Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFWTFHGG6QCRTGC4774

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell rang, shattering the silence of Rory's flat. She frowned, setting down the book she'd been trying to focus on for the past hour. It was too late for Eva to be stopping by unannounced. Cautiously, she approached the door. "Who's there?" she called through the wood, hoping her voice didn't tremble. "It's Lucien." The deep, accented voice sent a shiver down her spine. "We need to talk." Rory hesitated, her hand hovering over the deadbolts. She hadn't seen Lucien since that night two months ago when everything fell apart. The memory of his heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, still haunted her dreams. She sighed and undid the locks. As the door swung open, Lucien's presence seemed to fill the doorway. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his slicked-back platinum hair gleaming under the hall light. "Invite me in, chérie," he murmured, a wry smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. Rory resisted the urge to slap that smirk right off his face. Instead, she stepped aside, gesturing for him to enter. "You have five minutes. Start talking." Lucien sauntered in, his tailored charcoal suit brushing against her as he passed. Rory's heart raced, anger and something darker curling in her gut. "I'm glad to see you're still as hospitable as ever," Lucien drawled, glancing around her cluttered living room. His gaze lingered on the scattered books and papers. "Still chasing lost causes, I see." "Your five minutes start now," Rory spat, crossing her arms. She wouldn't let him bait her. Not this time. Lucien turned to face her, his expression sobering. "I have information about Evan. About what happened that night." Rory's blood ran cold. Evan. Her abusive ex who'd nearly broken her. The man Lucien had saved her from... and then betrayed her trust. "I don't want to know," she whispered, shaking her head. "I'm done with that life. With both of you." Lucien's jaw tightened. "Whether you want it or not, it's coming for you, Aurora. Evan's trial starts next week. You're listed as the star witness." "The hell I am," Rory snarled, panic rising in her throat. She'd signed a confidentiality agreement, taken a new name. "I didn't agree to this." "You think you can just run away from your past?" Lucien's voice dripped with disdain. "Grow up, Rory. This is the real world. Evan's victims deserve justice." "His other victims!" Rory shouted, bile stinging her tongue. She shoved Lucien's chest, hard. "I'm not his only one, am I? How many others did you 'save', Lucien? How many women have you used for information?" Lucien grabbed her wrists, his grip searing her skin. "You want to know why I'm really here?" He leaned in close, his breath hot against her ear. "Evan's lawyer is going to rip you to shreds on that stand. You need me. You need what I know to survive this." Rory wrenched free, stumbling back. "I don't need you," she hissed, rubbing her wrists. "I'll bring down Evan myself if I have to. Without your lies." "Oh, come off it," Lucien scoffed, rolling his eyes. "You don't have the stomach for that. You think I do this because it's fun?" He stepped forward, backing her towards the wall. "You think I like crawling through the filth so people like you can sleep at night?" Rory's back hit the plaster with a soft thud. She glared up at him, chest heaving. "Screw you, Lucien. I'm not someone you can just—" Her words died as Lucien's lips crashed into hers. The kiss was brutal and desperate, a tangle of anger and need. Rory gasped, sparks exploding behind her eyes. She hated him. She hated him so much. But god, she'd missed the feel of him against her, the dark desire he stirred in her core. Lucien's hand fisted in her hair, tilting her head back. He nipped down her jaw, his teeth grazing her pulse point. "I need you, chérie," he panted, his free hand sliding up her thigh. "Let me in." A moan tore from Rory's throat as his fingers brushed her center. She was already wet, already aching. Lucien groaned, palming her through her jeans. "This is a mistake," Rory whispered, even as she rocked into his touch. "We're a mistake." "The best ones always are," Lucien breathed, popping the button on her fly. His fingers slid under her panties, rubbing slow circles. "Come for me, sweetheart. Show me what I've been missing." Rory's eyes rolled back as he worked her, stroking deep. She was so turned on, so ready to explode. She hated how good he was at this. Hated how he could make her body sing when her heart screamed to stop. "Lucien," she gasped, fingers scrabbling at his shoulders. "I'm—oh god—" Her climax ripped through her, white-hot and blinding. Lucien swallowed her cry with another filthy kiss, pumping his fingers to wring out her pleasure. When he finally pulled back, leaving her limp against the wall, Rory felt utterly demolished. Lucien's eyes glittered with dark satisfaction, a wicked smile curving his lips. "Now," he purred, nuzzling her cheek. "Where were we?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount860
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"really"
2"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount860
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"raced"
count1
4
word"searing"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"desire"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"pumping"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"down her spine"
2"gleaming"
3"raced"
4"searing"
5"stomach"
6"desire"
7"pulse"
8"pumping"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords856
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount588
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.89
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Eva1
Lucien17
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.054
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount856
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
63.85% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean26.75
std9.99
cv0.373
sampleLengths
041
112
216
337
433
516
627
724
833
919
1018
1124
1219
1325
1425
1527
1636
1750
1826
1948
2025
2128
2226
2337
2425
2516
2632
2741
2810
2924
3027
319
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences86
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount591
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03553299492385787
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008460236886632826
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean9.95
std4.83
cv0.485
sampleLengths
09
116
211
35
412
512
64
78
814
915
106
1112
1215
1316
1412
159
166
1713
1811
1918
209
216
2210
236
243
258
2610
274
281
297
307
315
3210
339
343
3522
3611
379
385
3915
4012
419
425
4322
449
4518
4623
475
489
4912
60.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3953488372093023
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners34
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Cautiously, she approached the door."
1"Instead, she stepped aside, gesturing"
ratio0.03
46.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences67
matches
0"She frowned, setting down the"
1"It was too late for"
2"she called through the wood,"
3"She hadn't seen Lucien since"
4"She sighed and undid the"
5"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
6"he murmured, a wry smile"
7"His gaze lingered on the"
8"She wouldn't let him bait"
9"Her abusive ex who'd nearly"
10"she whispered, shaking her head"
11"She'd signed a confidentiality agreement,"
12"She shoved Lucien's chest, hard."
13"He leaned in close, his"
14"she hissed, rubbing her wrists"
15"He stepped forward, backing her"
16"She glared up at him,"
17"Her words died as Lucien's"
18"She hated him."
19"She hated him so much."
ratio0.433
19.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences67
matches
0"The doorbell rang, shattering the"
1"She frowned, setting down the"
2"It was too late for"
3"she called through the wood,"
4"The deep, accented voice sent"
5"Rory hesitated, her hand hovering"
6"She hadn't seen Lucien since"
7"The memory of his heterochromatic"
8"She sighed and undid the"
9"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
10"he murmured, a wry smile"
11"Rory resisted the urge to"
12"Lucien sauntered in, his tailored"
13"Rory's heart raced, anger and"
14"Lucien drawled, glancing around her"
15"His gaze lingered on the"
16"Rory spat, crossing her arms"
17"She wouldn't let him bait"
18"Lucien turned to face her,"
19"Rory's blood ran cold."
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he murmured, a wry smile tugging at the corners of his mouth"
1"Rory shouted, bile stinging her tongue"
2"He leaned, his breath hot against her ear"
3"he panted, his free hand sliding up her thigh"
4"she gasped, fingers scrabbling at his shoulders"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien drawled (drawl)"
2"Rory spat (spit)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"Rory snarled (snarl)"
5"Rory shouted (shout)"
6"she hissed (hiss)"
7"he panted (pant)"
8"Rory whispered (whisper)"
9"Lucien breathed (breathe)"
10"she gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.917
effectiveRatio0.611
76.2299%