| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora's whisper echoed strangely [strangely]" | | 1 | "She turned slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 73.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 747 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "precisely" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 747 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "carried the weight" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "race" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "resonated" | | 14 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.17% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 752 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.84% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 578 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Nyx | 4 | | Aurora | 11 | | Fae-Forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.548 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quality that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 1 | "melody that seemed to emerge from the very air itself" | | 2 | "looked like black glass, reflecting the i" | | 3 | "seemed more alive here, more present, as if it recognized something of its origin in this place between worlds" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.66 | | wordCount | 752 | | matches | | 0 | "Neither fully in your world nor" | | 1 | "not fireflies, but tiny motes of pure radiance" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.21% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 32.7 | | std | 12.48 | | cv | 0.382 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 95 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 49 | | ratio | 0.163 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment they crossed the threshold - thicker, sweeter, charged with something that made Aurora's hair stand on end." | | 1 | "The trees here were unlike anything she'd seen before - their trunks spiraled upward in graceful helixes, branches weaving together to form natural archways overhead." | | 2 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colors - petals that shifted from deep purple to electric blue with each breath of wind, stems that curved in perfect geometric patterns." | | 3 | "A cluster of lights danced through the air - not fireflies, but tiny motes of pure radiance that chimed like crystal when they passed." | | 4 | "The path beneath their feet shifted constantly - sometimes moss-covered stone, sometimes soft grass scattered with petals, sometimes bare earth that sparkled with threads of silver." | | 5 | "A sound drifted through the grove - music without instruments, a melody that seemed to emerge from the very air itself." | | 6 | "Around its edges, wildflowers bloomed in every color imaginable - and some Aurora's mind struggled to process." | | 7 | "A breeze carried the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something else - something ancient and wild that made Aurora's heart race with equal parts fear and exhilaration." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 574 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.03484320557491289 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008710801393728223 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 49 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 90.84% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 49 | | mean | 15.35 | | std | 5.79 | | cv | 0.377 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 24 |
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| 67.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.42857142857142855 | | totalSentences | 49 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | 0 | "She drew back, rubbing her" | | 1 | "Her bare feet made no" | | 2 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 3 | "She turned slowly, trying to" | | 4 | "They came to a clearing" |
| | ratio | 0.132 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed before" | | 1 | "Aurora's Heartstone pendant pulsed with" | | 2 | "Isolde's silver hair caught the" | | 3 | "Nyx's shadowy form rippled." | | 4 | "Aurora brushed her fingers across" | | 5 | "The wood felt alive beneath" | | 6 | "She drew back, rubbing her" | | 7 | "Isolde stepped between two of" | | 8 | "Her bare feet made no" | | 9 | "Aurora followed, with Nyx gliding" | | 10 | "The air changed the moment" | | 11 | "The evening light shifted, taking" | | 12 | "Aurora's whisper echoed strangely, as" | | 13 | "The trees here were unlike" | | 14 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colors" | | 15 | "Isolde's voice carried the weight" | | 16 | "A cluster of lights danced" | | 17 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 18 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 19 | "The path beneath their feet" |
| | ratio | 0.947 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The wood felt alive beneath her touch, thrumming with an otherworldly energy that made her skin tingle." | | 1 | "The air changed the moment they crossed the threshold - thicker, sweeter, charged with something that made Aurora's hair stand on end." | | 2 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colors - petals that shifted from deep purple to electric blue with each breath of wind, stems that curved in perfect geometric pa…" | | 3 | "The path beneath their feet shifted constantly - sometimes moss-covered stone, sometimes soft grass scattered with petals, sometimes bare earth that sparkled wi…" | | 4 | "Aurora felt it in her bones, a song that spoke of ancient magic and forgotten paths between worlds." | | 5 | "The weapon seemed more alive here, more present, as if it recognized something of its origin in this place between worlds." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's whisper echoed strangely, as if the grove itself was listening" | | 1 | "She turned slowly, trying to locate the source" | | 2 | "Nyx observed, their violet eyes brightening" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 1 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |