Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ07VFCMPZM7RSZF49SAXA

Run Details

Duration:
22.3s
Cost:
$0.008884

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Lucien could knock a second time. Rory stood there, her black hair damp from a recent shower, a faded Cardiff University hoodie swallowing her frame. The scent of jasmine tea curled from the flat behind her. "Lucien." Her voice was flat. "It's three in the morning." He adjusted his grip on the ivory cane, the blade inside whispering against its sheath. "I know what time it is." Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, wound between Rory's ankles, tail flicking. She didn't step aside. "You can't just show up here. Not after—" "Not after I walked away?" He leaned against the doorframe, the amber of his left eye catching the dim hallway light. "You made it clear you didn't want me around." Rory's fingers tightened on the door. "That's not fair." "Neither was you telling me to leave." His jaw set. "But here we are." A beat. The curry house below leaked the scent of cumin and garlic into the tension between them. Rory exhaled through her nose, then stepped back. "Fine. But you're not staying long." Lucien followed her inside, the three deadbolts clicking shut behind him. The flat was exactly as he remembered—books stacked on every surface, scrolls pinned to the walls, a half-empty mug of tea gone cold on the coffee table. He set his cane against the armchair, the ivory handle gleaming. Rory crossed her arms. "What do you want?" "You." The word hung between them, raw and unfiltered. Her breath hitched. "Don't." "I didn't come here to play games." He took a step closer, the heat of his half-demon blood warming the space between them. "I came because I can't stop thinking about you. About us." Rory's bright blue eyes flashed. "There is no *us*. Not after you left." "I left because you asked me to." His voice dropped, rougher now. "Because you looked at me like I was the problem." She turned away, her shoulder-length hair swinging. "You *were* the problem. You still are." Lucien reached for her, his fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. She flinched but didn't pull away. "Then why does it still hurt when I'm not here?" Rory spun back, her chest rising and falling too fast. "Because you don't get to do this. You don't get to show up in the middle of the night and act like nothing happened." "I'm not acting like nothing happened." He cupped her face, his thumb tracing her cheekbone. "I'm acting like I made a mistake." She shoved him back, her palms flat against his chest. "A mistake? You called me *reckless*." "And you called me *cold*." His hands fell to his sides. "We both said things we didn't mean." Rory's laugh was sharp. "I meant every word." Lucien's heterochromatic eyes darkened. "Then why did you kiss me back?" Silence. The hum of the fridge filled the space between them. Rory's lips parted, but no sound came out. He closed the distance again, his voice low. "Why did you let me touch you like you'd die if I stopped?" Her breath came faster. "Because I was stupid." "Or because you wanted it as much as I did." His fingers tangled in her hair, tilting her head up. "Because you still do." Rory's hands fisted in his suit jacket. "This changes nothing." "Then push me away." His mouth hovered over hers, close enough to feel her exhale. "Tell me to leave again." She didn't. Instead, her fingers tightened, pulling him closer. The first brush of their lips was hesitant, like neither of them trusted it. Then Rory made a sound—half frustration, half relief—and kissed him like she'd been drowning. Lucien's hands slid to her waist, lifting her onto the kitchen counter. The mug of tea rattled, forgotten. Rory broke away, her breath ragged. "We can't keep doing this." Lucien's lips trailed down her neck, his teeth grazing her pulse. "Doing what?" "Pretending it's simple." She arched into him, her fingers digging into his shoulders. "Pretending we don't destroy each other." He pulled back just enough to meet her eyes. "Maybe we do. But I don't care anymore." Rory's laugh was shaky. "You should." Lucien kissed her again, slower this time, like he had all the time in the world. "Too late." The counter dug into Rory's back, but she didn't care. His hands were everywhere—skimming under her hoodie, tracing the line of her spine, pulling her flush against him. She should stop this. She *should*. But the way he kissed her, like she was the only thing that mattered, made her forget why she ever tried. Lucien's mouth moved to her ear. "Tell me to stop." Rory's nails scraped down his back. "Shut up." He grinned against her skin, then lifted her off the counter. She wrapped her legs around his waist as he carried her toward the bedroom, the door clicking shut behind them. The last thing she saw before the world narrowed to just the two of them was Ptolemy watching from the hallway, tail flicking in judgment.
total_cost0.008884

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.409
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount846
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount846
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"gleaming"
2"tracing"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords839
ratio0.006
matches
0"us"
1"were"
2"reckless"
3"cold"
4"should"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
19.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount576
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien8
Cardiff1
University1
Eva1
Rory15
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.198
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount839
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean20.46
std13.32
cv0.651
sampleLengths
041
110
221
321
430
59
614
732
849
98
109
114
1234
1313
1422
1514
1629
1734
1822
1916
2018
218
2211
2319
2421
258
2624
2710
2820
299
3046
3111
3213
3319
3417
356
3618
3755
3810
398
4056
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
51.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences94
ratio0.032
matches
0"The flat was exactly as he remembered—books stacked on every surface, scrolls pinned to the walls, a half-empty mug of tea gone cold on the coffee table."
1"Then Rory made a sound—half frustration, half relief—and kissed him like she'd been drowning."
2"His hands were everywhere—skimming under her hoodie, tracing the line of her spine, pulling her flush against him."
98.98% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount583
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.0411663807890223
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003430531732418525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean8.93
std5.82
cv0.652
sampleLengths
011
119
211
35
45
515
66
79
84
98
1021
119
126
133
1410
154
162
1716
188
196
2011
2127
2211
234
244
259
263
271
2823
2911
305
318
3212
3310
347
357
3613
376
3810
3910
4024
4115
427
4310
446
4511
467
474
484
494
57.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3723404255319149
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"Instead, her fingers tightened, pulling"
1"Then Rory made a sound—half"
ratio0.035
51.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences57
matches
0"Her voice was flat"
1"He adjusted his grip on"
2"She didn't step aside."
3"He leaned against the doorframe,"
4"His jaw set"
5"He set his cane against"
6"Her breath hitched."
7"He took a step closer,"
8"His voice dropped, rougher now"
9"She turned away, her shoulder-length"
10"She flinched but didn't pull"
11"He cupped her face, his"
12"She shoved him back, her"
13"His hands fell to his"
14"He closed the distance again,"
15"Her breath came faster."
16"His fingers tangled in her"
17"His mouth hovered over hers,"
18"She arched into him, her"
19"He pulled back just enough"
ratio0.421
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences57
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Rory stood there, her black"
2"The scent of jasmine tea"
3"Her voice was flat"
4"He adjusted his grip on"
5"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, wound between"
6"She didn't step aside."
7"He leaned against the doorframe,"
8"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
9"His jaw set"
10"The curry house below leaked"
11"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
12"Lucien followed her inside, the"
13"The flat was exactly as"
14"He set his cane against"
15"Rory crossed her arms."
16"The word hung between them,"
17"Her breath hitched."
18"He took a step closer,"
19"Rory's bright blue eyes flashed."
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory spun back, her chest rising and falling too fast."
1"His hands were everywhere—skimming under her hoodie, tracing the line of her spine, pulling her flush against him."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He cupped, his thumb tracing her cheekbone"
1"She arched, her fingers digging into his shoulders"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.1029%