Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFSJXX686ZNYR39P60E

Run Details

Duration:
44.1s
Cost:
$0.038490
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air changed as they crossed the threshold into the Fae Grove. Aurora felt it first—a tingling across her skin, like static electricity but gentler, more deliberate. The forest around them shifted subtly, the mundane Richmond Park they'd entered fading into something altogether different. "We've crossed," Aurora whispered, instinctively reaching for the Heartstone Pendant that hung around her neck. Though forged in Dymas, not of Fae origin, it still pulsed with unusual warmth against her fingertips. Nyx moved beside her, their form rippling slightly as they adjusted to the new environment. They seemed more substantial here, the edges of their shadow form more defined, their violet eyes glowing brighter. "The veil is thin in this place," they observed, their voice like rustling leaves in a midnight breeze. "I can feel the spaces between realms pressing closer." Isolde walked ahead of them with practiced ease, her bare feet making no sound on the forest floor, leaving no imprint in the soft moss. Her silver hair caught what little light filtered through the ancient oak canopy, seeming to glow with its own inner luminance. "Follow only where I step," she cautioned, not turning back to look at them. "The Grove remembers visitors and not all paths lead back to your world." Aurora adjusted the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, taking comfort in its cold presence. The weapon had never felt more alive than it did now, humming faintly against her side as if recognizing its homeland. As they ventured deeper, the ordinary sounds of Richmond Park—distant traffic, dog walkers, the occasional aircraft overhead—faded completely. In their place came a symphony of unfamiliar sounds: wind chimes with no visible source, melodic chirping of birds Aurora couldn't identify, and beneath it all, a low, rhythmic pulse that felt more like a heartbeat than a sound. "What's that beating?" Aurora asked, her voice sounding oddly flat in the Grove's atmosphere. Isolde smiled enigmatically. "The Grove breathes. It lives. What you hear is its lifeblood flowing through the roots beneath us." The path widened before them, revealing a clearing that defied every law of nature Aurora understood. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in patches of color too vibrant to be natural—blues that shifted like deep ocean waters, purples that seemed to emit their own light, yellows that dazzled the eye. Despite it being late autumn in the world they'd left behind, here everything bloomed in riotous abundance. At the center of the clearing stood a circle of standing stones, not made of traditional rock, but of living oak trees that had somehow grown in perfect geometric formation, their trunks twisted into impossible shapes, forming archways between them. "The Council Circle," Isolde explained, approaching the stones with a respectful bow of her head. "Where the Fae Courts once gathered to discuss matters concerning both our worlds, before the Great Sundering." Nyx drifted toward the nearest stone arch, their shadowy hand hovering just above the twisted wood. "There is old magic here. Older than me." "Much older," Isolde agreed. "The stones remember the first weaving of the Veil, when realms were separated for the safety of all." Aurora stepped into the circle, feeling a rush of... something... wash over her. Not quite magic as she understood it from her encounters in Dymas, but something wilder, less controlled. It felt ancient and aware, as if the very air was evaluating her presence. "It knows we're here," she said, turning slowly to take in the full circumference of the circle. Isolde nodded. "The Grove always knows. It remembers every visitor—even those who came thousands of years ago." As if responding to her words, the ground beneath them shimmered. The wildflowers parted in sweeping arcs, revealing a mosaic of what looked like liquid silver set into the earth. Patterns formed and reformed on its surface, showing faces, landscapes, creatures—all flowing into one another in a dizzying display. "The Memory Pool," Isolde whispered, her pale lavender eyes widening slightly. "It rarely reveals itself to outsiders." Nyx knelt beside the shimmering surface. "What is it showing us?" "History. Possibility. Fragments of what was and what might be." Isolde's voice took on the familiar cadence she used when speaking in riddles. "The pool reflects not what is seen, but what needs seeing." Aurora knelt beside the pool, mesmerized by the shifting images. For a moment, she saw herself reflected—not as she was now, but wielding the Fae blade against a shadow that wasn't Nyx, standing before what looked like a tear in reality itself. The image dissolved before she could make sense of it. "Did you see that?" she asked, looking up at her companions. Nyx's form rippled with what Aurora had learned to recognize as discomfort. "I saw myself as I once was. Human. Before the failed ritual." Isolde simply nodded. "The pool shows differently to each viewer." The silver surface suddenly stilled, then began to glow with increasing brightness. The light rose from the pool in tendrils, forming shapes in the air around them—delicate, translucent creatures that resembled dragonflies but with humanoid faces and bodies that trailed off into wisps of light. "Light sprites," Isolde said, extending her hand as one of the creatures landed on her palm. "Messengers of the Grove. They haven't been seen since the Courts withdrew deeper into the Fae Realm." The sprites danced around them, their movements creating patterns of light that hung in the air like luminous calligraphy. Aurora felt a tug on the Heartstone Pendant—it had risen from her chest and now hovered slightly, pointing toward the northern edge of the circle. "They're trying to show us something," she said, following the pendant's pull. Beyond the standing stones, the forest grew denser, the trees pressing closer together until they formed what appeared to be a solid wall of vegetation. But as they approached, Aurora saw that there was a narrow gap, barely visible unless viewed from exactly the right angle. "A hidden path," Nyx observed. "Not hidden," Isolde corrected. "Forgotten. Even by me." Something in her voice had changed—the first hint of uncertainty Aurora had ever heard from the oracle. The sprites flitted ahead of them, illuminating the narrow passage. As they followed, the forest closed in around them, branches reaching out like curious fingers to brush against their clothes. Aurora felt the Fae blade grow colder at her side, almost painful to touch even through its sheath. The path opened suddenly onto a second clearing, smaller than the first and dominated by a single object at its center: a massive sundial made of the same moonsilver as Aurora's blade. Its surface was etched with symbols that seemed to move when viewed from the corner of the eye. "The Chronolith," Isolde breathed, her composure slipping further. "I thought it was lost when the Veil was strengthened." "What does it do?" Aurora asked, circling the structure cautiously. "It measures the thinning and strengthening of the Veil. A guide for travelers between worlds." Isolde approached it reverently. "The Courts used it to determine safe passage times." Nyx drifted to the opposite side, their form seeming to stretch slightly toward the moonsilver surface. "The markings. They indicate the winter solstice is approaching." "When the Veil weakens," Aurora murmured, remembering the lore Isolde had taught her. The sprites that had led them here now formed a ring above the Chronolith, their light casting the symbols into sharp relief. As they watched, the shadow on the dial moved—not with the sun, which was barely visible through the canopy, but seemingly of its own accord. "It's counting down," Isolde said, her silver hair lifting slightly in a breeze that affected nothing else in the clearing. "Something approaches. Something the Grove considers important enough to reveal the Chronolith." Aurora felt the Heartstone Pendant grow warmer against her skin, while the Fae blade seemed to vibrate with cold energy. The opposing sensations created a strange harmony, neither canceling the other but existing in perfect tension. "The worlds are aligning," Nyx said, their usually whispered voice now clear and resonant. "Earth, Hel, and the Fae Realm—the barriers between them are shifting." In the distance, beyond the boundaries of the Grove, a bell began to toll—deep, resonant notes that seemed to vibrate through Aurora's very bones. "The warning bells of Richmond," Isolde said, looking toward the sound with wide eyes. "They haven't rung in three centuries. Not since the last great breach of the Veil." Aurora looked from the Chronolith to her companions, feeling the weight of discovery settling over her. "I think we were meant to find this place. To see this." The sprites dispersed suddenly, their light fading as they vanished back into the forest. The dial's shadow returned to its original position, and the clearing grew still once more. But something had fundamentally changed—Aurora could feel it in the air, in the watchful presence of the Grove around them. They had been shown a warning, a glimpse of something coming. And whatever it was, the Fae Grove itself had stirred from centuries of slumber to prepare them.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:26:41.405Z" 2/19/2026, 3:26:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
57.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count5
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count3
5
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
2"very"
3"slowly"
4"suddenly"
5"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1519
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"symphony"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count2
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"mosaic"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"structure"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"practiced ease"
3"symphony"
4"rhythmic"
5"pulse"
6"perfect"
7"shimmered"
8"mosaic"
9"familiar"
10"sense of"
11"etched"
12"structure"
13"tension"
14"weight"
15"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences78
matches
0"felt a tug"
14.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1504
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1174
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae7
Grove5
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Dymas2
Isolde15
Aurora20
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Nyx8
Chronolith2
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Isolde"
2"Aurora"
3"Blade"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Dymas"
5"Chronolith"
globalScore0.648
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount10
matches
0"seemed more substantial here, the edges of their shadow form more defined, their violet eyes glowing brighter"
1"as if recognizing its homeland"
2"purples that seemed to emit their own light, yellows that dazzled the eye"
3"Not quite magic as she understood it from her encounters in Dymas, but something wilder, less controlled"
4"As if responding to her words, the ground beneath them shimmered"
5"looked like liquid silver set into the ea"
6"looked like a tear in reality itself"
7"symbols that seemed to move when viewed from the corner of the eye"
8"he canopy, but seemingly of its own accord"
9"notes that seemed to vibrate through Aurora's very bones"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords3.324
wordCount1504
matches
0"not made of traditional rock, but of living oak trees"
1"Not quite magic as she understood it from her encounters in Dymas, but something wilder, less controlled"
2"not what is seen, but what needs seeing"
3"not as she was now, but wielding the Fae blade against a shadow"
4"not with the sun, which was barely visible through the canopy, but seemingly of its own accord"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
88.29% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean30.69
std14.09
cv0.459
sampleLengths
044
132
233
327
446
527
635
757
814
920
1065
1140
1232
1324
1422
1544
1617
1717
1849
1917
2011
2134
2252
2311
2424
2510
2645
2733
2844
2912
3046
315
3225
3348
3450
3518
3610
3728
3825
3913
4047
4132
4236
4325
4424
4529
4628
4749
4828
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"was etched"
1"been shown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was evaluating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences98
ratio0.112
matches
0"Aurora felt it first—a tingling across her skin, like static electricity but gentler, more deliberate."
1"As they ventured deeper, the ordinary sounds of Richmond Park—distant traffic, dog walkers, the occasional aircraft overhead—faded completely."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in patches of color too vibrant to be natural—blues that shifted like deep ocean waters, purples that seemed to emit their own light, yellows that dazzled the eye."
3"Patterns formed and reformed on its surface, showing faces, landscapes, creatures—all flowing into one another in a dizzying display."
4"For a moment, she saw herself reflected—not as she was now, but wielding the Fae blade against a shadow that wasn't Nyx, standing before what looked like a tear in reality itself."
5"The light rose from the pool in tendrils, forming shapes in the air around them—delicate, translucent creatures that resembled dragonflies but with humanoid faces and bodies that trailed off into wisps of light."
6"Aurora felt a tug on the Heartstone Pendant—it had risen from her chest and now hovered slightly, pointing toward the northern edge of the circle."
7"\"Forgotten. Even by me.\" Something in her voice had changed—the first hint of uncertainty Aurora had ever heard from the oracle."
8"As they watched, the shadow on the dial moved—not with the sun, which was barely visible through the canopy, but seemingly of its own accord."
9"In the distance, beyond the boundaries of the Grove, a bell began to toll—deep, resonant notes that seemed to vibrate through Aurora's very bones."
10"But something had fundamentally changed—Aurora could feel it in the air, in the watchful presence of the Grove around them."
96.49% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1187
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.04380791912384162
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.020219039595619208
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean15.35
std7.41
cv0.483
sampleLengths
012
115
217
315
417
515
618
718
89
925
1021
1114
1213
1314
1421
1518
1639
1714
183
1917
2016
2132
2217
2340
2415
2517
2616
278
284
2918
309
311
323
3317
3414
3517
362
3715
3811
3919
4019
4111
426
436
445
4523
4611
4710
4832
4910
56.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37755102040816324
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences73
matches
0"They seemed more substantial here,"
1"they observed, their voice like"
2"Her silver hair caught what"
3"she cautioned, not turning back"
4"It felt ancient and aware,"
5"she said, turning slowly to"
6"she asked, looking up at"
7"she said, following the pendant's"
8"Its surface was etched with"
9"They had been shown a"
ratio0.137
69.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences73
matches
0"The air changed as they"
1"Aurora felt it first—a tingling"
2"The forest around them shifted"
3"Aurora whispered, instinctively reaching for"
4"Nyx moved beside her, their"
5"They seemed more substantial here,"
6"they observed, their voice like"
7"Isolde walked ahead of them"
8"Her silver hair caught what"
9"she cautioned, not turning back"
10"Aurora adjusted the Fae-Forged Blade"
11"The weapon had never felt"
12"Aurora asked, her voice sounding"
13"Isolde smiled enigmatically."
14"The path widened before them,"
15"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
16"Isolde explained, approaching the stones"
17"Nyx drifted toward the nearest"
18"Aurora stepped into the circle,"
19"It felt ancient and aware,"
ratio0.781
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Though forged in Dymas, not"
1"As if responding to her"
ratio0.027
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The weapon had never felt more alive than it did now, humming faintly against her side as if recognizing its homeland."
1"In their place came a symphony of unfamiliar sounds: wind chimes with no visible source, melodic chirping of birds Aurora couldn't identify, and beneath it all,…"
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in patches of color too vibrant to be natural—blues that shifted like deep ocean waters, purples that seemed to emit their own l…"
3"At the center of the clearing stood a circle of standing stones, not made of traditional rock, but of living oak trees that had somehow grown in perfect geometr…"
4"It felt ancient and aware, as if the very air was evaluating her presence."
5"As if responding to her words, the ground beneath them shimmered."
6"For a moment, she saw herself reflected—not as she was now, but wielding the Fae blade against a shadow that wasn't Nyx, standing before what looked like a tear…"
7"The light rose from the pool in tendrils, forming shapes in the air around them—delicate, translucent creatures that resembled dragonflies but with humanoid fac…"
8"The sprites danced around them, their movements creating patterns of light that hung in the air like luminous calligraphy."
9"The sprites that had led them here now formed a ring above the Chronolith, their light casting the symbols into sharp relief."
10"Aurora looked from the Chronolith to her companions, feeling the weight of discovery settling over her."
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she cautioned, not turning back to look at them"
1"Aurora asked, her voice sounding oddly flat in the Grove's atmosphere"
2"Isolde breathed, her composure slipping further"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
1"they observed (observe)"
2"Isolde explained (explain)"
3"Isolde agreed (agree)"
4"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
5"Nyx observed (observe)"
6"Isolde corrected (correct)"
7"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
8"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.429
68.1659%