| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1348 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1348 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
| | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "down her spine" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "racing" | | 13 | "potential" | | 14 | "unreadable" | | 15 | "resolve" | | 16 | "etched" | | 17 | "intricate" | | 18 | "chill" | | 19 | "skipped a beat" | | 20 | "unspoken" | | 21 | "pulse" | | 22 | "echoed" | | 23 | "intensity" | | 24 | "race" | | 25 | "depths" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "a sense of unease" | | 2 | "couldn't help but feel" |
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| 30.30% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 10 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "d in awe" | | 1 | "y with warmth" | | 2 | "felt a shiver" | | 3 | "filled with wonder" | | 4 | "d with wonder" | | 5 | "felt a chill" | | 6 | "a sense of awe" | | 7 | "a sense of unease" | | 8 | "a surge of determination" | | 9 | "a sense of relief" |
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| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1341 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1158 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 11 | | Varga | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Oracle | 1 | | Vision | 1 | | Heartwood | 1 | | Tree | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Oracle" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Heartwood" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.68 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 88.27% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "grace that seemed to defy the laws of nature" | | 1 | "stars that seemed to pulse with their own inner light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1341 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.66% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "feeling that she" | | 1 | "knew that her" | | 2 | "knew that her" |
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| 68.78% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 39.44 | | std | 15.41 | | cv | 0.391 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 52 | | 33 | 68 |
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| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "being pulled" | | 1 | "was covered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1165 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.02575107296137339 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01201716738197425 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 99.68% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 13.55 | | std | 5.41 | | cv | 0.399 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 42.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.29292929292929293 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.47% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at her" | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 2 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 3 | "Her silver hair flowed behind" | | 4 | "she said, her pale lavender" | | 5 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 6 | "she said, her voice filled" | | 7 | "She reached out to touch" | | 8 | "She pulled her hand back," | | 9 | "she asked, looking at her" | | 10 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 11 | "she asked, her voice steady" | | 12 | "she said, her voice carrying" | | 13 | "She had come this far," | | 14 | "She took a deep breath" | | 15 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 16 | "she asked, her voice trembling" | | 17 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 18 | "She took a deep breath" | | 19 | "She closed her eyes, the" |
| | ratio | 0.356 | |
| 34.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She glanced back at her" | | 3 | "The air inside the grove" | | 4 | "Wildflowers bloomed in a riot" | | 5 | "Rory's bright blue eyes widened" | | 6 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 7 | "Nyx, the living shadow, drifted" | | 8 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 9 | "Isolde, the ethereal half-Fae seer," | | 10 | "Her silver hair flowed behind" | | 11 | "she said, her pale lavender" | | 12 | "Rory nodded, her hand instinctively" | | 13 | "The deep crimson gemstone pulsed" | | 14 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 15 | "The path wound through the" | | 16 | "The tree's bark was a" | | 17 | "Rory couldn't help but feel" | | 18 | "she said, her voice filled" | | 19 | "Isolde nodded, her expression serene." |
| | ratio | 0.851 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove felt different, thicker, as if it held the weight of countless untold stories." | | 1 | "She reached out to touch the tree's bark, feeling a strange warmth emanating from it." | | 2 | "The sky above was a deep, swirling indigo, dotted with stars that seemed to pulse with their own inner light." | | 3 | "The ground beneath her feet was covered in a soft, luminescent moss that glowed with a gentle, soothing light." | | 4 | "Strange, ethereal creatures flitted through the air, their forms shifting and changing like wisps of smoke." | | 5 | "Rory took a deep breath and began to explore the landscape, her senses heightened by the strange, otherworldly energy that surrounded her." | | 6 | "Rory knelt beside the pool, her reflection staring back at her with an intensity that made her heart race." | | 7 | "But instead of a threat, she saw a figure standing in the shadows, their form shifting and changing like the landscape around them." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "she said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the path ahead" | | 2 | "she asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her" | | 3 | "she said, her voice carrying a note of urgency" | | 4 | "she said, her voice barely audible" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice trembling" | | 6 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" | | 7 | "Rory asked, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |