Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZFZRTPHPWER8M3KBGFG

Run Details

Duration:
1m 60s
Cost:
$0.001881
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked back, one after another, a sound Rory had grown so accustomed to she barely heard it anymore. She pulled the door open, expecting the usual evening stillness of Brick Lane settling into its nighttime rhythm. Instead, she found Lucien Moreau standing on the narrow landing, the weak yellow glow from the single bulb overhead carving sharp shadows across his face. He looked like he’d stepped out of a different century. Tailored charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back with military precision, one hand resting lightly on the ivory handle of his cane. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black as pitch—fixed on her with an intensity that made the air in her lungs tighten. “Rory.” He hadn’t called her that in months. Not since the last time she’d seen him, in the back room of his club, when words had been flung like knives and the space between them had stretched into something vast and cold. She didn’t move. Didn’t step aside to let him in. Just stood there, her hand still on the edge of the door, feeling the draft from the stairwell coil around her ankles. “What are you doing here, Lucien?” “We need to talk.” “We talked. It ended with you telling me to stay out of your business.” “Circumstances change.” He shifted his weight, the tip of his cane tapping once against the worn linoleum. “May I come in?” She hesitated. The part of her that remembered the feel of his hands, the low murmur of his voice in the dark, wanted to say yes. The part that remembered the hurt wanted to slam the door. In the end, she stepped back, leaving the space open. He moved past her, bringing with him the scent of rain and expensive cologne. Rory closed the door, reset the deadbolts. When she turned, he was standing in the middle of her cramped living room, taking in the chaos of books and scrolls piled on every surface, the tabby cat Ptolemy watching him from the top of the bookshelf with wary gold eyes. “Eva’s not here,” Rory said, more to fill the silence than anything. “I didn’t come for Eva.” She crossed her arms, leaned against the doorframe. “Then what do you want?” Lucien turned to face her. The amber eye seemed to catch the lamplight, glowing softly. “There’s a situation. Something’s come up that requires… discretion.” “And you thought of me.” “I thought of you because you’re the only person I know who can deliver a message to Yu-Fei Cheung without raising eyebrows.” Rory’s breath hitched. “You want me to use my job.” “I want you to do what you do best. Move through the city unseen. Drop something off, pick something up. No questions asked.” “Last time I did that for you, I ended up with a demon’s mark on my door.” “And I removed it.” “After I asked. Three times.” He took a step closer. The space between them shrank, charged with all the things they hadn’t said, all the nights they’d spent tangled together in his bed above the club, the way he’d traced the crescent scar on her wrist like it held secrets. “This is different,” he said, his voice dropping into that low register that used to make her bones hum. “This isn’t underworld politics. This is personal.” “Everything with you is personal, Lucien. That’s the problem.” He flinched, just a slight tightening around his eyes. “My father is sending someone to London. A representative from Avaros.” A cold knot formed in Rory’s stomach. Lucien rarely spoke of his demon father, but when he did, it was with a controlled venom that spoke of old, deep wounds. “Why?” “To deliver an ultimatum. Either I return to Avaros and take my place at his side, or he cuts off my access to the shadows. All of them.” “The shadows” were Lucien’s network, the whispered conversations in alleyways, the secrets traded for favors, the lifeblood of his power in London. Without them, he’d be vulnerable. Maybe even mortal. Rory uncrossed her arms, let her hands fall to her sides. “What does Cheung have to do with it?” “He has something I need. Something that can… persuade my father’s emissary to reconsider.” “And you can’t get it yourself.” “Cheung doesn’t deal with half-breeds.” The words came out flat, stripped of emotion. “But he likes you. You bring his dumplings on time, you never complain about the stairs. He’ll give it to you.” “And what do I get out of it?” Lucien’s mouth curved, not quite a smile. “You always were practical.” “I learned from you.” He moved again, closing the distance until she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the faint pulse in his throat. “Name your price.” She could have asked for money. For protection. For information about Evan, the ex who still haunted her dreams some nights. Instead, she said, “Tell me why you really left.” The air went still. Ptolemy shifted on the bookshelf, his tail twitching. “Rory—” “You told me to stay out of your business. You shut me out. After everything.” Her voice stayed level, but she felt the old ache blooming beneath her ribs. “You owe me that much.” For a long moment, he didn’t speak. Just looked at her, the black eye depthless, the amber one holding her reflection like a trapped flame. Then he lifted a hand, slow, as if approaching a skittish animal, and brushed a strand of hair back from her face. His fingers lingered against her temple. “Because I was afraid,” he said, so quiet she almost didn’t hear it. “Afraid of what?” “Of what would happen if I let you in any further. Of what my father would do if he knew…” He trailed off, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone. “You became a vulnerability. And in my world, vulnerabilities get exploited.” “So you pushed me away first.” “Yes.” It was the honesty that undid her. The raw, unvarnished truth of it. She’d spent months imagining elaborate reasons, betrayals, secrets. But this was simpler, and somehow worse. “You’re an idiot,” she whispered. “I know.” His other hand came up, the cane hanging from his wrist, and he cupped her face. His palms were warm, his touch familiar in a way that made her chest ache. She hadn’t realized how much she’d missed it until now. “I need your help, Rory. But I won’t ask if you don’t want to give it.” She leaned into his touch, just a little. “What happens if your father cuts you off?” “I become human. Fully. The demon half… fades. And with it, everything I’ve built.” “Would that be so bad?” He laughed, a soft, bitter sound. “For me? Yes. This city, this life… it’s all I have.” “Not all.” His gaze dropped to her mouth. The air between them sparked, charged with everything they hadn’t said, everything they’d left unfinished. Rory remembered the taste of him, the way he’d whisper French endearments into her hair when he thought she was asleep. “Rory,” he said again, her name a prayer on his lips. She reached up, curled her fingers around his wrist, feeling the steady beat of his pulse against her thumb. “I’ll do it. But not for you. For me.” His