| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "My voice cracked slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.889 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 88.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 846 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 846 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "amiss" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "unwavering" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "ensuring" | | 10 | "echoing" | | 11 | "enigmatic" | | 12 | "glint" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 833 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "As if he could hear my thoughts, Lucien chuckled." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 618 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.81 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 4 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Lucien | 5 | | Did | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Moreau" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 833 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 97.30% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 41.65 | | std | 20.43 | | cv | 0.491 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 90 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 57 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 18 |
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| 84.62% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was settled" | | 2 | "been disturbed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 115 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 54 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "But something was off—an acute absence of clutter in one corner of the room." | | 1 | "A quick glance confirmed Eva's absence; her cherry-coloured silk robe was missing from its usual hook." | | 2 | "I thought it was settled—that both Eva and I had moved on." | | 3 | "\"Didn't mean to scare the cat—or the living daylights out of you, apparently.\" He held up his hands to show he was unarmed—no cane, no grimoires; nothing but the pure audacity of letting himself into the flat unannounced." | | 4 | "\"Who is it? What exactly do they know?\" A part of me hoped it wasn't him—that sly smile and enigmatic glint could conceal any truth." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 563 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.03019538188277087 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019538188277087035 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 54 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 54 | | mean | 15.43 | | std | 8.73 | | cv | 0.566 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 39 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.7037037037037037 | | totalSentences | 54 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 52.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "My stomach dropped as I" | | 1 | "My voice cracked slightly as" | | 2 | "He did not even flinch" | | 3 | "Their intrusive jingling was a" | | 4 | "I spotted a note wedged" | | 5 | "my eyes skimmed" | | 6 | "I stopped mid-sentence, my mouth" | | 7 | "I repeated in my head," | | 8 | "I hurled the scrunched-up paper" | | 9 | "I thought it was settled—that" | | 10 | "His dark brow arched in" | | 11 | "He held up his hands" | | 12 | "I demanded, now with added" | | 13 | "My pulse quickened at the" | | 14 | "He lowered his voice, his" | | 15 | "My eyes darted, ensuring nothing" | | 16 | "His sly grin taunted my" | | 17 | "He took a step closer," | | 18 | "My pulse quickened again at" | | 19 | "He waved his hand, a" |
| | ratio | 0.42 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar sound of the" | | 1 | "Ptolemy's usual running leaps into" | | 2 | "My stomach dropped as I" | | 3 | "The scent of ink and" | | 4 | "Sunlight sliced through the room," | | 5 | "A particular stack of boxes," | | 6 | "My voice cracked slightly as" | | 7 | "Ptolemy finally strolled into view" | | 8 | "He did not even flinch" | | 9 | "Their intrusive jingling was a" | | 10 | "A quick glance confirmed Eva's" | | 11 | "I spotted a note wedged" | | 12 | "my eyes skimmed" | | 13 | "I stopped mid-sentence, my mouth" | | 14 | "Those words could only mean" | | 15 | "I repeated in my head," | | 16 | "I hurled the scrunched-up paper" | | 17 | "I thought it was settled—that" | | 18 | "A loud crash from outside" | | 19 | "His dark brow arched in" |
| | ratio | 0.68 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "If he knew about my" | | 1 | "As if he could hear" | | 2 | "Yet, here he was, offering" |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "In London's supernatural underworld, he was the trusted informer, the fixer for hire, who spoke four tongues with fluid eloquence." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien grinned, his heterochromatic gaze unwavering" | | 1 | "He lowered, his expression turning serious" | | 2 | "Lucien's expression softened, a hint of familiarity creeping into his voice" | | 3 | "He waved, a grand gesture bordering on mockery" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "I demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "I exclaimed (exclaim)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |