| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she began then [then]" | | 1 | "she asked quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.639 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.087 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 77.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 3 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "steeled" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "charged" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "palpable" | | 6 | "wavered" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "comfortable" | | 9 | "pang" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "unspoken" | | 13 | "encounter" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "reminder" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "desire" | | 19 | "unreadable" | | 20 | "warmth" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart hammered in her chest" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1113 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.57% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 928 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.51 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Frenchman | 1 | | Lucien | 11 | | Aurora | 14 | | Flushing | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Frenchman" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.746 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something akin to anguish passing across his fe" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 38.53% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 34.78 | | std | 9.91 | | cv | 0.285 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 3.48% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "\"I see your eidetic memory remains as impressive as ever.\" There was a hint of amusement in his tone, but also a thread of something else—regret, perhaps?" | | 1 | "The hurt, the betrayal—it had nearly broken her." | | 2 | "But the scar on her wrist—a constant reminder of the pain he'd caused—burned like a brand." | | 3 | "Aurora felt a tentative smile spread across her own lips, and in that moment, she knew that whatever the future held, she was ready to face it — together." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 934 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03961456102783726 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019271948608137045 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 13.57 | | std | 5.85 | | cv | 0.431 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 57.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4024390243902439 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, Lucien cleared his throat" | | 1 | "Too much had happened between" | | 2 | "Finally, Lucien rose to his" | | 3 | "Then, a faint smile tugged" |
| | ratio | 0.058 | |
| 80.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She steeled herself, then wrenched" | | 1 | "His name fell from her" | | 2 | "It was her journal, the" | | 3 | "she began, then trailed off," | | 4 | "He hesitated, glancing down the" | | 5 | "she murmured, busying herself with" | | 6 | "she corrected him, the words" | | 7 | "she asked quietly, finally lifting" | | 8 | "His expression was guarded, but" | | 9 | "He paused, seeming to weigh" | | 10 | "Her voice was barely above" | | 11 | "He ran a hand through" | | 12 | "She shook her head, her" | | 13 | "He paused, his eyes searching" | | 14 | "She hesitated, her fingers tracing" | | 15 | "He nodded, his gaze dropping" | | 16 | "He turned toward the door," | | 17 | "He paused, his hand on" | | 18 | "His expression was unreadable, but" | | 19 | "she admitted, her voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.348 | |
| 83.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The doorbell's shrill chime pierced" | | 1 | "Aurora stilled Ptolemy's agitated meowing" | | 2 | "She steeled herself, then wrenched" | | 3 | "His name fell from her" | | 4 | "The Frenchman stood in the" | | 5 | "The familiar lines of his" | | 6 | "Aurora felt the blood drain" | | 7 | "It was her journal, the" | | 8 | "Hands trembling, she reached out" | | 9 | "The contact sent a jolt" | | 10 | "she began, then trailed off," | | 11 | "Lucien's mouth twisted in a" | | 12 | "He hesitated, glancing down the" | | 13 | "Part of her wanted nothing" | | 14 | "she murmured, busying herself with" | | 15 | "Lucien settled into the armchair," | | 16 | "The endearment, so casually uttered," | | 17 | "she corrected him, the words" | | 18 | "Aurora's hands stilled, her fingers" | | 19 | "she asked quietly, finally lifting" |
| | ratio | 0.754 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stilled Ptolemy's agitated meowing with an absent-minded stroke down his tabby back as she approached the door, her heart pounding." | | 1 | "Hands trembling, she reached out to take it, their fingers brushing briefly in the exchange." | | 2 | "Crossing the room, she perched on the edge of the sofa, her fingers tightening around the journal." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "she corrected, the words spilling out before she could stop them" | | 1 | "He paused, seeming to weigh his words carefully" | | 2 | "She shook, her lips twisting into a mirthless smile" | | 3 | "He paused, his eyes searching her face" | | 4 | "She hesitated, her fingers tracing the familiar curves of the journal" | | 5 | "He nodded, his gaze dropping to his hands" | | 6 | "He turned, his movements stiff and controlled" | | 7 | "she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 8 | "She swallowed, her heart pounding in her ears" | | 9 | "he breathed, his voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 4 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "he breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.194 | | leniency | 0.389 | | rawRatio | 0.857 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |