Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZG19JHDKNZM2XT7RTQR

Run Details

Duration:
30.0s
Cost:
$0.023527
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The world shrunk to silence when Rory heard the knock on the door. She had almost forgotten that sound, like a fist pounding against her heart, demanding entrance to the fortress of her solitude. Ptolemy, Eva's unflappable tabby, merely twitched an ear in curiosity, unwilling to dislodge himself from his cosy spot on the windowsill. Three strikes on the door echoed through the room, each one like a gauntlet thrown down. The locks were formidable, almost excessive, a testament to Eva's paranoia. Three deadbolts, all lined up like metal soldiers, prepared to repel the most persistent of intruders. But Rory knew that behind this security lay vulnerability, hidden in the stacks of books that lined every corner. "Come on, Rory, it's Luc. Open up." The voice, smooth as aged bourbon, hinted at mischief. The accent, a delightful mix of Marseille and the streets of London, beckoned her to savour each word like a rare wine. Rory's mind scrambled, seeking an excuse, a reason not to open that door. The man outside was trouble, in the most delightful, terrifying, and undeniably attractive way. She had promised herself to never again unlock those deadbolts for him, to keep him firmly on the other side of the door. Yet, here he was, his presence lingering like a half-forgotten dream. Bracing herself, she made her way through the cluttered room, each step mustering the strength to face him. The first lock clicked open, then the second, each twist of the metal a physical resistance to the pull of her emotions. The final lock, the most cumbersome, seemed to know her hesitation, reluctant to yield its sanctuary. But Rory persisted, her heart racing, and the door swung open. Lucien Moreau stood across the threshold, leaning on his ivory-handled cane, his customary charcoal suit moulding his lean frame. His platinum hair, slicked back with the precision of a mob movie hitman, caught the light, making him seem both angelic and diabolical. "Leaving me out here is getting to be a habit, babe. Got my messages?" One eyebrow arched, challenging and amused. Rory swallowed hard, the dryness of her throat betraying her resolve. "You know I got them, Luc. You could've phoned." Her eyes darted, fighting the instinct to re-lock the door. With a fluid grace, he stepped over the threshold, his cane's tap announcing his advance. "You know I'd rather hear your voice. Besides, it's been a while. Figured a personal visit was long overdue." She retreated to the cluttered room's safety, the books offering a comforting barrier. "What happened to 'no surprise visits'? We had an agreement, Luc." The half-demon flashed a grin. Teeth, perfect and sharp, offered a glimpse of the predator beneath the smooth facade. "That's the beauty of life, chérie. Always full of surprises." "I don't believe in surprises." "Of course not. Half-demon knocking on your door with a grin is just part of the plan, right?" She held her ground as he advanced, every step causing the room's temperature to rise. "Perhaps I'm the only thing keeping the surprises at bay for you. No self-respecting demon would knock." "Touché. Though I'm here less for the self-respect and more for the rewards. You remember our discussion about finding new deals?" He now stood too close, his scent enveloping her in smoked wood and a hint of hellfire. Her heart stammered in silent surrender while her voice remained steady. "I hardly think that's the only reason you're here, Luc. Secrets are currency, and you always have transactions to make." A pause filled with the silence of hesitation and then, "Ah, but the best currency is that which builds trust. I have something for you, something you might appreciate." He casually withdrew an envelope from his inner jacket pocket and held it up, a tempting prize. Sensing a bargain, she moved closer, her caution tempered by curiosity. Her fingers found the envelope, immediately recognising the distinct weight of photographs within. "What are these?" "A gift." He smirked. "Or, you could see it as repayment for all the times my friends and I brought business your way." Slipping a photo free, she found herself looking at a familiar scene, but the details were tantalisingly obscured. "What am I looking at?" "Not sure. It came from an investigator's files, someone who specialises in the strange and unusual." His amusement seeped into his tone. "Thought you might get a kick out of it. With your penchant for digging into the shadows, I figured it'd tickle your fancy." She studied the image, a hazy shot of a man surrounded by a blur of motion and a hint of unnatural light. The longer she stared, the more the scene seemed to shift, as if it were a puzzle waiting to be solved. "This... this might be something." "So you accept?" He leaned in, his breath brushing the shell of her ear. Pulse throbbing against her throat, she whispered, "I do." "Good." A fingertip traced her jaw, whispers of a touch sparking a cascade of sensation. "But first things first. Let's discuss the price of this gift, shall we?" Rory backed away, her chest heaving. "No." "No?" "Not until you tell me—" Luc's lips brushed her mouth, effectively silencing her protest. His kiss, a skilled assault on her senses, washed away her fragmented thoughts, leaving a void filled only by the taste of him. A growl, low and rumbling, signalled his departure, beckoning her to follow. "I can still hear the London bluebells at Oxford Street from there, Miss Carter," he called out, his voice echoing down the corridor to her flat. "Ready to indulge in some light conversation?" Her heart could no longer keep its secrets. Time to pay up and see what revelations the price would bring.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"testament"
count1
4
word"firmly"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"resolve"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"predator"
count1
12
word"facade"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"traced"
count1
17
word"fragmented"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pounding"
2"echoed"
3"testament"
4"firmly"
5"sanctuary"
6"racing"
7"eyebrow"
8"resolve"
9"comforting"
10"perfect"
11"predator"
12"facade"
13"weight"
14"familiar"
15"pulse"
16"traced"
17"fragmented"
18"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
82.07% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords959
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount669
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Eva2
Marseille1
London1
Moreau1
Slipping1
Pulse1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Pulse"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount959
matches(empty)
10.42% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences64
matches
0"forgotten that sound"
1"knew that behind"
2"open that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean30.94
std17.1
cv0.553
sampleLengths
055
162
238
361
467
542
620
730
834
924
1029
115
1218
1332
1438
1531
1646
1727
1823
1923
2045
2148
2214
239
2428
257
261
275
2844
2933
3020
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount672
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03422619047619048
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.011904761904761904
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean14.98
std7.84
cv0.523
sampleLengths
013
121
221
316
411
516
619
716
822
913
1014
1123
1211
1318
1422
1516
1611
1719
1823
1920
2011
2119
2215
2319
2413
2511
265
2714
2810
295
3018
3115
3217
3338
3411
3520
3646
3711
3813
393
404
4119
4218
435
4422
4523
4622
4721
485
4914
90.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5625
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences46
matches
0"She had almost forgotten that"
1"She had promised herself to"
2"His platinum hair, slicked back"
3"Her eyes darted, fighting the"
4"She retreated to the cluttered"
5"She held her ground as"
6"He now stood too close,"
7"Her heart stammered in silent"
8"Her fingers found the envelope,"
9"His amusement seeped into his"
10"She studied the image, a"
11"He leaned in, his breath"
12"His kiss, a skilled assault"
13"he called out, his voice"
14"Her heart could no longer"
ratio0.326
79.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences46
matches
0"The world shrunk to silence"
1"She had almost forgotten that"
2"Ptolemy, Eva's unflappable tabby, merely"
3"The locks were formidable, almost"
4"The voice, smooth as aged"
5"The accent, a delightful mix"
6"Rory's mind scrambled, seeking an"
7"The man outside was trouble,"
8"She had promised herself to"
9"The first lock clicked open,"
10"The final lock, the most"
11"Lucien Moreau stood across the"
12"His platinum hair, slicked back"
13"Rory swallowed hard, the dryness"
14"Her eyes darted, fighting the"
15"She retreated to the cluttered"
16"The half-demon flashed a grin."
17"Teeth, perfect and sharp, offered"
18"She held her ground as"
19"He now stood too close,"
ratio0.761
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"Yet, here he was, his"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He leaned in, his breath brushing the shell of her ear"
1"he called out, his voice echoing down the corridor to her flat"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"bourbon hinted (hint)"
1"he called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.143
85.4967%