| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she advised cryptically [cryptically]" | | 1 | "she said enigmatically [enigmatically]" | | 2 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.526 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.3 | |
| 55.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1004 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "cautiously" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1004 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "pounding" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "anticipation" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "crystal" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "wavering" | | 14 | "depths" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "apprehension" | | 17 | "intricate" | | 18 | "etched" | | 19 | "echoed" | | 20 | "dancing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "couldn't help but wonder" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1008 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 22.65% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 903 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 9 | | Rory | 23 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Earth" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.226 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "living shadow seemingly absorbing what litt" | | 1 | "not quite human — tall and elegant, with elongated limbs and almond-shaped eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1008 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.88% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 31.5 | | std | 14.96 | | cv | 0.475 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Fae-forged dagger — a parting gift from Isolde — in her sweating palms, feeling its cold, reassuring weight." | | 1 | "Rory gasped as she saw the source of the eerie light — countless tiny crystals embedded in the walls, pulsing with an inner glow, like captured stars." | | 2 | "But this was no ordinary water — it shimmered and danced with every color of the rainbow, defying all laws of nature." | | 3 | "Suddenly, a vivid image flashed in her mind — a field of wildflowers, blooming with impossible vibrancy under a sky notquite like Earth's." | | 4 | "She ran her fingers along intricate carvings depicting beings not quite human — tall and elegant, with elongated limbs and almond-shaped eyes." | | 5 | "They were identical — down to the smallest flaw and facet." | | 6 | "And more importantly — were they ready to face it?" |
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| 89.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 899 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.04671857619577308 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.025583982202447165 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 12.44 | | std | 5.73 | | cv | 0.46 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 60.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.37037037037037035 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 47.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a vivid image flashed" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She could feel the cool" | | 1 | "She clutched the Fae-forged dagger" | | 2 | "she advised cryptically" | | 3 | "she breathed, her whisper seeming" | | 4 | "They moved on, their steps" | | 5 | "It took Rory a moment" | | 6 | "She knelt by the edge" | | 7 | "It felt cool and silky," | | 8 | "She snatched her hand back" | | 9 | "she said enigmatically" | | 10 | "She met Nyx's gaze, seeing" | | 11 | "They explored further, each new" | | 12 | "She ran her fingers along" | | 13 | "She turned instead to a" | | 14 | "They were identical — down" | | 15 | "It bore a single line" | | 16 | "she said quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.243 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy wooden door creaked" | | 1 | "Rory peered into the gloom," | | 2 | "She could feel the cool" | | 3 | "She clutched the Fae-forged dagger" | | 4 | "The blade seemed to hum" | | 5 | "Isolde herself stood by calmly," | | 6 | "she advised cryptically" | | 7 | "Rory took a deep breath" | | 8 | "Nyx followed close behind, the" | | 9 | "The air grew colder as" | | 10 | "Rory felt a strange mix" | | 11 | "she breathed, her whisper seeming" | | 12 | "They moved on, their steps" | | 13 | "The passageway opened into a" | | 14 | "Rory gasped as she saw" | | 15 | "A soft sound, almost musical," | | 16 | "It took Rory a moment" | | 17 | "Rory murmured, mesmerized" | | 18 | "She knelt by the edge" | | 19 | "Nyx peered into the pool," |
| | ratio | 0.714 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time she turned" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Glowing glyphs danced at the corners of Rory's vision, hinting at stories long forgotten." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "whispered Nyx, their voice barely audible over the rustling of the leaves" | | 1 | "replied Rory, her voice trembling slightly" | | 2 | "she breathed, her whisper seeming loud in the oppressive silence" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "whispered Nyx (whisper)" | | 1 | "she advised cryptically (advise)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.526 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |