Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFT3WDMG0KWKBCK40S0

Run Details

Duration:
36.7s
Cost:
$0.043860
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed before them, ancient oaks twisted into impossible shapes by centuries of Fae magic. Aurora's Heartstone pendant pulsed with a steady warmth against her chest as she approached the boundary of Isolde's grove. "The stones mark the threshold." Isolde's silver hair caught the last rays of sunset. "Once we cross, time flows differently. Stay close." Nyx's shadowy form rippled. "The Veil is thin here. I can feel it." Aurora brushed her fingers across the bark of the nearest stone. The wood felt alive beneath her touch, thrumming with an otherworldly energy that made her skin tingle. She drew back, rubbing her fingertips together. "Through here." Isolde stepped between two of the stones. Her bare feet made no impression in the earth as she passed. Aurora followed, with Nyx gliding behind like a dark mist. The air changed the moment they crossed the threshold - thicker, sweeter, charged with something that made Aurora's hair stand on end. The evening light shifted, taking on an opalescent quality that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. "This can't be Richmond Park anymore." Aurora's whisper echoed strangely, as if the grove itself was listening. The trees here were unlike anything she'd seen before - their trunks spiraled upward in graceful helixes, branches weaving together to form natural archways overhead. Flowers bloomed in impossible colors - petals that shifted from deep purple to electric blue with each breath of wind, stems that curved in perfect geometric patterns. "The grove exists between realms." Isolde's voice carried the weight of centuries. "Neither fully in your world nor in the courts of my kin." A cluster of lights danced through the air - not fireflies, but tiny motes of pure radiance that chimed like crystal when they passed. Aurora reached out to touch one, but it darted away, leaving a trail of sparks that faded into nothing. "The lights are drawn to mortal wonder." Isolde smiled. "They've been lonely for company." They ventured deeper into the grove. The path beneath their feet shifted constantly - sometimes moss-covered stone, sometimes soft grass scattered with petals, sometimes bare earth that sparkled with threads of silver. Mushrooms grew in concentric circles, their caps phosphorescent in shades of green and gold. Nyx drifted closer to one of the spiral trees, their shadowy form reflecting in the mirror-smooth bark. "The barriers between shadows are... different here. Fluid. I could slip through them like water." A sound drifted through the grove - music without instruments, a melody that seemed to emerge from the very air itself. Aurora felt it in her bones, a song that spoke of ancient magic and forgotten paths between worlds. "What is that?" She turned slowly, trying to locate the source. "The grove's heartbeat." Isolde swept her hand through the air, leaving trailing ribbons of light. "It remembers every visitor, every secret whispered beneath these boughs. Time pools here like water in a stone basin." They came to a clearing where the ground dipped into a natural amphitheater. At its center stood a pool of water so still it looked like black glass, reflecting the impossible sky above. Around its edges, wildflowers bloomed in every color imaginable - and some Aurora's mind struggled to process. "Don't look too long at the flowers that seem to shift between colors," Isolde warned. "They exist in multiple moments at once. Your mortal mind wasn't meant to comprehend such things." Aurora's Fae-Forged blade grew cold at her hip, its moonsilver surface catching and amplifying the otherworldly light. The weapon seemed more alive here, more present, as if it recognized something of its origin in this place between worlds. A breeze carried the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something else - something ancient and wild that made Aurora's heart race with equal parts fear and exhilaration. This was a place of power, she realized. A place where the normal rules of reality grew thin and fragile as spider silk. The Heartstone's warmth intensified, its crimson glow visible even through her clothing. Something about this place resonated with it, called to it. Aurora placed her hand over the pendant, feeling its steady pulse sync with the grove's ethereal music. "The veil parts easily here," Nyx observed, their violet eyes brightening. "We could step through to almost anywhere - Hel, the Fae Courts, places with no names in mortal tongues." "And that," Isolde said, "is precisely why we must tread carefully. Power draws power, and not all that walks between worlds means us well."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora's whisper echoed strangely [strangely]"
1"She turned slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
73.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount747
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"precisely"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount747
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"otherworldly"
count2
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"carried the weight"
count1
10
word"crystal"
count1
11
word"race"
count1
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"resonated"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"otherworldly"
4"charged"
5"whisper"
6"echoed"
7"electric"
8"perfect"
9"carried the weight"
10"crystal"
11"race"
12"silk"
13"resonated"
14"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences41
matches(empty)
73.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences41
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences49
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords752
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount578
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Heartstone2
Isolde8
Nyx4
Aurora11
Fae-Forged1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.548
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quality that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
1"melody that seemed to emerge from the very air itself"
2"looked like black glass, reflecting the i"
3"seemed more alive here, more present, as if it recognized something of its origin in this place between worlds"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.66
wordCount752
matches
0"Neither fully in your world nor"
1"not fireflies, but tiny motes of pure radiance"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
66.21% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean32.7
std12.48
cv0.382
sampleLengths
036
122
213
335
421
551
617
752
824
943
1014
1146
1232
1339
1411
1534
1650
1731
1838
1950
2039
2130
2224
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs95
matches
0"was listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences49
ratio0.163
matches
0"The air changed the moment they crossed the threshold - thicker, sweeter, charged with something that made Aurora's hair stand on end."
1"The trees here were unlike anything she'd seen before - their trunks spiraled upward in graceful helixes, branches weaving together to form natural archways overhead."
2"Flowers bloomed in impossible colors - petals that shifted from deep purple to electric blue with each breath of wind, stems that curved in perfect geometric patterns."
3"A cluster of lights danced through the air - not fireflies, but tiny motes of pure radiance that chimed like crystal when they passed."
4"The path beneath their feet shifted constantly - sometimes moss-covered stone, sometimes soft grass scattered with petals, sometimes bare earth that sparkled with threads of silver."
5"A sound drifted through the grove - music without instruments, a melody that seemed to emerge from the very air itself."
6"Around its edges, wildflowers bloomed in every color imaginable - and some Aurora's mind struggled to process."
7"A breeze carried the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something else - something ancient and wild that made Aurora's heart race with equal parts fear and exhilaration."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount574
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03484320557491289
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008710801393728223
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
90.84% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean15.35
std5.79
cv0.377
sampleLengths
017
119
214
38
44
59
611
717
87
99
1012
1110
1222
1319
1417
1525
1627
1712
1812
1924
2019
219
225
236
2426
2514
2617
2715
2821
2918
3011
3115
3219
3313
3420
3517
3615
3716
3817
3921
4027
418
4215
4312
4410
4517
4611
4719
4824
67.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences38
matches
0"She drew back, rubbing her"
1"Her bare feet made no"
2"They ventured deeper into the"
3"She turned slowly, trying to"
4"They came to a clearing"
ratio0.132
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences38
matches
0"The standing stones loomed before"
1"Aurora's Heartstone pendant pulsed with"
2"Isolde's silver hair caught the"
3"Nyx's shadowy form rippled."
4"Aurora brushed her fingers across"
5"The wood felt alive beneath"
6"She drew back, rubbing her"
7"Isolde stepped between two of"
8"Her bare feet made no"
9"Aurora followed, with Nyx gliding"
10"The air changed the moment"
11"The evening light shifted, taking"
12"Aurora's whisper echoed strangely, as"
13"The trees here were unlike"
14"Flowers bloomed in impossible colors"
15"Isolde's voice carried the weight"
16"A cluster of lights danced"
17"Aurora reached out to touch"
18"They ventured deeper into the"
19"The path beneath their feet"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The wood felt alive beneath her touch, thrumming with an otherworldly energy that made her skin tingle."
1"The air changed the moment they crossed the threshold - thicker, sweeter, charged with something that made Aurora's hair stand on end."
2"Flowers bloomed in impossible colors - petals that shifted from deep purple to electric blue with each breath of wind, stems that curved in perfect geometric pa…"
3"The path beneath their feet shifted constantly - sometimes moss-covered stone, sometimes soft grass scattered with petals, sometimes bare earth that sparkled wi…"
4"Aurora felt it in her bones, a song that spoke of ancient magic and forgotten paths between worlds."
5"The weapon seemed more alive here, more present, as if it recognized something of its origin in this place between worlds."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora's whisper echoed strangely, as if the grove itself was listening"
1"She turned slowly, trying to locate the source"
2"Nyx observed, their violet eyes brightening"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde warned (warn)"
1"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.222
58.8175%