| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx wondered aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0.05 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 85.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1025 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1025 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "tapestry" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "down her spine" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "grave" | | 8 | "beacon" | | 9 | "enigmatic" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "profound" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 52.54% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "g with wonder" | | 1 | "felt a shiver" | | 2 | "filled with determination" | | 3 | "d with determination" |
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| 18.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1021 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.22% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 598 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 16 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Half-Fae | 3 | | Seer | 2 | | Isolde | 12 | | Fae | 5 | | Courts | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Understanding | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Understanding" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.162 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1021 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.15% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 30.94 | | std | 14.73 | | cv | 0.476 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 36 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove was more than just a hidden clearing in Richmond Park; it was a doorway to another realm." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 601 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.026622296173044926 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009983361064891847 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 15.01 | | std | 7.18 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 37 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 73.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4852941176470588 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice like" | | 1 | "She knew Isolde was ageless," | | 2 | "Her cryptic speech, an echo" | | 3 | "she said, touching the warm" | | 4 | "She turned, her dress of" | | 5 | "They continued their exploration, discovering" |
| | ratio | 0.14 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora, or Rory as she" | | 1 | "The air crackled with energy," | | 2 | "The grove was more than" | | 3 | "The world seemed to stretch" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, their violet eyes" | | 5 | "The grass beneath their feet" | | 6 | "The air smelled of honey" | | 7 | "Isolde, the Half-Fae oracle, approached" | | 8 | "she said, her voice like" | | 9 | "Rory felt a shiver run" | | 10 | "Isolde's silver hair flowed around" | | 11 | "She knew Isolde was ageless," | | 12 | "Her cryptic speech, an echo" | | 13 | "Rory replied, her voice steady" | | 14 | "The oracle's eyes drifted to" | | 15 | "Nyx added, their form solidifying" | | 16 | "Isolde said, her words an" | | 17 | "Rory nodded, recalling the faint" | | 18 | "she said, touching the warm" | | 19 | "Isolde's smile held a hint" |
| | ratio | 0.977 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "They continued their exploration, discovering new wonders around every bend: A stream where water sang like a choir, trees whose branches held golden fruit, and…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their violet eyes shimmering with wonder" | | 1 | "Rory replied, her voice steady despite the thrill of adrenaline" | | 2 | "Nyx added, their form solidifying from the living shadow they usually favoured" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her words an odd mix of riddle and statement" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her eyes softening" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 2 | "Nyx added (add)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Rory smiled (smile)" | | 5 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "the Half-Fae agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.381 | | leniency | 0.762 | | rawRatio | 0.438 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |