| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 735 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 735 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "lurched" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "transfixed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 722 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.88% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 555 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.34 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Isolde | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Nyx | 5 | | London | 1 | | Mushrooms | 1 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Mushrooms" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.329 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite hold its shape" | | 1 | "stones that seemed to float just above the ground" | | 2 | "looked like black glass" | | 3 | "felt like a crude sketch compared to th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 722 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.14% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 30.08 | | std | 12 | | cv | 0.399 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 54 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt it too—a shimmer in the air that made her eyes want to slide sideways, as if reality itself couldn't quite hold its shape." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—varieties that shouldn't bloom together, shouldn't bloom at all in winter." | | 2 | "Aurora's reflection showed more than just her face—glimpses of other selves, other moments, rippling beneath the surface." | | 3 | "The grove felt alive in a way that transcended normal understanding of the word—ancient, aware, watching." | | 4 | "Aurora nodded, but found herself transfixed by the impossible beauty of it all—the luminous flowers, the singing air, the stars that moved in ways stars shouldn't." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 567 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.02821869488536155 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.001763668430335097 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 54 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 93.01% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 54 | | mean | 13.37 | | std | 5.11 | | cv | 0.383 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 68.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 54 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bare feet made no" | | 1 | "It pulsed with unusual warmth," | | 2 | "Her stomach lurched as if" | | 3 | "Their petals glowed with subtle" | | 4 | "Her pendant's warmth intensified, and" |
| | ratio | 0.116 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "The crescent moon cast strange" | | 1 | "Nyx glided beside them, their" | | 2 | "The night air grew thick" | | 3 | "Isolde's silver hair gleamed despite" | | 4 | "Her bare feet made no" | | 5 | "Aurora's hand drifted to the" | | 6 | "It pulsed with unusual warmth," | | 7 | "The Fae blade at her" | | 8 | "Isolde pointed to a ring" | | 9 | "The trees looked as if" | | 10 | "Isolde's voice carried on the" | | 11 | "Nyx drifted closer to one" | | 12 | "Aurora felt it too—a shimmer" | | 13 | "Isolde stepped through the gap" | | 14 | "Isolde called back" | | 15 | "Aurora took a deep breath" | | 16 | "The world twisted, folded, reformed." | | 17 | "Her stomach lurched as if" | | 18 | "The grove beyond the threshold" | | 19 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" |
| | ratio | 0.977 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 10.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air grew thick with an otherworldly presence that made Aurora's skin prickle." | | 1 | "The trees looked as if they'd grown into the shapes of standing stones, their bark rippling with patterns that shouldn't exist in nature." | | 2 | "Aurora felt it too—a shimmer in the air that made her eyes want to slide sideways, as if reality itself couldn't quite hold its shape." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—varieties that shouldn't bloom together, shouldn't bloom at all in winter." | | 4 | "The grove felt alive in a way that transcended normal understanding of the word—ancient, aware, watching." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, careful to stay on the path as they ventured deeper" |
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| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.136 | | leniency | 0.273 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |