Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFXMN54P5418T2WN5SP

Run Details

Duration:
7.0s
Cost:
$0.019745
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in front of Eva's flat, her breath visible in the cold night air. She hesitated, her hand hovering over the door. The three deadbolts stared back at her, a reminder of the security Eva always insisted on. She took a deep breath and knocked. The door creaked open, revealing Lucien Moreau. His heterochromatic eyes widened in surprise, the amber one catching the dim light from the hallway. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate as always. "Rory," he said, his voice a mix of surprise and something else she couldn't quite place. "Lucien," she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. "I didn't expect to see you here." He stepped aside, allowing her to enter. "Eva's out. I'm watching Ptolemy for her." Aurora stepped into the cramped flat, the familiar scent of old books and curry filling her nostrils. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meowed from his perch on a stack of books. She reached out to scratch his head, her fingers brushing against the soft fur. "Why are you here, Rory?" Lucien's voice was soft, but there was an edge to it. She turned to face him, her bright blue eyes meeting his mismatched ones. "I needed to talk to Eva. I didn't know you'd be here." He nodded, his expression unreadable. "It's been a while." "Yeah," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "It has." They stood in silence, the weight of their shared history hanging between them. The last time they had seen each other, things had ended on complicated terms. There had been attraction, hurt, and too many things left unsaid. Lucien broke the silence first. "You look well." "Thanks," she replied, her fingers absentmindedly tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "You too." He gave a small, almost imperceptible nod. "Would you like some tea? Eva has a new blend she’s been raving about." "Sure," she said, grateful for the distraction. He moved to the tiny kitchen, his movements graceful despite the cane. She watched him, memories flooding back. The way he had always seemed so composed, so in control. It had been one of the things that had drawn her to him, and one of the things that had driven her away. He handed her a steaming cup of tea, their fingers brushing for a moment. She felt a jolt, like an electric current passing between them. She took a sip, the warmth spreading through her. "How's work?" he asked, leaning against the counter. "Busy," she replied. "Yu-Fei's been keeping me on my toes." He smiled, a genuine smile that reached his eyes. "I can imagine." They lapsed into silence again, the unspoken words hanging in the air. She took another sip of tea, gathering her thoughts. "Lucien," she began, her voice trembling slightly. "About what happened between us..." He held up a hand, stopping her. "Rory, you don't have to—" "No," she interrupted, her voice firmer now. "I need to say this. I left because I was scared. Scared of what I felt for you, scared of getting hurt again. But running away didn't solve anything. It just left things unfinished." He looked at her, his eyes searching her face. "I understand," he said quietly. "I was scared too. Scared of losing control, of letting someone in." She took a step closer, her heart pounding in her chest. "I never stopped thinking about you, Lucien. Even when I tried to convince myself otherwise." He reached out, his hand gently cupping her cheek. "I never stopped thinking about you either, Rory." She closed her eyes, leaning into his touch. The warmth of his hand, the familiar scent of his cologne, it all felt so right. She opened her eyes, meeting his gaze. "Can we try again?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. He hesitated for a moment, then nodded. "I'd like that." She smiled, a genuine smile that reached her eyes. "Me too." They stood there, the weight of their past slowly lifting. It wouldn't be easy, but they were willing to try. And for now, that was enough. Ptolemy meowed, breaking the moment. They both laughed, the tension easing. "Looks like someone wants attention," Lucien said, scratching the cat's head. Aurora watched him, her heart full. For the first time in a long time, she felt hopeful. They had a long road ahead of them, but they were ready to face it together. And that was all that mattered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.387
leniency0.774
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.065
66.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount752
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"slightly"
2"gently"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount752
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"familiar"
2"unreadable"
3"whisper"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"tracing"
7"electric"
8"warmth"
9"unspoken"
10"pounding"
11"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
82.63% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences59
matches
0"d in surprise"
1"felt a jolt"
2"felt hopeful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords749
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount578
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva2
Lucien4
Moreau1
Aurora3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"seemed so composed so in control"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount749
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean20.81
std12.46
cv0.599
sampleLengths
047
136
216
318
414
544
616
725
89
911
1038
118
1217
1321
147
1552
1634
178
1810
1912
2021
2112
2212
2341
2426
2526
2617
2731
2812
2910
3011
3126
3211
3311
3433
356
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs105
matches
0"were willing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences77
ratio0
matches(empty)
92.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount580
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.041379310344827586
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.01206896551724138
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean9.73
std5.11
cv0.525
sampleLengths
016
18
216
37
47
516
613
716
811
97
107
117
1217
1313
1414
1516
1613
1712
185
194
209
212
2213
2314
2411
255
263
2715
282
297
3014
317
3212
336
3411
3523
3614
3711
389
398
403
417
429
433
4412
459
467
475
487
495
60.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.37662337662337664
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences58
matches
0"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
1"She took a deep breath"
2"His heterochromatic eyes widened in"
3"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
4"he said, his voice a"
5"she replied, her voice steady"
6"He stepped aside, allowing her"
7"She reached out to scratch"
8"She turned to face him,"
9"He nodded, his expression unreadable."
10"she said, her voice barely"
11"They stood in silence, the"
12"she replied, her fingers absentmindedly"
13"He gave a small, almost"
14"she said, grateful for the"
15"He moved to the tiny"
16"She watched him, memories flooding"
17"It had been one of"
18"He handed her a steaming"
19"She felt a jolt, like"
ratio0.707
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences58
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood in front"
1"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
2"The three deadbolts stared back"
3"She took a deep breath"
4"The door creaked open, revealing"
5"His heterochromatic eyes widened in"
6"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
7"he said, his voice a"
8"she replied, her voice steady"
9"He stepped aside, allowing her"
10"Aurora stepped into the cramped"
11"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meowed"
12"She reached out to scratch"
13"Lucien's voice was soft, but"
14"She turned to face him,"
15"He nodded, his expression unreadable."
16"she said, her voice barely"
17"They stood in silence, the"
18"The last time they had"
19"There had been attraction, hurt,"
ratio0.948
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
1"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"she began, her voice trembling slightly"
3"she interrupted, her voice firmer now"
4"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.065
75.3252%