Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZG02RMKZSV2GMBS7M2G

Run Details

Duration:
32.3s
Cost:
$0.035700
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn knelt beside the chalk outline, her knees creaking against the damp platform of the abandoned Tube station. The body had been removed hours ago, but the scene remained pristine - too pristine. White forensic tents dotted the curved tunnel like ghost stations, their harsh fluorescent lights casting strange shadows on the century-old tiles. "Cause of death appears straightforward." DS Matthews flipped through his notepad. "Blunt force trauma to the back of the head. Probably slipped on these wet tiles, cracked his skull on the platform edge. We found his Oyster card in his pocket." Quinn traced her finger along the platform's granite lip, feeling the grooves worn by millions of commuters who'd never set foot in this station since its closure in 1932. No blood spatter. No signs of impact. "And why would our victim be in an abandoned station at three in the morning?" Her worn leather watch caught the light as she stood, brushing dirt from her trousers. "Urban explorer maybe? These tunnel rats are always breaking into closed stations." Quinn's eyes narrowed at the deceased's supposed point of impact. "Urban explorers come prepared, Matthews. They bring torches, proper boots, cameras. Our victim was wearing leather oxfords and a three-piece suit." She paced the platform, her footsteps echoing in the cavernous space. The station's original features remained intact - beautiful Art Deco tiles, brass fixtures green with age, ornate iron pillars. But something else caught her eye: a brass compass, half-hidden beneath a discarded newspaper near the tunnel's mouth. Quinn pulled on a latex glove and carefully retrieved it. The casing was covered in strange markings she'd never seen before, its face etched with intricate patterns that seemed to shift in the harsh crime scene lighting. "Bag this for evidence." She handed it to a nearby technician. "A compass?" Matthews scoffed. "Underground?" "When was the last time you saw a compass with markings like these?" The needle spun wildly, then settled pointing toward the darkened tunnel - not north. "And why would someone need a compass in a straight tunnel?" Quinn's mind flashed to her old partner, Morris. His last case had led him into London's underground network. They'd found his body three days later, with no explanation for how he'd died. The official report cited a heart attack, but she'd never believed it. "There's something else." She walked to where the body had been found. "Look at the dust pattern on the platform." Matthews joined her, squinting at the ground. "What about it?" "These tiles are covered in decades of grime, except for these clear footprints leading to our victim. But there's no dust displacement around the body, no signs of a fall or struggle. It's as if..." "As if what?" "As if he was placed here. Carefully positioned." Quinn pulled out her phone, scrolling through the crime scene photos. "And look at these marks on his wrist - they're not bruises, they're residue. Like stamp ink." A flash of red caught her attention. A young woman with curly hair and round glasses stood at the far end of the platform, clutching a leather satchel. Their eyes met briefly before the woman disappeared into the shadows. "Matthews, get me CCTV footage of all station entrances for the past 24 hours." Quinn started toward where the woman had been. "And find out if anyone matching this description works at the British Museum - red hair, green eyes, mid-twenties, wearing glasses." "The British Museum? What's that got to do with anything?" Quinn reached the spot where the woman had stood. A small piece of paper lay on the ground, covered in the same strange markings as the compass. "Because this isn't just a murder scene. This station isn't abandoned - it's being used for something else. And I think our friends at the British Museum's restricted archives might know exactly what that is." The tunnel groaned, a rush of stale air carrying the scent of something ancient. Quinn pocketed the paper, her hand brushing against her watch - the same watch she'd been wearing three years ago when Morris disappeared. This time, she wouldn't let the truth slip away into the darkness.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:26:41.492Z" 2/19/2026, 3:26:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The needle spun wildly [wildly]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.095
85.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount693
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount693
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pristine"
count2
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"traced"
2"footsteps"
3"echoing"
4"etched"
5"intricate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences33
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences33
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"watch "
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences46
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords696
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount425
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.12
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn9
Tube1
Matthews3
Art1
Deco1
Morris2
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Matthews"
3"Art"
4"Deco"
5"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.441
windowScore0.833
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"patterns that seemed to shift in the harsh crime scene lighting"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount696
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean31.64
std16.57
cv0.524
sampleLengths
056
141
236
330
412
531
648
737
811
95
1038
1144
1220
1310
1435
153
1636
1739
1843
1910
2062
2149
73.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences33
matches
0"been removed"
1"was covered"
2"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs70
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences46
ratio0.087
matches
0"The body had been removed hours ago, but the scene remained pristine - too pristine."
1"The station's original features remained intact - beautiful Art Deco tiles, brass fixtures green with age, ornate iron pillars."
2"\"When was the last time you saw a compass with markings like these?\" The needle spun wildly, then settled pointing toward the darkened tunnel - not north."
3"Quinn pocketed the paper, her hand brushing against her watch - the same watch she'd been wearing three years ago when Morris disappeared."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount423
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.014184397163120567
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.009456264775413711
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences46
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences46
mean15.13
std8.62
cv0.57
sampleLengths
020
115
221
311
430
529
63
74
830
912
1010
1121
1211
1319
1418
1510
1627
1711
184
191
2027
2111
228
2310
2414
2512
2612
278
287
293
3035
313
3219
3317
347
3521
3611
3722
3821
3910
409
4118
4235
4314
4423
4512
87.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5652173913043478
totalSentences46
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences32
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"She paced the platform, her"
2"She handed it to a"
3"His last case had led"
4"They'd found his body three"
5"She walked to where the"
6"Their eyes met briefly before"
ratio0.219
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences32
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn knelt beside"
1"The body had been removed"
2"DS Matthews flipped through his"
3"Quinn traced her finger along"
4"Her worn leather watch caught"
5"Quinn's eyes narrowed at the"
6"She paced the platform, her"
7"The station's original features remained"
8"Quinn pulled on a latex"
9"The casing was covered in"
10"She handed it to a"
11"The needle spun wildly, then"
12"Quinn's mind flashed to her"
13"His last case had led"
14"They'd found his body three"
15"The official report cited a"
16"She walked to where the"
17"Matthews joined her, squinting at"
18"Quinn pulled out her phone,"
19"A flash of red caught"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The casing was covered in strange markings she'd never seen before, its face etched with intricate patterns that seemed to shift in the harsh crime scene lighti…"
1"Quinn pocketed the paper, her hand brushing against her watch - the same watch she'd been wearing three years ago when Morris disappeared."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.5688%