Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYZ8YQ6RWAX7K5N1HGF93F

Run Details

Duration:
33.9s
Cost:
$0.012924

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube tunnel reeked of damp concrete and something sharper—copper, maybe, or the acrid tang of old batteries. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a puddle of murky water, her boots splashing against the cracked tiles. The beam of her torch carved a path through the gloom, illuminating graffiti-scarred walls and the flicker of police tape strung haphazardly between rusted support beams. "Quinn. Over here." The voice came from deeper in the tunnel, gruff but familiar. DS Carter stood near a cluster of uniformed officers, his broad shoulders hunched as he shone his own light at something on the ground. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her wrist, the strap loose enough to slide easily. "What’ve we got?" Carter didn’t look up. "Male, mid-thirties. No ID. Wallet’s empty, but the cash slot’s intact. No signs of a struggle." He gestured to the body sprawled against the curved wall, limbs splayed at unnatural angles. The man’s face was frozen in an expression of surprise, mouth slightly open, eyes wide and unblinking. Quinn crouched, her knees protesting the movement. The victim’s clothes were expensive—tailored wool coat, polished leather shoes—but the fabric was damp, clinging to his skin. She reached out, fingers hovering just above the man’s wrist. No rigor. Not yet. "Time of death?" she asked. "Less than two hours. Body’s still warm." Carter finally met her gaze, his jaw set. "Looks like a mugging gone wrong. Maybe he took a wrong turn, ended up down here. Easy target." Quinn’s torchlight caught something glinting near the victim’s outstretched hand. She shifted, angling the beam. A small brass compass, its face etched with strange symbols. The needle spun lazily, not pointing north. She picked it up, turning it over in her palm. The casing had a patina of verdigris, the metal cool against her skin. "This isn’t standard issue." Carter frowned. "What?" "Compass. Doesn’t look like any hiking gear I’ve seen." She tapped the glass face. The needle twitched, then stilled, pointing toward the tunnel wall. "And it’s not pointing north." "Maybe it’s broken." "Maybe." She slipped it into her coat pocket. "But why’s it here?" Carter exhaled sharply. "You’re overcomplicating this. Guy gets jumped, drops his weird compass, dies. End of story." Quinn stood, brushing dirt from her trousers. The tunnel stretched ahead, the darkness swallowing the beam of her torch after a few metres. Something about the scene itched at the back of her neck. The lack of struggle. The empty wallet. The compass. She turned to one of the uniforms. "Any witnesses?" The officer shook his head. "No one’s come forward. We’re canvassing the area, but you know how it is down here. People don’t talk." Quinn nodded. She did know. Camden’s underbelly had a way of swallowing secrets whole. Carter stepped closer, lowering his voice. "Look, Quinn, I get it. You’re thorough. But this isn’t some grand conspiracy. It’s a dead guy in a tunnel. Probably drugs, probably debt. We’ll run his prints, see if he’s got a record." She didn’t answer. Instead, she walked to the wall where the compass had pointed. The concrete was smooth, unmarked. No blood, no scratches. Just a blank stretch of grey. She ran her fingers along the surface, pressing lightly. The wall was cold, but not uniformly so. A patch near the base radiated a faint warmth, like the last embers of a fire. Carter watched her, arms crossed. "What are you doing?" "Feeling for drafts." "There’s no draft." She ignored him, pressing her palm flat against the warm spot. The concrete vibrated, just slightly, like the hum of a distant engine. She pulled her hand back. "You feel that?" Carter’s frown deepened. "Feel what?" "The vibration. Like something’s running behind this wall." He stepped forward, pressing his own hand against the concrete. "I don’t feel anything." Quinn didn’t push it. She knew what she’d felt. She also knew Carter wouldn’t believe her. Not yet. She turned back to the body. The victim’s coat had ridden up slightly, exposing his wrist. A thin, pale line circled it, like a rope burn. But there were no fibres, no residue. Just a clean, unbroken mark. She crouched again, this time examining the man’s shoes. The soles were scuffed, but not in the way they should be if he’d been running. The scuffs were precise, almost deliberate, as if someone had dragged the tips along the ground to leave a trail. Carter sighed. "Quinn, what the hell are you looking at now?" "His shoes. They’re not scuffed from running. They’re scuffed from being dragged." "Or he was drunk and tripped." She stood, shaking her head. "No. He wasn’t drunk. No alcohol in his system, no smell on his breath. And look at his hands." She pointed to the victim’s fingers. They were clean, nails neatly trimmed. No defensive wounds. No dirt under the nails. "He didn’t fight back. Didn’t even try." Carter’s patience was wearing thin. "So what? He froze. Happens." "Not like this." She walked back to the compass in her pocket, pulling it out again. The needle was still now, pointing directly at the warm spot in the wall. "This isn’t a mugging. It’s a message." Carter threw his hands up. "A message? From who? The ghost of the Tube?" Quinn didn’t smile. "I don’t know. But I know this compass isn’t normal. And I know that wall isn’t just concrete." She turned to the uniformed officer. "Get me a sledgehammer." Carter’s eyes widened. "You can’t be serious." "I’m very serious." The officer hesitated, then nodded. "I’ll see what we’ve got in the van." Carter grabbed Quinn’s arm as the officer walked away. "You’re going to tear up a crime scene on a hunch?" She pulled her arm free. "It’s not a hunch. It’s evidence. And it’s pointing at that wall." Carter’s jaw tightened. "You’re obsessed. Ever since Morris—" "Don’t." Her voice was sharp, cutting him off. "Don’t bring him into this." Carter held her gaze for a long moment, then looked away. "Fine. But when this turns out to be nothing, it’s on you." The officer returned with a sledgehammer, the head wrapped in plastic. Quinn took it, weighing it in her hands. She positioned herself in front of the warm spot, raising the hammer. Carter stepped back. "Christ, Quinn." She swung. The first hit sent a crack spiderwebbing through the concrete. The second widened it, chunks of plaster and dust raining down. The third broke through. Behind the wall, the darkness wasn’t empty. A narrow passage stretched into the black, the air thick with the scent of old incense and something metallic. The walls were lined with symbols, carved deep into the stone. Quinn shone her torch inside. The beam caught on something—a small, curved bone, hanging from a rusted hook. Carter’s breath hitched. "What the hell is this?" Quinn didn’t answer. She stepped forward, the torchlight flickering over the symbols. They weren’t random. They were deliberate. Protective. And then she saw the token. It lay on the ground near the entrance, half-buried in dust. A small, white bone, carved with the same symbols as the compass. She picked it up, turning it over in her fingers. "This is a key." Carter’s voice was tight. "A key to what?" Quinn looked at the passage, then at the body behind her. The compass in her pocket was warm now, the needle spinning wildly. She didn’t know what this place was. But she knew one thing for certain. The victim hadn’t died in a mugging. He’d died trying to get out.
total_cost0.012924

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.042
72.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1269
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lazily"
2"sharply"
3"lightly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1269
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"standard"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"flicker"
2"familiar"
3"glinting"
4"etched"
5"standard"
6"warmth"
7"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences114
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1262
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount914
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Carter"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Carter"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn12
Carter19
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Carter"
places(empty)
globalScore0.461
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1262
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean20.35
std15.68
cv0.77
sampleLengths
065
138
219
352
439
55
633
732
827
93
1029
113
1212
1317
1443
159
1624
1714
1840
1962
209
213
223
2331
245
258
2614
2718
2838
2945
3011
3112
326
3351
3410
3537
3614
3731
387
393
4013
4120
4217
438
4413
4523
4631
475
482
4925
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences114
matches
0"was frozen"
1"were scuffed"
2"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was wearing"
86.47% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences152
ratio0.02
matches
0"The air in the abandoned Tube tunnel reeked of damp concrete and something sharper—copper, maybe, or the acrid tang of old batteries."
1"The victim’s clothes were expensive—tailored wool coat, polished leather shoes—but the fabric was damp, clinging to his skin."
2"The beam caught on something—a small, curved bone, hanging from a rusted hook."
92.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount920
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"illuminating graffiti-scarred walls"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.041304347826086954
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.015217391304347827
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean8.3
std6.02
cv0.725
sampleLengths
022
117
226
314
424
516
63
74
831
917
107
1118
1210
132
142
155
1615
1718
1810
195
2010
217
2210
2313
244
252
261
2714
2810
295
303
318
324
333
3414
357
3616
3711
384
393
402
417
422
435
4419
452
463
479
486
4934
43.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.27631578947368424
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners42
96.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Instead, she walked to the"
1"Just a blank stretch of"
2"Just a clean, unbroken mark."
ratio0.029
93.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences104
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"He gestured to the body"
2"She reached out, fingers hovering"
3"She shifted, angling the beam."
4"She picked it up, turning"
5"She tapped the glass face"
6"She slipped it into her"
7"She turned to one of"
8"She did know."
9"She didn’t answer."
10"She ran her fingers along"
11"She ignored him, pressing her"
12"She pulled her hand back."
13"He stepped forward, pressing his"
14"She knew what she’d felt."
15"She also knew Carter wouldn’t"
16"She turned back to the"
17"She crouched again, this time"
18"She stood, shaking her head."
19"She pointed to the victim’s"
ratio0.317
8.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences104
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"The beam of her torch"
3"The voice came from deeper"
4"DS Carter stood near a"
5"She adjusted the worn leather"
6"Carter didn’t look up."
7"He gestured to the body"
8"The man’s face was frozen"
9"Quinn crouched, her knees protesting"
10"The victim’s clothes were expensive—tailored"
11"She reached out, fingers hovering"
12"Carter finally met her gaze,"
13"Quinn’s torchlight caught something glinting"
14"She shifted, angling the beam."
15"A small brass compass, its"
16"The needle spun lazily, not"
17"She picked it up, turning"
18"The casing had a patina"
19"She tapped the glass face"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.021
leniency0.042
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.3438%