Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYZ2A8F5WNS6Q6A60GR0Q1

Run Details

Duration:
18.1s
Cost:
$0.007422

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and rust. Quinn stepped over the police tape, her boots clicking against the cracked tiles. The beam of her torch cut through the gloom, illuminating the graffiti-scarred walls and the single body sprawled across the tracks. "Evening, Quinn." DS Carter didn’t look up from his notepad. His tie was loose, sleeves rolled to the elbows. "Bit off the beaten path for a suicide, don’t you think?" Quinn crouched beside the victim. Mid-thirties, male, dressed in a rumpled suit. No wallet, no phone. Just a small brass compass clutched in his right hand, its needle spinning lazily before settling on nothing. "Unusual place to jump," she said. "No witnesses, no note. And this—" She pried the compass free, turning it over. The sigils etched into the casing were unfamiliar, but the verdigris patina spoke of age. "This isn’t standard issue." Carter exhaled through his nose. "Maybe he was into weird shit. You know how these occult types get. Probably thought he could summon a train." Quinn ignored the jab. The body lay too neatly. No blood spatter on the tracks, no broken bones from the fall. The man’s expression was calm, almost serene. Not the face of someone who’d just hurled themselves in front of a non-existent train. She stood, scanning the platform. The station’s old signs still hung from the ceiling, their paint peeling. Camden Town. But the air hummed with something else—something electric, like the charge before a storm. Her torch flickered. "Notice anything odd about the lighting?" she asked. Carter frowned. "What, the fact that half the bulbs are busted? Yeah, real mystery." "Not the bulbs." Quinn pointed. "The shadows. They’re moving." Carter’s smirk faltered. The shadows along the platform’s edge stretched unnaturally, pooling like ink despite the lack of any obvious light source. One of them twitched. "Right. And I’m the Queen of Sheba." Carter adjusted his tie, but his fingers trembled. "You’ve been working too hard, Quinn. Maybe take a holiday." Quinn stepped closer to the edge. The compass in her hand grew warm. The needle jerked, then steadied, pointing directly at the darkest patch of shadow beneath the platform. "That’s not possible," she muttered. Carter’s radio crackled. "DS Carter, we’ve got a situation topside. Possible disturbance near the Camden Lock." He hesitated, then shot Quinn a look. "You coming?" Quinn didn’t answer. She was too busy watching the shadow ripple, like water disturbed by a dropped stone. The compass burned against her palm. Carter sighed. "Fine. Stay here and talk to the ghosts. I’ll be upstairs." Quinn waited until his footsteps faded before kneeling again. The victim’s fingers had left faint imprints in the brass. She turned the compass over. The sigils weren’t just decorative. They were a ward. A ward against what? The shadow beneath the platform pulsed. A low, rhythmic thrum vibrated through the tracks, through her bones. The compass needle spun wildly now, a metronome gone mad. She stood, backing away. The air thickened, pressing against her skin. The torchlight dimmed, swallowed by the creeping dark. Then, a voice. "Not a suicide." Quinn spun. Eva Kowalski stood at the far end of the platform, her red curls catching the dim light. She adjusted her round glasses, fingers brushing the strap of her worn leather satchel. "Detective Quinn," Eva said. "You’re trespassing." Quinn’s grip tightened on the compass. "This is a crime scene." Eva stepped forward, her freckles stark against pale skin. "No. It’s a threshold." She nodded at the body. "He didn’t jump. He was pulled." The shadows coiled tighter. The compass seared Quinn’s palm. Eva’s voice dropped to a whisper. "And if you don’t leave now, you’ll be next."
total_cost0.007422

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount620
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount620
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"etched"
2"standard"
3"scanning"
4"electric"
5"flickered"
6"trembled"
7"footsteps"
8"pulsed"
9"rhythmic"
10"vibrated"
11"stark"
12"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords616
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount467
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Carter"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Carter7
Town1
Quinn11
Kowalski1
Eva4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places
0"Town"
globalScore0.322
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount616
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean20.53
std12.34
cv0.601
sampleLengths
044
130
234
339
425
543
636
78
814
99
1026
1125
1229
135
1416
159
1624
1713
1833
194
2027
2119
223
233
2433
256
2611
2724
289
2915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs81
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences77
ratio0.013
matches
0"But the air hummed with something else—something electric, like the charge before a storm."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount471
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"stark against pale skin."
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.036093418259023353
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.010615711252653927
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean8
std4.81
cv0.601
sampleLengths
010
113
221
310
49
511
65
77
84
918
106
1114
1215
134
145
1520
164
175
1812
197
2015
215
2212
232
2414
253
268
272
2812
295
304
313
3219
334
3415
3510
366
377
3816
395
403
4113
427
432
443
4515
466
472
4811
499
65.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4155844155844156
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"Just a small brass compass"
1"Then, a voice."
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences54
matches
0"His tie was loose, sleeves"
1"She pried the compass free,"
2"She stood, scanning the platform."
3"Her torch flickered."
4"He hesitated, then shot Quinn"
5"She was too busy watching"
6"She turned the compass over."
7"They were a ward."
8"She stood, backing away."
9"She adjusted her round glasses,"
10"She nodded at the body"
ratio0.204
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences54
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled"
1"Quinn stepped over the police"
2"The beam of her torch"
3"DS Carter didn’t look up"
4"His tie was loose, sleeves"
5"Quinn crouched beside the victim."
6"She pried the compass free,"
7"The sigils etched into the"
8"Carter exhaled through his nose."
9"Quinn ignored the jab."
10"The body lay too neatly."
11"The man’s expression was calm,"
12"She stood, scanning the platform."
13"The station’s old signs still"
14"Her torch flickered."
15"Carter’s smirk faltered."
16"The shadows along the platform’s"
17"Carter adjusted his tie, but"
18"Quinn stepped closer to the"
19"The compass in her hand"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Just a small brass compass clutched in his right hand, its needle spinning lazily before settling on nothing."
1"Not the face of someone who’d just hurled themselves in front of a non-existent train."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Carter adjusted, but his fingers trembled"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.087
84.8624%