Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSYZQSM82DARKEQ0VXHZ75S

Run Details

Duration:
40.2s
Cost:
$0.018712
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora, or Rory as she was called by her friends, stepped through the ancient oak boundary stones, her heart quickening. The air crackled with energy, an electric hum in her veins. The grove was more than just a hidden clearing in Richmond Park; it was a doorway to another realm. The world seemed to stretch and distort as they crossed the threshold, the trees and sunlight transforming around them. "Wow," Nyx whispered, their violet eyes shimmering with wonder. "It's like we've stepped into a painting." The grass beneath their feet had turned into a vibrant tapestry of wildflowers, each petal glowing with an inner light. The air smelled of honey and fresh rain, and a gentle breeze carried distant laughter and music. Isolde, the Half-Fae oracle, approached with a graceful, otherworldly gait, leaving no footprints in her wake. "Welcome, travellers," she said, her voice like a chiming bell. "To your eyes, this realm is hidden, a secret place where the Fae and humans meet." Rory felt a shiver run down her spine as she took in the ethereal beauty of the Seer. Isolde's silver hair flowed around her like a river, and her pale lavender eyes seemed to see right through Rory. She knew Isolde was ageless, an exile from the Fae Courts, and the knowledge filled her with equal parts awe and unease. "You've come seeking guidance, Aurora Carter," Isolde continued. "And wisdom comes at a cost." Her cryptic speech, an echo of her Fae lineage, reminded Rory of the otherworldly nature of their journey. "We're here for answers, Seer," Rory replied, her voice steady despite the thrill of adrenaline. "About the Heartstone Pendant and the Fae-forged blade." The oracle's eyes drifted to the crimson pendant hanging around Rory's neck. "Ah, the Heartstone. It pulses with the essence of Hel, a remnant of the Dymasian realm of Gluttony." "We've come from Earth to learn more about this place," Nyx added, their form solidifying from the living shadow they usually favoured. "Earth, Hel, and the Fae Realms," Isolde said, her words an odd mix of riddle and statement. "All connected by the Veil, the Barrier. A separation thinnest at the solstice, when the barriers between worlds blur." Rory nodded, recalling the faint shimmering distortion she had seen during the last winter solstice. "The pendant led us here," she said, touching the warm stone. "But what's its purpose?" Isolde's smile held a hint of mischief. "Wisdom is earned, not given. Seek, and ye shall find." Rory bit back a frustrated sigh but decided to forge ahead anyway. "What of the blade? It feels like more than just a weapon. Especially against demons." "Ah, the Fae dagger," Isolde said, her eyes softening. "A gift to mortals, rare and dangerous. It holds power over wards and seals." "But who in Hel sealed those demons away in the first place?" Rory asked, taking a step forward, her curiosity pushing away any hesitation. "And how do we seal them back now?" The Seer's eyes seemed to pierce through the mortal realm, seeing into Hel itself. "There's an ancient power at play here, one that shaped the realms before time." She turned, her dress of silvery mist swirling as she began to walk deeper into the grove. "But remember, as the Fae say, sometimes the greatest power lies in subtlety." Rory and Nyx shared a glance, Nyx's eyes sparkling with curiosity and a hint of mirth. Together, they followed Isolde into the heart of the grove, where the wildflowers grew taller than trees and the air shimmered with magic. The sunlight here was softer, and the world felt quieter, as if time itself had slowed to a crawl. "Look," Nyx whispered, pointing to a dragonfly with iridescent wings the size of a sparrow's. "I've never seen anything like it." Rory smiled and whispered back, "Nor have I. It's another world, one that exists right beside our own but remains hidden from mortal eyes." They continued their exploration, discovering new wonders around every bend: A stream where water sang like a choir, trees whose branches held golden fruit, and exotic flowers that emitted softly coloured light as if illuminated from within. "It's like a wonderland," Rory breathed. "A place of enchantment indeed," Isolde said, suddenly reappearing beside them. "But remember, all magic has its price." "What of the pendant?" Nyx asked. "Does it have a price, too?" The Half-Fae woman's eyes turned distant. "The stone holds a fragment of Hel's essence, pure and unfiltered. It can open portals, bring the wearer closer to that realm. But with such power comes risk." Rory's fingers closed around the pendant, feeling the warmth emanating from its deep crimson heart. "Risk? Like what?" "The Helbound walk among you, those who have supped at Prince Belphegor's table and tasted the fruits of Dymas." Isolde's voice had grown grave. "The Heartstone is like a beacon to them, a homing signal." Understanding dawned on Rory. "So wearing it is like waving a flag for the very demons we seek to fight." "Do we dare take it off, then?" Nyx wondered aloud. "With the demons running rampant on Earth, who's to say if we could just put it back on again if need be?" Isolde's smile was enigmatic. "A choice must be made, and soon. The equinox approaches, a time of balance and shifting tides. The barriers between worlds are thin." The group continued their journey, the afternoon turning into dusk, and the sky painting itself with hues of amber, violet, and gold. Rory's gaze kept returning to the pendant, its faint glow like a silent pulse, a beacon calling her on some unseen frequency. "We should keep moving," Rory said, her voice filled with determination, as if she were making a silent promise to herself and her companions. "There's a reason we were led to this place." Nyx and Isolde exchanged a glance, their shared understanding wordless and profound. "Yes," the Half-Fae agreed, her eyes alight with a secret wisdom. "There is much more for you to discover, so keep an open mind and heart. For in this place, the answers hide among the wonders."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:27:06.043Z" 2/19/2026, 3:27:06 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx wondered aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.048
85.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1025
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1025
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"tapestry"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count2
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"grave"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count2
9
word"enigmatic"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"tapestry"
2"otherworldly"
3"down her spine"
4"echo"
5"shimmered"
6"warmth"
7"grave"
8"beacon"
9"enigmatic"
10"pulse"
11"profound"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
52.54% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences46
matches
0"g with wonder"
1"felt a shiver"
2"filled with determination"
3"d with determination"
18.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1021
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount598
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory16
Richmond1
Park1
Half-Fae3
Seer2
Isolde12
Fae5
Courts1
Hel1
Nyx8
Understanding1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Half-Fae"
2"Seer"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
5"Understanding"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
globalScore0.162
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1021
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
93.15% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean30.94
std14.73
cv0.476
sampleLengths
069
116
253
326
460
532
623
730
822
936
1030
1117
1227
1323
1432
1558
1658
1721
1824
1937
206
2118
2212
2334
2418
2535
2620
2732
2827
2944
3033
3112
3236
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"was called"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs106
matches
0"were making"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences68
ratio0.015
matches
0"The grove was more than just a hidden clearing in Richmond Park; it was a doorway to another realm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount601
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.026622296173044926
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009983361064891847
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean15.01
std7.18
cv0.478
sampleLengths
020
111
219
319
49
57
620
717
816
910
1016
1118
1220
1322
148
1524
1615
178
1812
1918
2022
2117
2219
2315
2411
254
267
2710
2812
2915
309
3114
3224
338
3414
3531
3613
3716
3823
3919
4015
416
4224
4337
446
4511
467
476
486
496
73.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4852941176470588
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences43
matches
0"she said, her voice like"
1"She knew Isolde was ageless,"
2"Her cryptic speech, an echo"
3"she said, touching the warm"
4"She turned, her dress of"
5"They continued their exploration, discovering"
ratio0.14
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences43
matches
0"Aurora, or Rory as she"
1"The air crackled with energy,"
2"The grove was more than"
3"The world seemed to stretch"
4"Nyx whispered, their violet eyes"
5"The grass beneath their feet"
6"The air smelled of honey"
7"Isolde, the Half-Fae oracle, approached"
8"she said, her voice like"
9"Rory felt a shiver run"
10"Isolde's silver hair flowed around"
11"She knew Isolde was ageless,"
12"Her cryptic speech, an echo"
13"Rory replied, her voice steady"
14"The oracle's eyes drifted to"
15"Nyx added, their form solidifying"
16"Isolde said, her words an"
17"Rory nodded, recalling the faint"
18"she said, touching the warm"
19"Isolde's smile held a hint"
ratio0.977
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"They continued their exploration, discovering new wonders around every bend: A stream where water sang like a choir, trees whose branches held golden fruit, and…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their violet eyes shimmering with wonder"
1"Rory replied, her voice steady despite the thrill of adrenaline"
2"Nyx added, their form solidifying from the living shadow they usually favoured"
3"Isolde said, her words an odd mix of riddle and statement"
4"Isolde said, her eyes softening"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde continued (continue)"
2"Nyx added (add)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Rory smiled (smile)"
5"Rory breathed (breathe)"
6"the Half-Fae agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.438
effectiveRatio0.333
72.2925%