| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 654 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 654 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "marble" | | 8 | "dance" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "echoes" | | 12 | "surreal" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "treacherous" | | 16 | "uncanny" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 43 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 651 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.12% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 486 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 2.06 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Seer" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.471 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if conducting an invisible orchestra" | | 1 | "felt like a distant memory" | | 2 | "branches that seemed to dance in an unseen wind" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 651 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 25.04 | | std | 15.19 | | cv | 0.607 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 35 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | |
| 51.85% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "was listening" | | 1 | "was reading" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 486 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.026748971193415638 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006172839506172839 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 54 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 54 | | mean | 12.06 | | std | 6.63 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 86.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5185185185185185 | | totalSentences | 54 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a rush of darkness," |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "They stretched out a hand," | | 1 | "She turned to Isolde, the" | | 2 | "Her lavender eyes were wide," | | 3 | "She knew better than to" | | 4 | "she breathed, pointing" | | 5 | "They moved through the grove," | | 6 | "They asked, their voice low" | | 7 | "She peered through, seeing a" | | 8 | "She jerked back, her heart" | | 9 | "she whispered, her eyes wide" | | 10 | "She trailed off, glancing at" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 20.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's footsteps echoed on the" | | 1 | "The air felt heavy, like" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 3 | "They stretched out a hand," | | 4 | "She turned to Isolde, the" | | 5 | "Her lavender eyes were wide," | | 6 | "Rory trailed off, her eyes" | | 7 | "The columns soared upwards, their" | | 8 | "Isolde smiled enigmatically." | | 9 | "Rory rolled her eyes, yet" | | 10 | "She knew better than to" | | 11 | "The ancient grove where they" | | 12 | "Isolde had led them here," | | 13 | "Fae creatures flitted among the" | | 14 | "she breathed, pointing" | | 15 | "Isolde replied, her voice quiet" | | 16 | "They moved through the grove," | | 17 | "Rory reached out, letting the" | | 18 | "Nyx walked up to the" | | 19 | "They asked, their voice low" |
| | ratio | 0.878 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's footsteps echoed on the stone floor, a rhythmic pulse that bounced off the high ceilings, as if the vast chamber was listening with bated breath." | | 1 | "They stretched out a hand, swirling their fingers through the air as if conducting an invisible orchestra." | | 2 | "The columns soared upwards, their intricate carvings depicting scenes of feasts and battles, creatures that defied imagination." | | 3 | "Giant trees rose from the marble floor, their bark smooth and silvery, crowned with graceful branches that seemed to dance in an unseen wind." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying in the silence" | | 1 | "Rory trailed, her eyes searching the chamber" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her voice quiet with reverence" | | 3 | "They asked, their voice low and cautious" | | 4 | "Nyx asked, their voice urgent" | | 5 | "she whispered, her eyes wide" | | 6 | "Nyx echoed, their form shimmering with faint sparks" | | 7 | "Rory asked, her heart still beating fast" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |