Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYYZG1XT0KZCE134JM69FR

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.036090
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn crouched beside the chalk outline, her knees creaking against the damp tiles of the abandoned Underground platform. The body had been removed hours ago, but the scene remained untouched - a mosaic of evidence markers dotting the grimy floor like fluorescent bread crumbs. The platform lights flickered, casting unstable shadows across the walls of the old Camden station. Three floors below street level, the air hung thick with the copper tang of blood mixed with decades of stale underground air. Quinn traced her finger along the edge of a strange marking scorched into the tiles. The pattern formed an incomplete circle, its lines jagged and deep, as if carved by lightning. Her worn leather watch ticked in the silence, marking time as she committed every detail to memory. "Looks like a standard robbery gone wrong to me." Detective Sanders shuffled closer, his shoes scuffing against the platform edge. "Victim probably stumbled onto someone's drug den. Wrong place, wrong time." Quinn's jaw tightened. "Then explain the lack of drug paraphernalia. No needles, no residue, nothing that suggests regular occupation." She stood with military precision, her movements economical. "And these marks - they're not from any tool I recognize." "Could be ritual stuff. Some kids playing with occult nonsense." Sanders shrugged, already reaching for his notebook to close the case. "The victim's possessions were untouched. Phone, wallet, jewelry - all still on the body." Quinn pulled out her phone, illuminating a small brass object half-hidden beneath a bench. "But this wasn't logged in evidence." She slipped on a latex glove and retrieved what appeared to be an antique compass, its case etched with intricate patterns that matched the scorched tiles. A patina of verdigris coated its surface, but the needle spun freely when she opened it. "Must've missed that in the initial sweep." Sanders peered over her shoulder. "Probably belonged to the victim." Quinn shook her head. "The victim was a twenty-year-old barista. This is something else." The compass needle whirred and settled, pointing not north, but directly at the wall behind them. A familiar voice cut through the gloom. "Detective Quinn?" Eva Kowalski stood at the far end of the platform, her round glasses reflecting the stuttering lights. Her curly red hair was pulled back, revealing a freckled face pinched with concern. She clutched her worn leather satchel close. "Ms. Kowalski. This is an active crime scene." Quinn straightened, slipping the compass into her pocket. "How did you get past the cordon?" Eva tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear. "I have clearance from the British Museum. We received an alert about potential historical artifacts in the area." She approached, her eyes darting to the scorched markings. "Though I suspect that's not why you're here." Sanders cleared his throat. "I'll go check the perimeter again." He retreated toward the escalators, leaving Quinn alone with the researcher. "Those markings," Eva said, crouching to examine them. "They're not random. They're part of a containment circle, but it's been broken." She traced the air above the scorched lines, careful not to touch them. Quinn crossed her arms. "Like the ones in the restricted archives you work with?" "Similar, but these are older. Much older." Eva pulled a leather-bound book from her satchel. "And they shouldn't be here. This station was supposed to be sealed decades ago, after the incident of '89." "What incident?" Eva's green eyes met Quinn's. "The one that was conveniently struck from all official records. The same year they supposedly closed this station for structural repairs." She glanced at Quinn's pocket, where the compass lay hidden. "I see you found the Veil Compass. It's pointing to something, isn't it?" Quinn's hand instinctively touched her pocket. The pieces began shifting in her mind, forming a picture she wasn't sure she wanted to see. It was the same feeling she'd had three years ago, the night she lost DS Morris. The platform lights flickered again, and in that moment of darkness, both women heard it - a sound like stone grinding against stone, coming from the wall where the compass pointed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Sanders shrugged already [already]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.542
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount683
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount683
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"mosaic"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"standard"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"mosaic"
1"flickered"
2"traced"
3"silence"
4"standard"
5"etched"
6"intricate"
7"familiar"
8"gloom"
9"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
63.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences36
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences47
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords683
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
27.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount448
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.46
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn11
Underground1
Camden1
Sanders4
Kowalski1
Eva5
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sanders"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.272
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
53.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.464
wordCount683
matches
0"not north, but directly at the wall behind them"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
72.47% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean31.05
std12.53
cv0.404
sampleLengths
046
137
248
331
438
521
634
742
817
930
109
1138
1223
1345
1421
1534
1614
1734
182
1949
2039
2131
85.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences36
matches
0"been removed"
1"was pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs81
matches(empty)
21.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences47
ratio0.043
matches
0"The body had been removed hours ago, but the scene remained untouched - a mosaic of evidence markers dotting the grimy floor like fluorescent bread crumbs."
1"The platform lights flickered again, and in that moment of darkness, both women heard it - a sound like stone grinding against stone, coming from the wall where the compass pointed."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount448
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.013392857142857142
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008928571428571428
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences47
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences47
mean14.53
std8.18
cv0.563
sampleLengths
020
126
215
322
415
516
617
720
811
93
1024
1111
1221
1328
146
1526
1616
1712
185
194
2026
217
222
2317
2414
257
2616
277
2810
2927
308
314
3217
338
3426
354
3610
3715
3819
392
405
4131
4213
436
4417
4516
4631
93.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.574468085106383
totalSentences47
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences36
matches
0"Her worn leather watch ticked"
1"She stood with military precision,"
2"She slipped on a latex"
3"Her curly red hair was"
4"She clutched her worn leather"
5"She approached, her eyes darting"
6"He retreated toward the escalators,"
7"She traced the air above"
8"She glanced at Quinn's pocket,"
9"It was the same feeling"
ratio0.278
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences36
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn crouched beside"
1"The body had been removed"
2"The platform lights flickered, casting"
3"Quinn traced her finger along"
4"The pattern formed an incomplete"
5"Her worn leather watch ticked"
6"Detective Sanders shuffled closer, his"
7"Quinn's jaw tightened."
8"She stood with military precision,"
9"Sanders shrugged, already reaching for"
10"Quinn pulled out her phone,"
11"She slipped on a latex"
12"A patina of verdigris coated"
13"Sanders peered over her shoulder"
14"Quinn shook her head."
15"The compass needle whirred and"
16"A familiar voice cut through"
17"Eva Kowalski stood at the"
18"Her curly red hair was"
19"She clutched her worn leather"
ratio0.972
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The pattern formed an incomplete circle, its lines jagged and deep, as if carved by lightning."
1"She slipped on a latex glove and retrieved what appeared to be an antique compass, its case etched with intricate patterns that matched the scorched tiles."
2"The pieces began shifting in her mind, forming a picture she wasn't sure she wanted to see."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Detective Sanders shuffled, his shoes scuffing against the platform edge"
1"She stood, her movements economical"
2"She approached, her eyes darting to the scorched markings"
3"Eva said, crouching to examine them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.042
leniency0.083
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.9867%