Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZG1QF5N5WVYE797NZ9M

Run Details

Duration:
9.3s
Cost:
$0.024710
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in front of Eva's flat, her breath visible in the cold night air. She hesitated, her hand hovering over the door. The three deadbolts stared back at her, a reminder of the security Eva always insisted on. She took a deep breath, then knocked. The door creaked open, revealing Lucien Moreau. His heterochromatic eyes widened in surprise, the amber one catching the dim light from the hallway. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate as always. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth but tinged with something she couldn't quite place. "Lucien," she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. "I need to see Eva." "She's not here," he said, stepping aside to let her in. "But you knew that, didn't you?" Aurora stepped into the cramped flat, the familiar scent of old books and curry filling her nostrils. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meowed from his perch on a stack of books. She glanced around, noting the clutter of scrolls and research notes that covered every surface. "I didn't know," she said, turning to face him. "I just... needed to talk to her." Lucien closed the door, the deadbolts clicking into place. "You always did have a knack for showing up at the most inconvenient times." She crossed her arms, her bright blue eyes meeting his mismatched gaze. "And you always had a knack for being where you weren't wanted." He smirked, a hint of amusement in his eyes. "Touché." They stood in silence for a moment, the weight of their shared history hanging between them. Aurora's mind raced, memories of their past flashing before her eyes. The late-night conversations, the stolen glances, the unspoken words that had lingered between them. "Why are you here, Rory?" Lucien asked, his voice softer now. She looked away, her gaze falling on Ptolemy, who had curled up on a pile of papers. "I needed to get away. From everything." "From Evan?" he asked, his tone sharp. She flinched at the mention of her ex's name. "Yes. And no. It's complicated." Lucien took a step closer, his cane tapping softly on the wooden floor. "It always is with you." She met his gaze again, her eyes searching his face for any sign of the man she once knew. "Why are you here, Lucien?" He sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back platinum blond hair. "Eva asked me to look after the place while she's away. She didn't mention you'd be dropping by." "I didn't plan on it," she admitted. "I just... needed a place to think." He nodded, his expression unreadable. "You can stay. For tonight." "Thank you," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. He turned away, moving to the small kitchenette. "Tea?" "Sure," she replied, watching him as he filled the kettle. His movements were precise, almost mechanical, as if he were trying to keep himself busy. As the kettle boiled, Aurora wandered over to the window, looking out at the bustling street below. The neon signs of the curry houses cast a colorful glow on the pavement, and the sounds of laughter and conversation drifted up to the flat. "Do you ever miss it?" she asked, not turning around. "Miss what?" Lucien's voice came from behind her. "Us. What we had." He was silent for a moment, and she could feel his eyes on her back. "Sometimes," he admitted. "But we both know it couldn't have worked." She turned to face him, her heart aching at the truth in his words. "Why not?" He set the teapot on the table, his gaze meeting hers. "Because we're too different. You know that." "Different how?" she challenged, stepping closer. He sighed, his shoulders slumping slightly. "You're human, Rory. I'm not. And that will always be a barrier between us." She shook her head, frustration bubbling up inside her. "That's just an excuse. We could have made it work if we tried." "Maybe," he conceded. "But we didn't. And now here we are." She looked down at her hands, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist a stark reminder of her past. "I never stopped caring about you, Lucien." He reached out, his fingers brushing against her cheek. "I never stopped caring about you either, Rory. But sometimes, caring isn't enough." She closed her eyes, leaning into his touch. "I know." They stood there, the silence between them filled with unspoken words and lingering regrets. The kettle whistled, breaking the moment. Lucien turned away, pouring the tea into two mismatched mugs. "Here," he said, handing her one. "Thanks," she murmured, taking a sip. The warmth of the tea spread through her, soothing her frayed nerves. Lucien sat down at the small table, gesturing for her to join him. She hesitated for a moment before sitting across from him. They sipped their tea in silence, the weight of their past hanging heavy in the air. "Do you ever wonder what might have been?