Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYZ32071BVEM96Q08Z1S84

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Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.000256

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before the first knock had fully faded, the hinges groaning like an old man’s breath. Aurora Carter froze mid-step, her fingers tightening around the worn leather of her messenger bag. The air in the hallway shifted, thick with the scent of bergamot and something darker—something that made her pulse jump even after all these years. Lucien Moreau stood there, his tailored charcoal suit stretching over broad shoulders, the platinum blond hair slicked back in that familiar way that made her throat tighten. One hand rested on the ivory-handled cane, the other lifted in a half-salute, half-question. His amber eye caught the dim light from the streetlamp, the black one watching her like it remembered every secret she’d ever kept. "You’re not supposed to be here," she said, voice steadier than she felt. A faint smirk curled his lips. "I’m never supposed to be anywhere, Rory. But here I am." His cane tapped once against the floorboards, a sharp *click* that echoed in the quiet. "Eva’s not home. Thought I’d take the opportunity." Aurora’s jaw clenched. "She’s not expecting you." "She knows I’m here." His gaze flicked past her, to the flat’s single window, where a single light glowed yellow behind the curtains. "She always does." The words hung between them, heavy with meaning neither wanted to name. She stepped back, letting him enter, but only because she knew better than to argue with a man who could make doors open with a word and promises unravel with a touch. The flat smelled of spiced tea and old paper—Eva’s domain, cluttered with books and half-finished research. Ptolemy, the tabby, materialised from under a stack of scrolls, tail lashing, before curling into a tight ball at her feet. Lucien didn’t move from the doorway. "You look well." Aurora exhaled through her nose, rubbing the back of her neck. "So do you." A pause. The kind that stretched longer than it should have. Then, because she couldn’t stand it: "You’re bleeding." His hand—smooth, unmarked—pressed against his ribs where the sleeve of his jacket had rucked up. A thin line of red seeped through the fabric. "A scratch. Nothing a little demon blood won’t fix." She rolled her eyes, but her fingers twitched toward her bag. "You’re lucky it’s not worse." "Is that a threat or an offer?" She opened her mouth, then closed it. The air between them crackled, charged with something neither of them dared name. The last time they’d been this close, she’d run. The last time he’d let her. Lucien stepped forward, the cane thudding against the floor. "You’ve been avoiding me." "Not avoiding," she corrected, though her voice lacked conviction. "Just… busy." He tilted his head, studying her. "Delivering takeout for a Chinese restaurant isn’t exactly a life-or-death mission." Aurora bristled. "It pays the rent." "And keeps you alive." His gaze dropped to her wrist, where the scar from childhood—small, crescent-shaped—peaked from beneath her sleeve. He remembered. Of course he did. "You still wear that thing like a badge." She yanked her arm back, but not before he saw. "It’s not a badge." "It’s a reminder." His voice dropped, rough with something she couldn’t name. "Of what you’ve survived." She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him she didn’t need reminders, that she’d moved on. But the words stuck in her throat. Instead, she turned toward the kitchen, where the kettle hummed on the stove. "Tea?" Lucien didn’t answer right away. When he did, his voice was low, deliberate. "Only if you’re not trying to poison me." Aurora paused mid-reach for the mugs. "I’d never—" "Wouldn’t you?" His smile was slow, dangerous. "You’ve got a reputation for doing exactly what you’re not supposed to." She turned, hands clenched around the mugs. "And you’ve got a reputation for being a liar." "True." He followed her into the kitchen, the cane tapping against the tiles. "But I’m not lying now. I need your help." Aurora froze. The kettle’s whistle filled the silence. "What kind of help?" His gaze locked onto hers. "The kind that involves you and me, working together." She set the mugs down too hard. "That’s not happening." "Why not?" He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the faintest flicker of gold in his black eye. "We’ve always worked well together." Aurora’s breath hitched. She remembered. The nights they’d spent in back alleys, him teaching her how to pick locks, how to disappear. The way his hands had felt against hers when he’d shown her how to fight. The way he’d kissed her once, right after, like he couldn’t help himself. She swallowed. "Things change." "Not always." His voice dropped, rough. "Some things stay the same." Aurora’s fingers trembled around the mug handle. She wanted to tell him to leave. Wanted to scream at him for showing up like this, for making her remember. But the kettle boiled, steam curling into the air between them, and the scent of Earl Grey filled the room. She turned away. "Fine. But I’m not doing this for you." "Then do it for yourself." Aurora didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The kettle’s whistle was the only sound in the room, loud and insistent, as she poured the water and let the silence stretch between them. Somewhere in the distance, a siren wailed, sharp and urgent. The kind of sound that made her think of running. But she wasn’t running anymore. Lucien watched her, his gaze never leaving her face. "You’re still here." Aurora didn’t look at him. "I’m always here." A beat. Then, from the doorway, the faintest sound—a *thud*, like something heavy had been dropped. Ptolemy’s tail lashed against the floorboards, his green eyes fixed on them both. Lucien exhaled, slow and deliberate. "Eva’s home." Aurora didn’t turn. "Good." The door creaked open behind them. Eva’s voice cut through the silence, sharp and amused. "Took you long enough." Aurora didn’t move. Didn’t look. But she knew, without turning, that Lucien was already stepping back, the cane tapping against the floor as he retreated into the hallway. Eva’s laughter followed him out, bright and unguarded. "You’re still an idiot, you know that?" Aurora waited until the door had closed behind him before she finally turned. The mug of tea sat untouched on the counter, steam curling into the air. She picked it up. Sipped. The kettle’s whistle faded into the background. Somewhere, a car horn blared. The city hummed around them, indifferent. Aurora set the mug down. "I need to know what he wants." Eva leaned against the doorway, arms crossed. "You always did have a soft spot for trouble." Aurora didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The kettle’s whistle was the only sound in the room, loud and insistent, as she reached for her bag.
total_cost0.0002559

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His cane tapped once [once]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.042
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"jaw clenched"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"unravel"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"familiar"
2"echoed"
3"jaw clenched"
4"flicked"
5"unravel"
6"charged"
7"reminder"
8"silence"
9"flicker"
10"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1130
ratio0.002
matches
0"click"
1"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount894
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Aurora15
Eva4
Earl1
Grey1
Lucien7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Earl"
5"Grey"
6"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.661
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1130
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"turning, that Lucien"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean20.93
std16.61
cv0.794
sampleLengths
059
164
213
340
47
526
681
79
814
917
102
1133
1216
137
1435
1513
1611
1717
186
1934
2014
2116
2237
2321
248
2519
2616
2722
2812
2914
3010
3125
3250
334
3411
3548
3611
375
3852
395
4012
418
4229
437
444
4519
4628
4715
4827
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"been dropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs171
matches
0"wasn’t running"
34.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences132
ratio0.038
matches
0"The air in the hallway shifted, thick with the scent of bergamot and something darker—something that made her pulse jump even after all these years."
1"The flat smelled of spiced tea and old paper—Eva’s domain, cluttered with books and half-finished research."
2"His hand—smooth, unmarked—pressed against his ribs where the sleeve of his jacket had rucked up."
3"\"And keeps you alive.\" His gaze dropped to her wrist, where the scar from childhood—small, crescent-shaped—peaked from beneath her sleeve."
4"Then, from the doorway, the faintest sound—a *thud*, like something heavy had been dropped."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount908
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"smooth, unmarked—pressed against his"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03634361233480176
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005506607929515419
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean8.56
std6.35
cv0.742
sampleLengths
019
115
225
327
414
523
613
76
826
98
103
114
1223
133
1412
1532
1616
1721
186
193
2011
213
222
239
246
252
2615
279
289
2911
305
317
327
3313
349
356
369
374
389
392
406
4111
422
434
4420
452
464
478
4810
494
45.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3106060606060606
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then, because she couldn’t stand"
1"Of course he did."
2"Instead, she turned toward the"
3"Somewhere in the distance, a"
4"Then, from the doorway, the"
5"Somewhere, a car horn blared."
ratio0.071
97.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences85
matches
0"His amber eye caught the"
1"she said, voice steadier than"
2"His cane tapped once against"
3"His gaze flicked past her,"
4"She stepped back, letting him"
5"His hand—smooth, unmarked—pressed against his"
6"She rolled her eyes, but"
7"She opened her mouth, then"
8"she corrected, though her voice"
9"He tilted his head, studying"
10"His gaze dropped to her"
11"She yanked her arm back,"
12"His voice dropped, rough with"
13"She wanted to argue."
14"His smile was slow, dangerous"
15"She turned, hands clenched around"
16"He followed her into the"
17"His gaze locked onto hers."
18"She set the mugs down"
19"He stepped closer, close enough"
ratio0.306
42.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences85
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Aurora Carter froze mid-step, her"
2"The air in the hallway"
3"Lucien Moreau stood there, his"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"she said, voice steadier than"
6"A faint smirk curled his"
7"His cane tapped once against"
8"Aurora’s jaw clenched."
9"His gaze flicked past her,"
10"The words hung between them,"
11"She stepped back, letting him"
12"The flat smelled of spiced"
13"Ptolemy, the tabby, materialised from"
14"Lucien didn’t move from the"
15"Aurora exhaled through her nose,"
16"The kind that stretched longer"
17"His hand—smooth, unmarked—pressed against his"
18"A thin line of red"
19"She rolled her eyes, but"
ratio0.835
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air in the hallway shifted, thick with the scent of bergamot and something darker—something that made her pulse jump even after all these years."
1"Lucien Moreau stood there, his tailored charcoal suit stretching over broad shoulders, the platinum blond hair slicked back in that familiar way that made her t…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, voice steadier than she felt"
1"she corrected, though her voice lacked conviction"
2"He followed, the cane tapping against the tiles"
3"His voice dropped, rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.042
leniency0.083
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.042
84.0167%