eyebrow lifted. “I need to know,” she said. “If I walk away after this, I need to know it was my choice. Not because you scared me off.” Something shifted in his expression, a crack in the polished veneer. “And if you don’t walk away?” She didn’t answer. Instead, she rose up on her toes and kissed him. It wasn’t gentle. It was all the months of anger and hurt and longing poured into a single point of contact. Lucien made a sound low in his throat, his arms wrapping around her, pulling her flush against him. The cane clattered to the floor, forgotten. His hands slid into her hair, angling her head to deepen the kiss. She tasted rain and regret and something darkly sweet, like burnt sugar. His mouth moved over hers with a desperation that mirrored her own, as if he’d been starving for this, for her. Rory clutched at his shoulders, the fine wool of his suit rough under her fingers, and let herself drown in the heat of him. When they broke apart, both breathing ragged, he rested his forehead against hers. “I missed you,” he murmured, the words warm against her lips. “Show me,” she said. He kissed her again, slower this time, a promise and an apology all in one. Then he bent, retrieved his cane, and with his free hand laced his fingers through hers. “The bed’s through there?” She nodded, her throat too tight for words. He led her to the narrow doorway, pausing only to scoop Ptolemy off the bookshelf and deposit him gently outside before closing the door. The click of the latch echoed in the sudden quiet. In the dim light filtering through the curtains, Lucien looked at her, really looked, as if memorizing every detail. “You’re sure?” Rory reached for the knot of his tie, pulled him down to her. “Shut up, Lucien.” He smiled against her mouth, a real smile this time, and let her undo the first button of his shirt.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said again [again]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.23
leniency0.459
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.033
83.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1560
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1560
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"charged"
count2
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"charged"
4"traced"
5"stomach"
6"pulse"
7"tracing"
8"familiar"
9"whisper"
10"eyebrow"
11"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1556
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1099
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien7
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
London1
Evan1
French1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
13.01% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like he’d stepped out of a differe"
1"not quite a smile"
2"as if approaching a skittish animal, and brushed a strand of hair back from her face"
3"as if memorizing every detail"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1556
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean21.03
std16.3
cv0.775
sampleLengths
063
152
21
341
432
56
64
714
821
947
1063
1112
125
1313
1424
155
1622
1710
1823
1917
204
215
2245
2326
249
2520
2631
2728
2830
2919
3014
316
3234
338
3411
354
3628
3730
3812
391
4034
4153
4213
433
4442
456
461
4728
485
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"been flung"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences136
ratio0.007
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black as pitch—fixed on her with an intensity that made the air in her lungs tighten."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1101
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03814713896457766
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007266121707538601
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean11.44
std8.15
cv0.712
sampleLengths
020
118
225
310
421
521
61
77
834
93
107
1122
126
134
1414
1517
164
172
1824
1911
2010
2114
227
2342
2412
255
268
275
285
2910
309
315
3222
333
347
3523
3617
374
385
395
4040
4119
427
439
449
4511
467
4723
481
4928
54.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3602941176470588
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences84
matches
0"Instead, she found Lucien Moreau"
1"Just stood there, her hand"
2"Maybe even mortal."
3"Instead, she said,"
4"Just looked at her, the"
5"Then he lifted a hand,"
6"Instead, she rose up on"
7"Then he bent, retrieved his"
ratio0.095
34.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences84
matches
0"She pulled the door open,"
1"He looked like he’d stepped"
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
3"He hadn’t called her that"
4"She didn’t move."
5"He shifted his weight, the"
6"He moved past her, bringing"
7"She crossed her arms, leaned"
8"He took a step closer."
9"he said, his voice dropping"
10"He flinched, just a slight"
11"He moved again, closing the"
12"She could have asked for"
13"Her voice stayed level, but"
14"His fingers lingered against her"
15"he said, so quiet she"
16"He trailed off, his thumb"
17"It was the honesty that"
18"She’d spent months imagining elaborate"
19"His other hand came up,"
ratio0.464
79.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences84
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked back, one"
1"She pulled the door open,"
2"He looked like he’d stepped"
3"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
4"He hadn’t called her that"
5"She didn’t move."
6"He shifted his weight, the"
7"The part of her that"
8"The part that remembered the"
9"He moved past her, bringing"
10"Rory closed the door, reset"
11"Rory said, more to fill"
12"She crossed her arms, leaned"
13"Lucien turned to face her."
14"The amber eye seemed to"
15"Rory’s breath hitched."
16"He took a step closer."
17"The space between them shrank,"
18"he said, his voice dropping"
19"He flinched, just a slight"
ratio0.762
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black as pitch—fixed on her with an intensity that made the air in her lungs tighten."
1"The part of her that remembered the feel of his hands, the low murmur of his voice in the dark, wanted to say yes."
2"Lucien rarely spoke of his demon father, but when he did, it was with a controlled venom that spoke of old, deep wounds."
3"Then he lifted a hand, slow, as if approaching a skittish animal, and brushed a strand of hair back from her face."
4"His palms were warm, his touch familiar in a way that made her chest ache."
5"His mouth moved over hers with a desperation that mirrored her own, as if he’d been starving for this, for her."
6"In the dim light filtering through the curtains, Lucien looked at her, really looked, as if memorizing every detail."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"the secrets traded, the lifeblood of his power in London"
1"He trailed, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone"
2"he said again, her name a prayer on his lips"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.148
leniency0.295
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.066
82.1350%