Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFT8HYDJ6V9REE0V0YT

Run Details

Duration:
20.8s
Cost:
$0.003073
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory gripped the door handle, her knuckles turning white. The last person she expected to see on the other side was Lucien Moreau, his sharp features framed by the dimly lit hallway. "What the hell are you doing here?" The words caught in her throat. Lucien's mismatched eyes were unreadable as he leaned casually against the doorframe, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his ever-present cane. "Hello, Laila. Aren't you going to invite me in?" Rory's jaw tightened at the sound of her old name. She'd spent years burying that part of her life, the person she used to be. With a resigned sigh, she stepped aside, allowing him to sweep past her into the cramped flat. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, lifted his head with a curious meow, whiskers twitching as he studied the intruder. Lucien paused to give the feline a brief scratch under the chin before continuing deeper into the space, his polished shoes clicking against the hardwood floor. Rory closed the door, meeting his gaze reluctantly. "What do you want, Lucien?" His lips curved into a sardonic smile. "Can't an old friend simply drop by for a visit?" "We stopped being friends a long time ago." Rory folded her arms across her chest, attempting to project an air of nonchalance that she didn't feel. Her heart pounded in her ears, memories of their last encounter flooding her senses. The hurt, the betrayal... She forced those feelings down, unwilling to let him see how much he still affected her. Lucien's expression darkened briefly, a flash of something that might have been regret crossing his features before he schooled his face into a mask of indifference. "Perhaps. But I find myself in need of your particular set of skills." Rory arched a brow, her curiosity piqued despite herself. "My skills?" She couldn't deny a slight thrill at the prospect of being drawn back into the supernatural world she'd so carefully distanced herself from. But she knew better than to trust Lucien, no matter how tempting the offer. "Yes." Lucien's gaze swept over her, his intense stare making her shift uncomfortably. "I require your assistance with a...delicate matter." "And what makes you think I'd be willing to help you?" Rory challenged, her tone hardening. She may have once been drawn to the enigmatic Half-Demon, but those days were long gone. She didn't owe him anything. Lucien's lips quirked in a half-smile. "Because, my dear Laila, you're the only one I can trust." Rory's eyes narrowed at the endearment, her fingers curling into fists at her sides. "That's not my name anymore." She took a step closer, heat rising in her cheeks. "And I think you've proven time and again that you're the last person I should trust." Lucien's expression softened, a flicker of genuine emotion passing across his features. "Rory, then. Please, I...I need your help." There was an uncharacteristic note of vulnerability in his voice that caught her off guard. Rory hesitated, her resolve wavering despite her better judgment. Lucien had hurt her, betrayed her trust in ways she'd never truly forgiven. But she couldn't deny that part of her still cared for him, still yearned for the connection they'd once shared. Damn him. With a resigned sigh, she pinched the bridge of her nose. "What kind of 'delicate matter' are we talking about?" Lucien's face lit up with a triumphant smile, and Rory cursed herself for her weakness. She knew she was going to regret this. "It's a matter of life and death, I'm afraid." Lucien's expression grew serious once more. "There's been...an incident. I need your help to uncover the truth before it's too late." Rory felt a shiver of apprehension run down her spine. "Who's in danger?" Lucien's gaze held hers, his eyes boring into her with an intensity that made her heart skip a beat. "You are." Rory's breath caught in her throat, the blood draining from her face. "What do you mean, I'm in danger?" Lucien stepped closer, his fingers brushing against her arm in a gesture that was almost tender. "It's a long story, and one I'd rather not get into here. But someone is after you, Rory. And I'm the only one who can protect you." Rory's mind raced, a thousand questions swirling in her head. Who would want to hurt her? And why now, after all these years? She glanced around the flat, suddenly hyper-aware of every shadow, every sound. "Why should I trust you?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "After everything that happened between us..." Lucien's expression softened, and he reached out to gently cup her cheek. "Because I still care about you, Rory. More than you know." His thumb traced the line of her cheekbone, and Rory felt her pulse quicken at his touch. Rory searched his face, looking for any trace of deception. But all she saw was the raw sincerity in his mismatched eyes. Against her better judgment, she found herself leaning into his touch, her own hand coming up to cover his. "Alright," she breathed, her voice barely audible. "I'll help you. But if this is some kind of trick, Lucien..." "It's not," he interrupted, his grip on her tightening slightly. "I give you my word." Rory nodded, her heart pounding in her chest. She couldn't believe she was doing this, couldn't believe she was letting him back into her life after all this time. But the thought of being in danger, of someone wanting to hurt her... She had to trust him. For now, at least. With a resigned sigh, she stepped back, breaking the connection between them. "So, what's the plan?" Lucien's lips curved into a small smile, and Rory couldn't help but feel a flash of unease. Whatever he had in mind, she knew it was going to be anything but simple. But as she met his gaze, she couldn't deny the thrill of anticipation that coursed through her. After all this time, she was finally going to get some answers. And maybe, just maybe, she could finally find the closure she'd been searching for.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:26:41.42Z" 2/19/2026, 3:26:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.379
