Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ07DEGHBMZPZGK5T9H3JA

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Duration:
9.8s
Cost:
$0.003014
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Lucien Moreau's knuckles stilled on the door, a faint thud still echoing through the cramped hall. Three deadbolts. Someone didn't want unwelcome guests. Rory Carter opened it a crack, a worn paperback gripped in one hand. Her gaze narrowed at the sight of her uninvited guest. "What the hell are you doing here, Luc?" "Charming as ever, Laila." The corners of his mouth quirked up in a half-smile. "May I come in?" "Absolutely not." She started to close the door, but his cane shot out, wedging it open. "I think you'll want to hear what I have to say." His heterochromatic eyes glinted knowingly. Rory stared him down for a long moment, then let out a resigned sigh and stepped aside. The flat was a maze of stacked books and scrolls, a tabby cat weaving between the piles. Ptolemy lifted his head and blinked lazily at the intruder. Lucien strode in, the ivory handle of his cane clicking against the hardwood as he scanned the room. "Cozy." "I aim to please." Rory closed the door with a decisive slam, the locks clicking back into place. "Now, talk. What could you possibly need from me?" Lucien turned to face her, his brow arched. "Need? I'm simply here as a concerned... friend." "Friends?" Rory let out a sharp, humorless laugh. "We were hardly that, even at our best. What is this really about, Luc?" The Frenchman's expression darkened. "It's about your former employer. Or should I say, your former... partner." Rory's fingers tightened around the book's spine. "Evan." "The very one." Lucien crossed the room to perch on the arm of an overstuffed armchair, his cane balanced across his lap. "It seems our dear Evan has taken a rather... unsavory turn." "And what exactly does that have to do with me?" Rory asked, her voice carefully even. "Well, you see, he's gotten himself tangled up with some unsavoury people. People I have a vested interest in keeping away from the human realm." Lucien's eyes narrowed. "People he's been using your name to get to." Rory felt the blood drain from her face. "Using my name? How?" "Ah, ah." Lucien raised a finger. "I believe you owe me a favor first, mon cherie." Rory's jaw tightened. "I don't owe you anything, Luc." "Don't you?" Lucien's smile was all teeth. "Need I remind you of our... previous arrangement?" Rory's mind raced, memories of that ill-fated job flashing through her mind. The heist gone wrong, the panicked escape, Lucien's infuriatingly calm presence at her side. And the favor he'd extracted as the price of his silence. She let out a slow, measured breath. "What do you want?" "Simple." Lucien leaned back, steepling his fingers. "I want you to go to Evan. Find out what he's up to, and put a stop to it." Rory's brow furrowed. "And why the hell would I do that?" "Because if you don't," Lucien said smoothly, "those... unsavoury people he's involved with will come knocking. And I can't guarantee your safety." Rory's grip on the book tightened until her knuckles turned white. "Is that a threat, Luc?" "Not at all, ma chérie." Lucien's gaze held hers, unwavering. "Consider it a... friendly warning." Rory's jaw clenched, the muscle twitching. "Fine. I'll do it." She lifted her chin, eyes narrowing. "But this doesn't change anything between us." "Of course not." Lucien's smile was all silk and venom. "I simply want to keep my city... tidy." Rory's fingers curled around the doorknob as she led him out. "This isn't over, Luc." "Isn't it?" His eyes gleamed with amusement as he swept past her, the scent of expensive cologne lingering in his wake. "We'll see." The door slammed shut behind him, the locks clicking into place. Rory stood there for a long moment, her heart pounding in her ears. Evan. Of all the people Lucien could have brought up, it had to be him. She let the book slip from her fingers, its pages fanning open on the floor. Ptolemy emerged from his hiding place, weaving between her legs and letting out a soft meow. "What am I going to do, Ptolemy?" Rory murmured, sinking down to sit on the edge of the armchair. The cat jumped into her lap, butting his head against her hand. Rory stared into the middle distance, her mind racing. Evan. The mere mention of his name sent a shiver down her spine. The way he'd wormed his way into her life, her trust... and then betrayed it all. She shook her head, running a hand through her hair. She couldn't afford to get caught up in his mess again. Not after everything she'd done to escape it. But Lucien was right - if Evan was involved with those "unsavoury people," it was only a matter of time before they came knocking. And Rory knew all too well what that could mean. She let out a heavy sigh, her fingers threading through Ptolemy's soft fur. She had to do something. She couldn't just sit back and wait for the fallout. With a grimace, she pushed herself to her feet, dislodging the cat. She had to find Evan. Whatever it took, she had to put a stop to whatever he was up to. For her own sake, and for the sake of anyone else who might get caught in the crossfire. Rory headed for the door, pausing only to grab her coat. She pulled it on, the familiar weight of it comforting. Time to face the past. Whether she liked it or not.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
53.66% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"heterochromatic eyes glinted knowingly [knowingly]"
1"Lucien leaned back [back]"
2"Lucien said smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.39
leniency0.78
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.146
72.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount924
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"knowingly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"knowingly"
1"lazily"
2"really"
3"very"
4"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount924
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"absolutely"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"raced"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"unwavering"
count1
8
word"jaw clenched"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"absolutely"
2"scanned"
3"raced"
4"silence"
5"measured"
6"furrowed"
7"unwavering"
8"jaw clenched"
9"silk"
10"pounding"
11"racing"
12"down her spine"
13"familiar"
14"weight"
15"comforting"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
2
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"knuckles turned white"
2"jaw clenched"
3"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords923
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount649
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Carter1
Rory18
Lucien14
Frenchman1
Evan4
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Frenchman"
5"Evan"
6"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.113
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount923
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
93.89% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean21.47
std10.27
cv0.479
sampleLengths
023
123
28
318
416
516
617
745
81
927
1016
1122
1216
138
1433
1516
1637
1712
1816
199
2015
2137
2211
2326
2411
2522
2616
2715
2823
2918
3015
3123
3224
3315
3431
3531
3638
3729
3834
3928
4050
4121
4211
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"get caught"
1"get caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences90
ratio0.011
matches
0"But Lucien was right - if Evan was involved with those \"unsavoury people,\" it was only a matter of time before they came knocking."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount650
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03538461538461538
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010769230769230769
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean10.26
std5.55
cv0.542
sampleLengths
016
12
25
313
410
58
614
74
816
916
1017
1117
1210
1318
141
1518
169
178
188
198
2014
214
2212
237
241
2522
2611
2716
2828
299
308
314
326
3310
343
356
367
378
3812
3914
4011
417
424
437
4419
453
468
4722
4811
495
71.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.45555555555555555
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences64
matches
0"Her gaze narrowed at the"
1"She started to close the"
2"His heterochromatic eyes glinted knowingly"
3"She let out a slow,"
4"She lifted her chin, eyes"
5"His eyes gleamed with amusement"
6"She let the book slip"
7"She shook her head, running"
8"She couldn't afford to get"
9"She let out a heavy"
10"She had to do something."
11"She couldn't just sit back"
12"She had to find Evan."
13"She pulled it on, the"
ratio0.219
38.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences64
matches
0"Lucien Moreau's knuckles stilled on"
1"Someone didn't want unwelcome guests."
2"Rory Carter opened it a"
3"Her gaze narrowed at the"
4"The corners of his mouth"
5"She started to close the"
6"His heterochromatic eyes glinted knowingly"
7"Rory stared him down for"
8"The flat was a maze"
9"Ptolemy lifted his head and"
10"Lucien strode in, the ivory"
11"Rory closed the door with"
12"Lucien turned to face her,"
13"Rory let out a sharp,"
14"The Frenchman's expression darkened."
15"Rory's fingers tightened around the"
16"Lucien crossed the room to"
17"Rory asked, her voice carefully"
18"Lucien's eyes narrowed"
19"Rory felt the blood drain"
ratio0.844
78.13% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Whether she liked it or"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"She started, but his cane shot out, wedging it open"
1"Rory closed, the locks clicking back into place"
2"Rory asked, her voice carefully even"
3"She lifted, eyes narrowing"
4"His eyes gleamed, the scent of expensive cologne lingering in his wake"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.049
77.2146%