| 26.09% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.304 | | leniency | 0.609 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.174 | |
| 83.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "enigmatic" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "grave" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "unspoken" | | 11 | "beacon" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "time stood still" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "eyes widened" | | 2 | "Time seemed to slow" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 15.31% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1212 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 958 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae | 8 | | Grove | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.561 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "petals that seemed to glow from within" | | 1 | "seemed distant and unreal, the wild beauty of this place leaving an indelible mark on Rory's mind and heart" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 36.73 | | std | 19.17 | | cv | 0.522 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 54 | | 32 | 8 |
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| 99.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory knew what they were thinking – none of them could be sure whose blood would be accepted by whatever power governed this place." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 965 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender leaf-shaped form" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03626943005181347 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015544041450777202 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 16.83 | | std | 8 | | cv | 0.475 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 72.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, straightening up again" | | 1 | "she said softly, eyes fixed" | | 2 | "She thought of her friends," | | 3 | "she said quietly, her fingers" | | 4 | "She felt tired, drained by" | | 5 | "She let the sentence trail" | | 6 | "She knew she would carry" |
| | ratio | 0.125 | |
| 93.93% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stepped" | | 1 | "Time seemed to slow, the" | | 2 | "Rory's skin prickled with the" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair" | | 4 | "Rory shivered, hyper-aware of the" | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly" | | 6 | "The colors were richer here," | | 7 | "Rory knelt down, reaching out" | | 8 | "she breathed, straightening up again" | | 9 | "Isolde turned to face her," | | 10 | "Rory prompted, her tone cautious" | | 11 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 12 | "Rory looked around, her eyes" | | 13 | "Isolde smiled enigmatically." | | 14 | "The trees seemed to whisper" | | 15 | "Flowers bloomed in riots of" | | 16 | "Rory could feel it thrumming" | | 17 | "The air crackled, the feeling" | | 18 | "Isolde stepped forward, her hand" | | 19 | "she said softly, eyes fixed" |
| | ratio | 0.732 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's skin prickled with the unreal feel of the place, the air crisp and laden with the scent of wildflowers that bloomed in riotous color despite the heavy gr…" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly against her chest, a deep crimson that mirrored the blood-red of the gemstone set within the silver chain." | | 2 | "As they ventured deeper into the Grove, the landscape shifted, the ground beneath their feet giving way to a carpet of moss and flower petals that seemed to glo…" | | 3 | "Rory looked around, her eyes tracing the glowing petals and shimmering leaves." | | 4 | "The trees seemed to whisper secrets in a language she couldn't understand, their branches swaying gently even though no wind touched this secluded clearing." | | 5 | "Rory could feel it thrumming through her veins, setting her teeth on edge and making her hair stand on end." | | 6 | "Rory gasped, her breath coming in sharp pants as she felt the magic coursing through her body, her blood mingling with the power of the Grove." | | 7 | "The Fae-Forged Blade pulsed in her grasp, its glow intensifying until it burned with an icy radiance that seared her eyes." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair catching the light in an ethereal shimmer" | | 1 | "Rory prompted, her tone cautious" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on the cool breeze" | | 3 | "she said softly, eyes fixed on the weapon in her hand" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Rory admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.261 | | leniency | 0.522 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.348 | |