leniency0.759
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
65.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1021
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"reluctantly"
1"carefully"
2"truly"
3"suddenly"
4"barely above a whisper"
5"gently"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1021
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"encounter"
count1
2
word"mask of indifference"
count1
3
word"enigmatic"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count1
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"apprehension"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"encounter"
2"mask of indifference"
3"enigmatic"
4"flicker"
5"resolve"
6"wavering"
7"apprehension"
8"down her spine"
9"intensity"
10"raced"
11"whisper"
12"traced"
13"pulse"
14"pounding"
15"anticipation"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"couldn't help but feel"
98.54% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences63
matches
0"felt a shiver"
1"the thrill of anticipation"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1017
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount787
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien15
Moreau1
Eva1
Rory16
Half-Demon1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.483
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1017
matches(empty)
83.33% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"burying that part"
1"deny that part"
80.07% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean29.91
std12.87
cv0.43
sampleLengths
032
113
232
342
444
513
617
760
839
948
1020
1137
1217
1345
1434
1544
1620
1723
1830
1913
2021
2119
2243
2335
2419
2540
2641
2719
2815
2942
309
3116
3232
3343
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"being drawn"
1"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was doing was letting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences80
ratio0
matches(empty)
98.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount791
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.041719342604298354
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.017699115044247787
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean12.71
std6.2
cv0.487
sampleLengths
09
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213
323
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510
615
717
818
926
108
115
127
1310
1426
1514
164
1716
1826
1913
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2125
2214
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247
2516
2616
275
286
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3014
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3216
3312
3422
359
3613
3720
382
3911
409
4115
428
4315
4415
4510
463
4719
482
4912
64.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences62
matches
0"She'd spent years burying that"
1"His lips curved into a"
2"Her heart pounded in her"
3"She forced those feelings down,"
4"She couldn't deny a slight"
5"She may have once been"
6"She didn't owe him anything."
7"She took a step closer,"
8"She knew she was going"
9"She glanced around the flat,"
10"she asked, her voice barely"
11"His thumb traced the line"
12"she breathed, her voice barely"
13"he interrupted, his grip on"
14"She couldn't believe she was"
15"She had to trust him."
ratio0.258
80.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences62
matches
0"Rory gripped the door handle,"
1"The last person she expected"
2"The words caught in her"
3"Lucien's mismatched eyes were unreadable"
4"Rory's jaw tightened at the"
5"She'd spent years burying that"
6"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, lifted"
7"Lucien paused to give the"
8"Rory closed the door, meeting"
9"His lips curved into a"
10"Rory folded her arms across"
11"Her heart pounded in her"
12"The hurt, the betrayal..."
13"She forced those feelings down,"
14"Lucien's expression darkened briefly, a"
15"Rory arched a brow, her"
16"She couldn't deny a slight"
17"Lucien's gaze swept over her,"
18"Rory challenged, her tone hardening"
19"She may have once been"
ratio0.758
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien's expression darkened briefly, a flash of something that might have been regret crossing his features before he schooled his face into a mask of indiffer…"
1"Lucien's gaze held hers, his eyes boring into her with an intensity that made her heart skip a beat."
2"Lucien stepped closer, his fingers brushing against her arm in a gesture that was almost tender."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Lucien's gaze swept, his intense stare making her shift uncomfortably"
1"Rory challenged, her tone hardening"
2"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"she breathed, her voice barely audible"
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory challenged (challenge)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"he interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.138
leniency0.276
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.207
77.2316%