| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 75.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1006 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1006 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "down her spine" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "enigmatic" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "apprehension" | | 16 | "unreadable" | | 17 | "trepidation" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A shiver ran down her spine" | | 1 | "eyes narrowed" |
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| 72.92% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "y with warmth" | | 2 | "e with wonder" |
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| 83.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1004 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 695 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 6 | | Aurora | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 8 | | Half-Fae | 3 | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Veil | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.709 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite tell" | | 1 | "quite shake the sense that they were being watched, the hairs on the back of her neck standing on end" | | 2 | "d and shifted, seemingly drawn toward the an" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1004 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.52% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 37.19 | | std | 13.06 | | cv | 0.351 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 70 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 26 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "was broken" | | 1 | "being watched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.90% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 698 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.04011461318051576 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015759312320916905 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 96.39% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 15.69 | | std | 6.13 | | cv | 0.391 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 59.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 1 | "she intoned, her silvery hair" | | 2 | "she murmured, more to herself" | | 3 | "She couldn't quite shake the" | | 4 | "She gestured around the Grove," | | 5 | "she breathed, awestruck" | | 6 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 7 | "Her lips curved in a" | | 8 | "She stumbled, her senses reeling," | | 9 | "she gasped, her bright blue" |
| | ratio | 0.208 | |
| 64.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "The eerie silence of the" | | 1 | "Rory murmured, her bright blue" | | 2 | "A shiver ran down her" | | 3 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 4 | "Isolde, the mysterious Half-Fae seer," | | 5 | "she intoned, her silvery hair" | | 6 | "Rory's fingers unconsciously drifted to" | | 7 | "she murmured, more to herself" | | 8 | "Isolde's pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 9 | "Nyx drifted closer, their silhouette" | | 10 | "The Half-Fae seer inclined her" | | 11 | "Rory felt a prickling of" | | 12 | "She couldn't quite shake the" | | 13 | "Isolde's lips curved in a" | | 14 | "She gestured around the Grove," | | 15 | "Nyx's shadowy form flickered and" | | 16 | "Rory's hand tightened around the" | | 17 | "Wildflowers in shades of violet," | | 18 | "Rory paused, her gaze drawn" | | 19 | "she breathed, awestruck" |
| | ratio | 0.792 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's fingers unconsciously drifted to the crimson Heartstone pendant that hung around her neck, the gem pulsing faintly with warmth against her skin." | | 1 | "Isolde's pale lavender eyes fixed on the pendant, a glimmer of something that might have been satisfaction flickering across her ageless features." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted closer, their silhouette shifting and rippling like smoke on the breeze." | | 3 | "Wildflowers in shades of violet, indigo, and silver blanketed the forest floor, their petals shimmering as if dusted with starlight." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice a soft susurrus carried on the wind" | | 1 | "she murmured, more to herself than the others" | | 2 | "She gestured around, her silver hair shimmering like moonlight" | | 3 | "she breathed, awestruck" | | 4 | "she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "she gasped (gasp)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |