Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ0A0EF41ZRVZKS255GVV0

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Duration:
13.7s
Cost:
$0.003279
Provider:
Anthropic

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell's shrill chime pierced the stillness of the flat. Aurora stilled Ptolemy's agitated meowing with an absent-minded stroke down his tabby back as she approached the door, her heart pounding. She steeled herself, then wrenched it open. "Lucien." His name fell from her lips in a hushed exhale, a breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding. The Frenchman stood in the threshold, his striking heterochromatic eyes searching her face. The familiar lines of his tailored charcoal suit were impeccable as always, but his expression was uncharacteristically uncertain. "Rory," he murmured. For a charged moment, they simply stared at one another, the tension palpable. Then, Lucien cleared his throat and reached inside his suit jacket, withdrawing a worn leather journal. "I, ah...I found this. Thought you might want it back." Aurora felt the blood drain from her face as she recognized the battered notebook, the pages dog-eared and stained. It was her journal, the one she'd thought lost forever. Hands trembling, she reached out to take it, their fingers brushing briefly in the exchange. The contact sent a jolt of electricity through her, and she quickly withdrew her hand as if burned. "How did you..." she began, then trailed off, unable to finish the question. Lucien's mouth twisted in a rueful smile. "It's a long story." He hesitated, glancing down the empty hall. "May I come in?" For a heartbeat, Aurora wavered. Part of her wanted nothing more than to usher him inside, to lose herself in his familiar presence. But another, more cautious part recoiled at the idea. Too much had happened between them, too many wounds that had yet to fully heal. Still, she found herself stepping aside, silently granting him entry. As Lucien brushed past her, the warm, spicy scent of his cologne enveloped her, and she couldn't suppress the shiver that ran down her spine. Leading the way into the cramped flat, Aurora deposited Ptolemy on the worn sofa, pointedly avoiding Lucien's watchful gaze. "Make yourself comfortable," she murmured, busying herself with straightening a stack of books on the cluttered coffee table. Lucien settled into the armchair, his cane propped against the side. "It's been a while, mon chéri." The endearment, so casually uttered, sent a pang through Aurora's chest. "Two years, three months," she corrected him, the words spilling out before she could stop them. Flushing, she busied herself with tidying up, refusing to meet his eyes. "I see your eidetic memory remains as impressive as ever." There was a hint of amusement in his tone, but also a thread of something else—regret, perhaps? Aurora's hands stilled, her fingers tracing the worn leather cover of her journal. "Why are you here, Lucien?" she asked quietly, finally lifting her gaze to his. His expression was guarded, but she caught the flicker of vulnerability in his eyes. "I..." He paused, seeming to weigh his words carefully. "I needed to see you. To...to apologize." The admission hung in the air between them, weighted with unspoken emotion. Aurora felt her throat tighten, memories of their last heated encounter flooding her mind. The hurt, the betrayal—it had nearly broken her. And yet, despite everything, a part of her had never stopped longing for him. Crossing the room, she perched on the edge of the sofa, her fingers tightening around the journal. "Apologize for what, exactly?" Her voice was barely above a whisper, but in the stillness of the flat, it seemed to reverberate. Lucien's gaze met hers, unflinching. "For the way I left. For...for everything." He ran a hand through his slicked-back hair, a rare display of uncharacteristic vulnerability. "I never meant to hurt you, Rory. That was never my intention." Aurora felt a bitter laugh bubble up in her throat. "And yet, you did. Spectacularly." She shook her head, her lips twisting into a mirthless smile. "I suppose I should be grateful you're even admitting to it." "I know." Lucien's jaw tensed, the muscles in his neck standing out in sharp relief. "I know I've hurt you, and I can't take that back. But I..." He paused, his eyes searching her face. "I want to try to make amends, if you'll let me." Aurora stared at him, her mind racing. Part of her longed to simply forgive him, to let the past go and give in to the undeniable pull she still felt toward him. But the scar on her wrist—a constant reminder of the pain he'd caused—burned like a brand. "I..." She hesitated, her fingers tracing the familiar curves of the journal. "I don't know if I can." The words were barely audible, but in the charged silence, they seemed to reverberate. Lucien's expression fell, a flicker of something akin to anguish passing across his features. "I see." He nodded, his gaze dropping to his hands. "I understand." An uncomfortable silence stretched between them, the air thick with unspoken emotion. Aurora's heart hammered in her chest as she watched him, torn between the desire to reach out and the fear of being hurt again. Finally, Lucien rose to his feet, his cane clicking against the hardwood floor. "I should go." He turned toward the door, his movements stiff and controlled. "Thank you for...for hearing me out." Aurora's fingers tightened around the journal, the worn leather biting into her skin. "Lucien, wait." The words escaped her before she could stop them, and she cursed her own weakness even as she rose to her feet. He paused, his hand on the doorknob, and turned to face her. His expression was unreadable, but she caught the glimmer of hope in his eyes. Taking a deep breath, Aurora crossed the room until she stood before him, close enough to feel the warmth of his body. "I...I don't know what to say," she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. "But I...I can't just let you walk away again." Lucien's gaze searched her face, his own expression softening. "Rory..." He reached out, his fingers brushing her cheek, and Aurora felt herself lean into the touch, unable to resist the familiar pull of his caress. "I'm not saying I forgive you," she murmured, her eyes locked with his. "But I...I want to try. To understand." She swallowed hard, her heart pounding in her ears. "If you'll let me." For a heartbeat, Lucien was silent, his thumb tracing the delicate line of her jaw. Then, a faint smile tugged at the corners of his mouth. "Anything," he breathed, his voice barely above a whisper. "Anything for you, mon chéri." Aurora felt a tentative smile spread across her own lips, and in that moment, she knew that whatever the future held, she was ready to face it — together.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:27:24.7Z" 2/19/2026, 3:27:24 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she began then [then]"
1"she asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.639
leniency1
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.087
77.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count3
highlights
0"quickly"
1"carefully"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"pounding"
count2
1
word"steeled"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count4
3
word"charged"
count2
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"palpable"
count1
6
word"wavered"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"comfortable"
count1
9
word"pang"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count3
11
word"flicker"
count2
12
word"unspoken"
count2
13
word"encounter"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count3
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
17
word"silence"
count2
18
word"desire"
count1
19
word"unreadable"
count1
20
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"steeled"
2"familiar"
3"charged"
4"tension"
5"palpable"
6"wavered"
7"down her spine"
8"comfortable"
9"pang"
10"tracing"
11"flicker"
12"unspoken"
13"encounter"
14"whisper"
15"racing"
16"reminder"
17"silence"
18"desire"
19"unreadable"
20"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1113
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
74.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount928
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Frenchman1
Lucien11
Aurora14
Flushing1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Frenchman"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.746
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something akin to anguish passing across his fe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1113
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"knew that whatever"
38.53% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean34.78
std9.91
cv0.285
sampleLengths
038
119
234
339
462
513
622
747
835
937
1017
1139
1227
1327
1430
1548
1639
1738
1837
1946
2048
2132
2226
2336
2432
2537
2626
2745
2835
2933
3040
3129
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
3.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences82
ratio0.049
matches
0"\"I see your eidetic memory remains as impressive as ever.\" There was a hint of amusement in his tone, but also a thread of something else—regret, perhaps?"
1"The hurt, the betrayal—it had nearly broken her."
2"But the scar on her wrist—a constant reminder of the pain he'd caused—burned like a brand."
3"Aurora felt a tentative smile spread across her own lips, and in that moment, she knew that whatever the future held, she was ready to face it — together."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount934
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03961456102783726
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.019271948608137045
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean13.57
std5.85
cv0.431
sampleLengths
010
121
27
319
413
518
63
713
816
910
1019
1110
1215
1318
1413
157
1611
174
185
1918
209
2115
2210
2325
2419
2518
2611
276
2811
2916
3012
3127
3213
3314
3414
359
367
3712
3814
398
4014
4117
4222
435
4421
4512
4610
4716
4811
4915
57.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4024390243902439
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then, Lucien cleared his throat"
1"Too much had happened between"
2"Finally, Lucien rose to his"
3"Then, a faint smile tugged"
ratio0.058
80.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences69
matches
0"She steeled herself, then wrenched"
1"His name fell from her"
2"It was her journal, the"
3"she began, then trailed off,"
4"He hesitated, glancing down the"
5"she murmured, busying herself with"
6"she corrected him, the words"
7"she asked quietly, finally lifting"
8"His expression was guarded, but"
9"He paused, seeming to weigh"
10"Her voice was barely above"
11"He ran a hand through"
12"She shook her head, her"
13"He paused, his eyes searching"
14"She hesitated, her fingers tracing"
15"He nodded, his gaze dropping"
16"He turned toward the door,"
17"He paused, his hand on"
18"His expression was unreadable, but"
19"she admitted, her voice barely"
ratio0.348
83.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences69
matches
0"The doorbell's shrill chime pierced"
1"Aurora stilled Ptolemy's agitated meowing"
2"She steeled herself, then wrenched"
3"His name fell from her"
4"The Frenchman stood in the"
5"The familiar lines of his"
6"Aurora felt the blood drain"
7"It was her journal, the"
8"Hands trembling, she reached out"
9"The contact sent a jolt"
10"she began, then trailed off,"
11"Lucien's mouth twisted in a"
12"He hesitated, glancing down the"
13"Part of her wanted nothing"
14"she murmured, busying herself with"
15"Lucien settled into the armchair,"
16"The endearment, so casually uttered,"
17"she corrected him, the words"
18"Aurora's hands stilled, her fingers"
19"she asked quietly, finally lifting"
ratio0.754
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Aurora stilled Ptolemy's agitated meowing with an absent-minded stroke down his tabby back as she approached the door, her heart pounding."
1"Hands trembling, she reached out to take it, their fingers brushing briefly in the exchange."
2"Crossing the room, she perched on the edge of the sofa, her fingers tightening around the journal."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she corrected, the words spilling out before she could stop them"
1"He paused, seeming to weigh his words carefully"
2"She shook, her lips twisting into a mirthless smile"
3"He paused, his eyes searching her face"
4"She hesitated, her fingers tracing the familiar curves of the journal"
5"He nodded, his gaze dropping to his hands"
6"He turned, his movements stiff and controlled"
7"she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"She swallowed, her heart pounding in her ears"
9"he breathed, his voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she corrected (correct)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
5"he breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0.857
effectiveRatio0.333
75.6251%