Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFWVR7Y8CRAFPJHB1TG

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Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.038650
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's hand froze on the doorknob, her breath catching in her throat. The three deadbolts clinked as she unlocked them, each sound echoing in the cramped hallway. She swung the door open, and there he stood — Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, with his heterochromatic eyes and tailored charcoal suit. His ivory-handled cane tapped lightly against the floor. "Bonsoir, Aurora," he said, his voice smooth as silk, yet carrying an edge that made her heart race. "Lucien," she replied, her voice steadier than she felt. "What are you doing here?" He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the small space. "I need your help," he said, his eyes scanning the room, taking in the clutter of books and scrolls that covered every surface. Aurora closed the door behind him, her mind racing. The last time they had seen each other, things had ended badly. She had walked away, leaving behind more than just memories. "Help with what?" she asked, crossing her arms over her chest. Lucien's gaze settled on her, his eyes softening for a moment before the mask of indifference slipped back into place. "There's a situation in the supernatural underworld. Something big. I can't handle it alone." Aurora raised an eyebrow. "And you think I can help?" "I know you can," he said, his voice low and earnest. "You're the best at what you do, Aurora. I wouldn't be here if I didn't believe that." She felt a pang of something — regret, maybe — at his words. They had been a formidable team once, before everything had gone wrong. "What exactly are we dealing with?" she asked, trying to keep her tone neutral. Lucien took a step closer, his cane tapping softly against the floor. "A demon from Avaros has crossed into our realm. It's causing chaos, and it's only a matter of time before it becomes uncontrollable." Aurora's eyes widened. "A demon? Here? How did it get through?" "That's what I need you to help me find out," he said, his gaze intense. "You're the only one who can." She hesitated, the weight of their shared past pressing down on her. "Why should I trust you, Lucien? After everything that happened?" He sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back platinum blond hair. "I know I hurt you, Aurora. And I regret it every day. But this isn't about us. It's about stopping something that could destroy everything we know." Aurora looked away, her eyes landing on a stack of books on demonology. She had spent years studying, preparing for moments like this. But working with Lucien again? That was a different kind of challenge. "Fine," she said finally. "I'll help you. But this doesn't mean I've forgiven you." Lucien nodded, a flicker of relief crossing his face. "Thank you, Aurora. I won't let you down." She turned to the small kitchen, needing a moment to collect her thoughts. "Do you want some tea?" she asked, her voice softer now. "Tea would be lovely," he replied, leaning his cane against the wall. As she filled the kettle, the silence between them grew heavy with unspoken words. She could feel his eyes on her, and it took all her willpower not to turn around and meet his gaze. "So, where do we start?" she asked, trying to keep the conversation focused on the task at hand. Lucien moved to the small table, picking up a scroll and examining it. "We need to find out how the demon crossed over. There must be a breach somewhere, a weak point between our realm and Avaros." Aurora nodded, setting the kettle on the stove. "I have some contacts who might know something. I'll reach out to them." "Good," Lucien said, his voice closer now. She turned to find him standing just a few feet away, his eyes searching hers. "Aurora, I—" "Don't," she interrupted, holding up a hand. "Let's just focus on the demon, okay?" He nodded, a shadow of pain crossing his face. "Of course." The kettle whistled, breaking the tension. Aurora busied herself with making the tea, her mind a whirlwind of emotions. She handed Lucien a cup, their fingers brushing for a brief moment. The contact sent a jolt through her, a reminder of the connection they once shared. "Thank you," he said, taking a sip. They sat in silence for a few moments, the only sound the ticking of the clock on the wall. Finally, Aurora spoke. "We should start with the usual suspects. Anyone who might have a reason to summon a demon." Lucien nodded. "Agreed. I'll reach out to my sources as well." They spent the next hour going over their plan, the familiarity of working together easing some of the tension. But the undercurrent of unresolved feelings remained, a constant reminder of the past. As they wrapped up their discussion, Lucien stood, his cane tapping against the floor. "I'll be in touch," he said, his eyes lingering on her for a moment longer than necessary. Aurora nodded, walking him to the door. "Be careful, Lucien. Demons are dangerous, and so are the people who summon them." He gave her a small smile. "I will. And Aurora... thank you." She watched him walk away, the weight of their shared history pressing down on her. As the door closed behind him, she leaned against it, her mind racing. Working with Lucien again would be a challenge, but she couldn't deny the thrill of the hunt, the excitement of facing the unknown. And maybe, just maybe, it would give them a chance to finally confront the ghosts of their past.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.057
89.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount935
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount935
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"race"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"racing"
count2
5
word"mask of indifference"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"pang"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"tension"
count2
14
word"reminder"
count2
highlights
0"echoing"
1"silk"
2"race"
3"scanning"
4"racing"
5"mask of indifference"
6"eyebrow"
7"pang"
8"weight"
9"flicker"
10"silence"
11"unspoken"
12"could feel"
13"tension"
14"reminder"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences59
matches
0"a flicker of relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords936
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, Aurora spoke."
66.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount655
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien11
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Aurora9
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.66
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount936
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"scrolls that covered"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean27.53
std13.97
cv0.507
sampleLengths
057
118
214
337
442
534
610
728
839
935
1011
1121
1222
1338
1449
1517
1624
1712
1853
1937
2021
2124
2214
2311
2446
257
2639
2711
2832
2931
3021
3112
3251
3318
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
70.52% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences79
ratio0.025
matches
0"She swung the door open, and there he stood — Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, with his heterochromatic eyes and tailored charcoal suit."
1"She felt a pang of something — regret, maybe — at his words."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount654
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.035168195718654434
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010703363914373088
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean11.85
std5.6
cv0.473
sampleLengths
012
115
222
38
418
59
65
714
823
99
1012
1110
1211
1320
1414
154
166
1711
1817
1913
2012
2114
2212
2323
243
258
2615
276
2812
2910
3011
3127
3213
3310
345
357
364
3710
389
398
4013
4111
4212
4314
4421
4518
4613
4724
488
4913
69.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4177215189873418
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners33
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Finally, Aurora spoke."
ratio0.017
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences58
matches
0"She swung the door open,"
1"His ivory-handled cane tapped lightly"
2"he said, his voice smooth"
3"she replied, her voice steadier"
4"He stepped inside without waiting"
5"he said, his eyes scanning"
6"She had walked away, leaving"
7"she asked, crossing her arms"
8"he said, his voice low"
9"She felt a pang of"
10"They had been a formidable"
11"she asked, trying to keep"
12"he said, his gaze intense"
13"She hesitated, the weight of"
14"He sighed, running a hand"
15"She had spent years studying,"
16"she said finally"
17"She turned to the small"
18"she asked, her voice softer"
19"he replied, leaning his cane"
ratio0.552
28.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences58
matches
0"Aurora's hand froze on the"
1"The three deadbolts clinked as"
2"She swung the door open,"
3"His ivory-handled cane tapped lightly"
4"he said, his voice smooth"
5"she replied, her voice steadier"
6"He stepped inside without waiting"
7"he said, his eyes scanning"
8"Aurora closed the door behind"
9"The last time they had"
10"She had walked away, leaving"
11"she asked, crossing her arms"
12"Lucien's gaze settled on her,"
13"Aurora raised an eyebrow."
14"he said, his voice low"
15"She felt a pang of"
16"They had been a formidable"
17"she asked, trying to keep"
18"Lucien took a step closer,"
19"Aurora's eyes widened."
ratio0.862
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the small space."
1"She turned to find him standing just a few feet away, his eyes searching hers."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she replied, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"he said, his voice low and earnest"
2"she asked, trying to keep her tone neutral"
3"he said, his gaze intense"
4"she asked, her voice softer now"
5"Lucien said, his voice closer now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.057
78.1274%