| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 866 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 866 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "trepidation" | | 3 | "intricate" | | 4 | "dance" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "down her spine" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "lurch" | | 12 | "wavering" | | 13 | "comforting" | | 14 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 32.41% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 5 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "d with wonder" | | 2 | "a thrill of unease" | | 3 | "felt a thrill" | | 4 | "t with determination" |
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| 15.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 862 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.24% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 776 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Nyx | 2 | | Isolde | 5 | | Rory | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Prince" | | 3 | "Belphegor" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.662 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 38.89% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "carvings that seemed to dance and shift in the dappled light" | | 1 | "as if listening to a sound only they could hear" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 862 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.02% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 39.18 | | std | 16.17 | | cv | 0.413 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 29 |
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| 89.67% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 119 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 780 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "vast, sun-drenched orchard" | | 1 | "ripe, jewel-bright fruit" |
| | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.023076923076923078 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008974358974358974 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 50 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 73.97% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 50 | | mean | 17.24 | | std | 5.77 | | cv | 0.335 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 80.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.48 | | totalSentences | 50 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at Nyx" | | 1 | "They paused at the edge" | | 2 | "they said, their voice a" | | 3 | "She had come here seeking" | | 4 | "She had heard whispers of" | | 5 | "She could hear laughter and" | | 6 | "She had come too far" | | 7 | "She didn't know what awaited" |
| | ratio | 0.178 | |
| 82.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the shimmering" | | 1 | "The air hummed with an" | | 2 | "She glanced back at Nyx" | | 3 | "The grove was like nothing" | | 4 | "Wildflowers of every color carpeted" | | 5 | "Rory breathed, her voice sounding" | | 6 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 7 | "Rory nodded, her hand straying" | | 8 | "The deep crimson gemstone had" | | 9 | "The silence was broken only" | | 10 | "Rory felt as though she" | | 11 | "Nyx flowed ahead of them," | | 12 | "They paused at the edge" | | 13 | "they said, their voice a" | | 14 | "Isolde nodded, her silver hair" | | 15 | "Rory felt a shiver run" | | 16 | "She had come here seeking" | | 17 | "Rory felt a sudden lurch," | | 18 | "The grove was gone, replaced" | | 19 | "Rows of trees heavy with" |
| | ratio | 0.756 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Towering oak trees encircled the clearing, their branches intertwined to form a canopy that filtered the sunlight into a soft, emerald glow." | | 1 | "Nyx flowed ahead of them, their form shifting and blending with the shadows cast by the standing stones." | | 2 | "But now, standing in the heart of the grove, she felt as though she were on the cusp of something far greater than she had ever imagined." | | 3 | "The grove was gone, replaced by a vast, sun-drenched orchard that stretched as far as the eye could see." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory breathed, her voice sounding muted in the stillness of the grove" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes gleaming with an otherworldly light" | | 2 | "they said, their voice a soft murmur" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her lips curving into a secret smile" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice low and thrumming with power" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |