Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYZQNPAJJAQKNE50RA2SNK

Run Details

Duration:
31.1s
Cost:
$0.043920
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crescent moon cast strange shadows through the ancient oaks as Aurora followed Isolde deeper into Richmond Park. Nyx glided beside them, their shadowy form rippling like ink in water. The night air grew thick with an otherworldly presence that made Aurora's skin prickle. "The boundary approaches." Isolde's silver hair gleamed despite the darkness. Her bare feet made no sound on the leaf-strewn ground. Aurora's hand drifted to the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It pulsed with unusual warmth, though they weren't near any Hel portals that she knew of. The Fae blade at her hip grew colder in response. "There." Isolde pointed to a ring of massive oak trees ahead, their trunks twisted into strange formations. "The standing stones await our passage." "Those aren't stones," Aurora whispered. The trees looked as if they'd grown into the shapes of standing stones, their bark rippling with patterns that shouldn't exist in nature. "Time and magic blur many boundaries." Isolde's voice carried on the breeze. "What begins as one thing may become another, given centuries to transform." Nyx drifted closer to one of the tree-stones, their violet eyes narrowing. "The Veil runs thin here. Like tissue paper stretched too far." Aurora felt it too—a shimmer in the air that made her eyes want to slide sideways, as if reality itself couldn't quite hold its shape. Isolde stepped through the gap between two of the tree-stones, and the air rippled like disturbed water. "Mind your step," Isolde called back. "The threshold can be... temperamental." Aurora took a deep breath and followed. The world twisted, folded, reformed. Her stomach lurched as if she'd missed a step on a staircase. The grove beyond the threshold stole her breath. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—varieties that shouldn't bloom together, shouldn't bloom at all in winter. Their petals glowed with subtle phosphorescence, casting pools of soft color across the clearing. The air tasted of honey and spring rain. "Beautiful and dangerous in equal measure." Nyx's whisper-voice carried a note of warning. "Like all things Fae." Above them, stars wheeled in patterns Aurora had never seen, too bright and too numerous for London's light-polluted sky. A path wound through the flowers, formed of stepping stones that seemed to float just above the ground. "How long has this place existed?" Aurora asked, careful to stay on the path as they ventured deeper. "Time flows strangely here." Isolde brushed her fingers along a cluster of ghost-white flowers that chimed like tiny bells. "The grove remembers the footsteps of Roman centurions, yet also recalls futures that haven't come to pass." The path led them to a pool of water so still it looked like black glass. Aurora's reflection showed more than just her face—glimpses of other selves, other moments, rippling beneath the surface. "Don't stare too long," Nyx warned, pulling her back by the shoulder. "Such waters have a way of drawing in the unwary." Mushrooms grew in spiral patterns around the pool's edge, their caps iridescent. The air grew heavier with magic, making Aurora's teeth ache. Her pendant's warmth intensified, and the Fae blade hummed against her hip. "The grove knows you now." Isolde turned to face them, her pale lavender eyes reflecting starlight. "It will remember your passage, your presence. Time moves differently here—an hour might pass outside, or a day. We must be mindful." A wind that wasn't wind stirred the flowers, carrying whispers in languages Aurora had never heard. The tree-stones at the boundary seemed much further away now, though she couldn't remember walking that far. The grove felt alive in a way that transcended normal understanding of the word—ancient, aware, watching. "Why does it feel like we're being observed?" Aurora's voice came out smaller than intended. "Because we are." Isolde smiled her cryptic smile. "The grove sees all who enter. Judges all who linger. Best not to overstay our welcome." Nyx's shadowy form rippled with tension. "The Veil grows restless. We should complete our purpose here and depart." Aurora nodded, but found herself transfixed by the impossible beauty of it all—the luminous flowers, the singing air, the stars that moved in ways stars shouldn't. This pocket of space between Earth and Fae held more wonders and terrors than she'd imagined possible. The mortal world felt like a crude sketch compared to the vivid reality of the grove.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:27:05.92Z" 2/19/2026, 3:27:05 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount735
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount735
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"lurched"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"transfixed"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"stomach"
4"lurched"
5"whisper"
6"footsteps"
7"tension"
8"transfixed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences54
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords722
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount555
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.34
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Isolde9
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Hel1
Fae3
Nyx5
London1
Mushrooms1
Earth1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Fae"
3"Nyx"
4"Mushrooms"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
3"London"
globalScore0.329
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite hold its shape"
1"stones that seemed to float just above the ground"
2"looked like black glass"
3"felt like a crude sketch compared to th"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount722
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
71.14% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean30.08
std12
cv0.399
sampleLengths
044
120
236
323
428
524
623
742
811
924
1047
1117
1237
1318
1436
1533
1622
1734
1838
1949
2015
2124
2218
2359
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences54
ratio0.093
matches
0"Aurora felt it too—a shimmer in the air that made her eyes want to slide sideways, as if reality itself couldn't quite hold its shape."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—varieties that shouldn't bloom together, shouldn't bloom at all in winter."
2"Aurora's reflection showed more than just her face—glimpses of other selves, other moments, rippling beneath the surface."
3"The grove felt alive in a way that transcended normal understanding of the word—ancient, aware, watching."
4"Aurora nodded, but found herself transfixed by the impossible beauty of it all—the luminous flowers, the singing air, the stars that moved in ways stars shouldn't."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount567
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02821869488536155
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001763668430335097
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences54
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
93.01% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences54
mean13.37
std5.11
cv0.383
sampleLengths
018
112
214
310
410
510
616
710
817
96
105
1123
1212
1312
1412
1511
1625
1717
186
195
207
215
2212
238
2417
2514
268
2713
284
2919
3018
3118
3219
3317
3416
3517
3612
3710
3812
3910
4012
4116
4222
4316
4417
4516
4615
478
4816
496
68.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences54
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences43
matches
0"Her bare feet made no"
1"It pulsed with unusual warmth,"
2"Her stomach lurched as if"
3"Their petals glowed with subtle"
4"Her pendant's warmth intensified, and"
ratio0.116
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences43
matches
0"The crescent moon cast strange"
1"Nyx glided beside them, their"
2"The night air grew thick"
3"Isolde's silver hair gleamed despite"
4"Her bare feet made no"
5"Aurora's hand drifted to the"
6"It pulsed with unusual warmth,"
7"The Fae blade at her"
8"Isolde pointed to a ring"
9"The trees looked as if"
10"Isolde's voice carried on the"
11"Nyx drifted closer to one"
12"Aurora felt it too—a shimmer"
13"Isolde stepped through the gap"
14"Isolde called back"
15"Aurora took a deep breath"
16"The world twisted, folded, reformed."
17"Her stomach lurched as if"
18"The grove beyond the threshold"
19"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
ratio0.977
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
10.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The night air grew thick with an otherworldly presence that made Aurora's skin prickle."
1"The trees looked as if they'd grown into the shapes of standing stones, their bark rippling with patterns that shouldn't exist in nature."
2"Aurora felt it too—a shimmer in the air that made her eyes want to slide sideways, as if reality itself couldn't quite hold its shape."
3"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—varieties that shouldn't bloom together, shouldn't bloom at all in winter."
4"The grove felt alive in a way that transcended normal understanding of the word—ancient, aware, watching."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora asked, careful to stay on the path as they ventured deeper"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.182
71.6845%