a shroud. Aurora's mind raced with thoughts of the ritual, the danger they faced, and the unresolved feelings between them. But as they walked side by side, she couldn't help but feel a glimmer of hope. Maybe, just maybe, they could find a way to heal the wounds of the past and face the future together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
23.53% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.176
75.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount800
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"softly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount800
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"testament"
count1
2
word"tension"
count3
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count2
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"grave"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"unwavering"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count1
15
word"determined"
count1
16
word"raced"
count2
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"testament"
2"tension"
3"velvet"
4"flicker"
5"resolve"
6"wavering"
7"scanning"
8"grave"
9"racing"
10"silence"
11"palpable"
12"unwavering"
13"tracing"
14"sense of"
15"determined"
16"raced"
17"whisper"
18"weight"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"couldn't help but"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"couldn't help but feel"
2"the weight of his words"
3"a glimmer of hope"
96.26% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences58
matches
0"a flicker of regret"
1"a spark of determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords799
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount600
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.5
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Aurora13
Lucien15
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.25
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount799
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"realized that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean19.98
std12.57
cv0.63
sampleLengths
052
114
214
342
413
519
616
79
841
923
108
1117
1213
1312
1435
1514
169
1739
1812
1913
2015
2112
2216
2311
248
2533
2619
2714
287
2914
3040
3110
329
3314
3423
3545
3612
3713
3849
3920
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"was gripped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences82
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount601
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.029950083194675542
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011647254575707155
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean9.74
std4.86
cv0.499
sampleLengths
015
117
220
314
48
56
614
710
818
913
108
1111
1210
136
145
154
1613
1715
1813
196
2017
213
225
235
2412
257
266
277
285
2910
3011
3114
324
3310
347
352
369
3712
3818
3912
404
419
429
436
444
458
4610
476
483
498
69.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4146341463414634
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners34
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Maybe, just maybe, they could"
ratio0.018
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences56
matches
0"he said, his voice smooth"
1"She swallowed hard, trying to"
2"He stepped inside without waiting"
3"he said, his tone leaving"
4"She sighed, her resolve wavering."
5"He handed her a folded"
6"She unfolded the paper, her"
7"She bit her lip, her"
8"he said simply"
9"She had trusted him once,"
10"she said finally"
11"They worked in silence, the"
12"She nodded, her fingers tracing"
13"They had always been a"
14"They gathered their things, preparing"
15"she said softly, her voice"
16"He turned to her, his"
17"she asked, her heart aching"
18"She had spent years trying"
19"she said, her voice steady"
ratio0.375
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences56
matches
0"Aurora's heart pounded as she"
1"Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic"
2"The ivory-handled cane he always"
3"he said, his voice smooth"
4"She swallowed hard, trying to"
5"He stepped inside without waiting"
6"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed"
7"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
8"he said, his tone leaving"
9"Aurora crossed her arms, leaning"
10"Lucien's eyes softened, a flicker"
11"She sighed, her resolve wavering."
12"He handed her a folded"
13"The touch sent a jolt"
14"She unfolded the paper, her"
15"Aurora's eyes widened."
16"Lucien nodded, his expression grave."
17"She bit her lip, her"
18"he said simply"
19"Aurora's heart ached at his"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic eyes piercing through her with an intensity that made her knees weak."
1"He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the cramped flat."
2"Lucien watched her, his gaze unwavering, as if he were afraid she might disappear if he looked away."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his tone leaving no room for argument"
1"she said softly, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"she asked, her heart aching for the truth"
3"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.059
73.1434%