Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFXWWGVY17VYMFBKH64

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock at the door reverberated through the cramped flat. Aurora froze, hand hovering over the stack of dusty grimoires. No one knew she was here, except... The knock came again, more insistent. She crossed the room in three strides and yanked open the door. "Lucien." Her grip tightened on the knob. "What the hell are you doing here?" "Is that any way to greet an old friend, chère?" Lucien's smirk didn't reach his mismatched eyes as he leaned against the doorframe. "Aren't you going to invite me in?" "You lost the right to unannounced visits when you disappeared." She started to shut the door, but his cane blocked it. "A moment, Rory." The smirk fell. "Please. It's important." Debate raced across her face. With a huff, she stepped back. "Five minutes. And don't call me Rory." "Of course." He stepped inside, his gaze sweeping the cluttered space. "Still the scholar, I see." "I'm sure you didn't come to critique my housekeeping." She folded her arms, but not before he caught the tremor. "What do you want?" "I came to warn you." He stepped closer, pitching his voice low. "You're in danger." Her sharp laugh sliced the air. "Story of my life." But her eyes darted to the window, the door. "This is different." He reached for her, thought better of it, let his hand fall. "The demon that attacked Eva? It's part of something bigger. Something I should have told you about long ago." Her face shuttered. "I don't do demon hunting anymore." "Not even to save her?" The color drained from her cheeks. "What do you mean?" "The grimoire." He nodded to the books. "I've been tracking the demon that attacked her, Rory. It's after something. And I think that something is here." She shook her head, but doubt crept into her eyes. "Eva isn't involved in this." "But you are." He stepped closer, close enough to see the pulse jumping in her throat. "It's never been a fair fight between us, has it? You with your righteous fury. Me with my...flexible morality." "You mean lies." But the bite had left her voice. "Omissions. Not the same." His fingers itched to trace the familiar lines of her face. "I'm not asking you to forgive me. But work with me on this. Before it's too late." Her eyes searched his, looking for the trap. The lie. He wondered what she saw. "Fine." She stepped back, breaking the spell. "But if you screw me over again, I'll send you back to hell myself." "Now that sounds like the Rory I remember." His lips quirked before he could stop them. "I hate you." But the words lacked venom. "I know." They were the last honest ones he had. The silence stretched between them, heavy with the weight of things unsaid. Things that could never be unsaid. He watched the battle play out across her face — the need to know, the fear of what knowing might cost. "I saw him, you know." She broke the standoff, her voice husky. "Your father. In a vision." Ice pooled in his gut. "Visions lie." "Not this one." She met his eyes, her own hard with certainty. "He's coming for you. For the power he thinks you stole." "I stole nothing." The words hissed through his teeth. "I am not my father's son." "But you are." The words were soft, almost apologetic. "His blood runs in your veins. His power sings in your bones. You can't outrun your nature, Luc." "No? Watch me." The cane snapped up. He twirled it once, a dare, a promise. "I choose my path, Aurora Carter. Neither heaven nor hell will make me stray." "And if your path leads back to me?" The tremor was back, betraying her. "Then I suppose we're both damned." The space between them vanished. Their lips met like a clash of swords, all teeth and anger and desperate want. Her hands fisted in his shirt, yanking him closer. He growled into her mouth, backing her into the wall. She nipped his bottom lip in retaliation. They moved in concert, half fight, half dance, mapping each other anew. Here, the spot behind her ear that made her gasp. There, the jut of his hipbone that always made him squirm. Clothes fell away, casualties in the battle for skin. The world narrowed to the slide of flesh on flesh, the catch of breath, the urgent rocking of bodies twined together. Release came in a rush, a white-hot flare that left them gasping, foreheads pressed together, sweat slicked skin humming with aftershocks. "Well." Her voice was smoke and whiskey. "That was an effective distraction tactic." "You always did bring out the best in me." His lips brushed her temple, her cheek, the corner of her mouth. "This doesn't change anything, you know." Despite the words, she didn't let go. "We're still...complicated." "Aren't we always?" He breathed in the scent of her, committing it to memory. "But for tonight—" Ptolemy's yowl cut through the flat, a siren's call that made them both freeze. "Down!" Aurora shoved Lucien aside, already moving. The flat door exploded inward, a hail of splinters and flame. The demon in the doorway grinned, a gash of teeth and malice. "Playtime's over, children." Its voice grated like nails on a chalkboard. "Time to come home, little prince." Lucien rose, blood trickling from a gash on his cheek. He met Rory's wide eyes, saw the same determination in them. "Time to fight." He flicked his wrist. The demon laughed. And the night erupted into chaos.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"Its voice grated like [like]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.509
leniency1
rawRatio0.069
effectiveRatio0.069
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount928
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount928
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"reverberated"
count1
1
word"raced"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"reverberated"
1"raced"
2"pulse"
3"familiar"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"dance"
7"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords928
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount581
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien3
Debate1
Ice1
Despite1
Ptolemy1
Rory1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Debate"
2"Ice"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
92.24% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.078
wordCount928
matches
0"Neither heaven nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
85.61% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean18.56
std8.35
cv0.45
sampleLengths
027
118
214
330
421
59
618
716
824
915
1019
1134
129
135
1410
1526
1615
1735
1810
1932
2015
2121
2216
238
2410
2539
2617
277
2823
2915
3027
3129
3214
3311
3415
3526
3633
3730
3821
3913
4021
4115
4217
4314
447
4523
4617
4721
4810
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs105
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences93
ratio0.011
matches
0"He watched the battle play out across her face — the need to know, the fear of what knowing might cost."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount581
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.022375215146299483
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean9.98
std5.18
cv0.519
sampleLengths
010
110
27
36
412
57
67
723
87
921
106
113
125
136
147
1511
165
1720
184
1912
203
216
2213
2315
2419
253
266
275
286
294
307
3119
3210
335
3416
3519
3610
3715
3817
398
402
415
427
4314
4416
458
4610
4712
486
4921
82.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5161290322580645
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences66
matches
0"She crossed the room in"
1"Her grip tightened on the"
2"She started to shut the"
3"He stepped inside, his gaze"
4"She folded her arms, but"
5"He stepped closer, pitching his"
6"Her sharp laugh sliced the"
7"He reached for her, thought"
8"Her face shuttered."
9"He nodded to the books"
10"She shook her head, but"
11"He stepped closer, close enough"
12"His fingers itched to trace"
13"Her eyes searched his, looking"
14"He wondered what she saw."
15"She stepped back, breaking the"
16"His lips quirked before he"
17"They were the last honest"
18"He watched the battle play"
19"She broke the standoff, her"
ratio0.5
13.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences66
matches
0"The knock at the door"
1"Aurora froze, hand hovering over"
2"The knock came again, more"
3"She crossed the room in"
4"Her grip tightened on the"
5"Lucien's smirk didn't reach his"
6"She started to shut the"
7"The smirk fell"
8"Debate raced across her face."
9"He stepped inside, his gaze"
10"She folded her arms, but"
11"He stepped closer, pitching his"
12"Her sharp laugh sliced the"
13"He reached for her, thought"
14"Her face shuttered."
15"The color drained from her"
16"He nodded to the books"
17"She shook her head, but"
18"He stepped closer, close enough"
19"His fingers itched to trace"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Here, the spot behind her ear that made her gasp."
1"Release came in a rush, a white-hot flare that left them gasping, foreheads pressed together, sweat slicked skin humming with aftershocks."
2"Ptolemy's yowl cut through the flat, a siren's call that made them both freeze."
56.03% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She started, but his cane blocked it"
1"He stepped, his gaze sweeping the cluttered space"
2"She broke, her voice husky"
3"His lips brushed, her cheek, the corner of her mouth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"The words hissed (hiss)"
1"He breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.035
leniency0.07
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.07
81.0140%