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "All the time," he admitted, his gaze fixed on his mug. "But wondering doesn't change anything." "No, it doesn't," she agreed. "But it helps to know I'm not the only one who thinks about it." He looked up, his eyes meeting hers. "You're not alone, Rory. You never were." She reached across the table, her fingers brushing against his. "I wish things were different." "Me too," he said, his voice filled with a quiet sadness. They sat there, their hands touching, the silence between them filled with the weight of their shared history. The world outside continued to move, but in that moment, it felt like time had stopped. "Maybe," she said, her voice trembling slightly. "Maybe we can start over. As friends." He smiled, a genuine warmth in his eyes. "I'd like that." She squeezed his hand, a small spark of hope igniting in her chest. "Me too." They sat there, their hands intertwined, the past slowly fading away as they looked towards an uncertain but hopeful future.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.404
leniency0.808
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1009
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1009
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"reminder"
count2
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"mechanical"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count2
highlights
0"reminder"
1"tinged"
2"familiar"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"raced"
6"unspoken"
7"unreadable"
8"whisper"
9"mechanical"
10"could feel"
11"stark"
12"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences69
matches
0"d in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1005
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount733
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva2
Lucien7
Moreau1
Aurora4
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"felt like time had stopped"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1005
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"notes that covered"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean19.33
std10.48
cv0.542
sampleLengths
047
136
214
316
417
545
616
723
824
910
1041
1111
1224
137
1414
1518
1624
1729
1814
1910
2010
219
2225
2343
2410
258
264
2726
2816
2918
306
3120
3222
3311
3427
3522
3610
3730
386
3918
4039
4116
4216
4319
4414
4515
4611
4734
4814
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs136
matches
0"were trying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences100
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount737
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.035278154681139755
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008141112618724558
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean10.05
std4.84
cv0.482
sampleLengths
016
18
216
37
47
516
613
714
811
95
1011
116
1217
1313
1415
159
167
179
1814
1912
2012
219
221
2316
2411
2514
2611
2717
287
297
309
315
3213
335
3419
355
3611
3718
387
397
405
415
4210
438
441
4510
4615
4717
4826
4910
57.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences65
matches
0"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
1"She took a deep breath,"
2"His heterochromatic eyes widened in"
3"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
4"he said, his voice smooth"
5"she replied, her voice steady"
6"he said, stepping aside to"
7"She glanced around, noting the"
8"she said, turning to face"
9"She crossed her arms, her"
10"He smirked, a hint of"
11"They stood in silence for"
12"She looked away, her gaze"
13"he asked, his tone sharp"
14"She flinched at the mention"
15"She met his gaze again,"
16"He sighed, running a hand"
17"He nodded, his expression unreadable."
18"she said, her voice barely"
19"He turned away, moving to"
ratio0.723
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences65
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood in front"
1"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
2"The three deadbolts stared back"
3"She took a deep breath,"
4"The door creaked open, revealing"
5"His heterochromatic eyes widened in"
6"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
7"he said, his voice smooth"
8"she replied, her voice steady"
9"he said, stepping aside to"
10"Aurora stepped into the cramped"
11"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meowed"
12"She glanced around, noting the"
13"she said, turning to face"
14"Lucien closed the door, the"
15"She crossed her arms, her"
16"He smirked, a hint of"
17"They stood in silence for"
18"Aurora's mind raced, memories of"
19"The late-night conversations, the stolen"
ratio0.985
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The late-night conversations, the stolen glances, the unspoken words that had lingered between them."
1"His movements were precise, almost mechanical, as if he were trying to keep himself busy."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
1"she said, turning to face him"
2"Lucien asked, his voice softer now"
3"he asked, his tone sharp"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"she asked, not turning around"
6"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"she said, her voice trembling slightly"
15.38% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"she challenged (challenge)"
3"he conceded (concede)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
5"he admitted (admit)"
6"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.35
effectiveRatio0.269
73.3825%