Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ0DX6FS4WJRP9BYHMD54M

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.000630
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I slam the last deadbolt home and lean against the flat door, exhausted. The raised voices from the curry house below filter through the floorboards, mixing with the smell of cumin and turmeric that's always lingering in this old building. I toss my helmet onto the worn-out sofa, dislodging a stack of books about the history and architecture of Marseille. They scatter across the cushion, paper edges bent. A knock sounds at the door. My eyes narrow. It's almost midnight — too late for a delivery, and none of my few friends would show up unannounced. I creep towards the door, listening. Another knock, more insistent. "Rory? Open up, it's me, Lucien." My heart stutters. Lucien Moreau, the last person I expected to hear from again after our disaster of a parting six months ago in Marseille. I haven't been able to shake his piercing amber and black eyes from my dreams since. I undo the locks, pulse quickening, and pull open the door. Lucien leans against the jamb, one hand gripping his ivory-caned sword, the other palming a cigarette. Silver-gold hair gleams under the flickering hallway light. His tailored charcoal suit drapes perfectly over his toned frame. "Long time no see," he drawls, exhaling smoke through his teeth. I cross my arms, cocking a hip. "I could say the same. What brings you to my doorstep in the dead of night, Luc?" He steps inside without waiting for an invite, his clean scent washing over me as his shoulder brushes my arm, making me shiver despite myself. I shut the door behind him. "I've come to propose a truce," Lucien says, "and a collaboration." "Is that so?" I ask, keeping my tone light even as my mind races. "And what might that entail?" Lucien taps ash into an empty teacup on the cluttered coffee table. "I need your help, Rory. There's a.........Marseilles. The magister's amulet is the key to restoring balance, but I can't get to it without you." I arch a brow, ignoring the flutter in my stomach. "Flattering, but why should I help you after what happened before?" He flinches almost imperceptibly at the reminder before his suave mask slides back into place. "What happened before was...unavoidable. But this is bigger than us. The veil between realms is thinning." I rub my temples, considering. Lucien wouldn't show up out of the blue unless things were dire. And while I'd never admit it aloud, the idea of working with him again sparks a thrill deep in my core. "Let's talk specifics," I say, leading him over to my cramped kitchen nook. The sharp scent of smoke clung to Lucien's wool suit as he leaned a hip against the countertop, vivid gaze tracking my movements. "Your instincts were right about the relics. They're keys to tapping into the realms' power." He pulls a yellowed map of Marseille from his jacket's inner pocket and spreads it on the chipped tile. "The amulet is in the catacombs, protected by the magister's wards." I trace a finger along a red 'x' marking the spot. "Wards I'm betting you can't break." Lucien's full lips quirk. "You'd win that bet. But you, with that clever mind of yours..." He reaches out, his knuckles grazing my cheek, sending electricity zinging along my nerves. I swallow hard, pulse fluttering. "And my payment?" He smirks. "Help me secure the amulet, and I'll owe you a favor." His amber eye flashes molten gold in the dim light. Damn him, I want that. A favor from a well-connected half-demon could come in handy. And maybe...maybe this could be an olive branch between us. A way to rebuild after the wreckage of our last collaboration. "Fine," I hear myself saying. "You've got yourself a deal, Luc." His slow, wicked grin sends a shiver up my spine. "Excellent." He steps into me, my breasts brushing his chest. I tip my chin up defiantly to meet his eyes. His hand drifts up, fingers tangling in my hair. The air crackles between us. "I've missed you, ma chérie," he murmurs, thumb caressing my jaw. My lids flutter. "I...missed you too," I admit. "But this is strictly business, got it?" Lucien's smile turns sly. "Of course." Then he leans in and captures my mouth with his own. I forget to breathe, toes curling. He kisses like he does everything — with confident, practiced ease that leaves you dizzy. And I feel it...the thrum of energy, that uncanny awareness that's always hummed between us. I wind my arms around his neck, yanking him closer, forgotten promises of keeping this professional evaporating like smoke. His cane clatters to the floor and he hoists me up onto the kitchen counter, hands greedily roaming my back, my hips, kneading, caressing. "So this is what you call strictly business, hmm?" I tease breathlessly against his lips, nipping his bottom one. He chuckles, a sexy, dark sound. "I'm a businessman. I never mix business with pleasure." Then his mouth is on me again, hot and hungry, and I know I'm in trouble.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:27:28.686Z" 2/19/2026, 3:27:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Then he leans in [Then]"
1"I tease breathlessly [breathlessly]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.56
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
94.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount845
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount845
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"uncanny"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"stomach"
2"reminder"
3"practiced ease"
4"uncanny"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches
0"hear"
1"feel"
2"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords842
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount639
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Marseille3
Moreau1
Lucien8
Damn1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore0.874
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount842
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean24.76
std15.52
cv0.627
sampleLengths
068
16
228
34
46
541
611
734
811
924
1031
1111
1219
1336
1421
1531
1638
1713
1868
1917
2030
218
2223
2336
2411
2511
2633
2711
2815
2917
3036
3143
3219
3331
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs107
matches(empty)
63.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences72
ratio0.028
matches
0"It's almost midnight — too late for a delivery, and none of my few friends would show up unannounced."
1"He kisses like he does everything — with confident, practiced ease that leaves you dizzy."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount437
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.029748283752860413
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.009153318077803204
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean11.69
std7.19
cv0.615
sampleLengths
013
127
220
38
46
53
619
76
84
96
103
1122
1216
1311
1416
158
1610
1711
187
1917
2025
216
2211
2314
245
2512
2624
2710
2811
2915
3016
315
3212
3321
3413
3523
3634
3711
3811
396
404
4126
425
433
442
4521
465
4710
4810
4911
59.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3888888888888889
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"Then he leans in and"
1"Then his mouth is on"
ratio0.035
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences57
matches
0"I slam the last deadbolt"
1"I toss my helmet onto"
2"They scatter across the cushion,"
3"My eyes narrow."
4"It's almost midnight — too"
5"I creep towards the door,"
6"My heart stutters."
7"I haven't been able to"
8"I undo the locks, pulse"
9"His tailored charcoal suit drapes"
10"he drawls, exhaling smoke through"
11"I cross my arms, cocking"
12"He steps inside without waiting"
13"I shut the door behind"
14"I ask, keeping my tone"
15"I arch a brow, ignoring"
16"He flinches almost imperceptibly at"
17"I rub my temples, considering."
18"I say, leading him over"
19"He pulls a yellowed map"
ratio0.649
21.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences57
matches
0"I slam the last deadbolt"
1"The raised voices from the"
2"I toss my helmet onto"
3"They scatter across the cushion,"
4"A knock sounds at the"
5"My eyes narrow."
6"It's almost midnight — too"
7"I creep towards the door,"
8"Another knock, more insistent."
9"My heart stutters."
10"Lucien Moreau, the last person"
11"I haven't been able to"
12"I undo the locks, pulse"
13"Lucien leans against the jamb,"
14"His tailored charcoal suit drapes"
15"he drawls, exhaling smoke through"
16"I cross my arms, cocking"
17"He steps inside without waiting"
18"I shut the door behind"
19"I ask, keeping my tone"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He steps inside without waiting for an invite, his clean scent washing over me as his shoulder brushes my arm, making me shiver despite myself."
1"He kisses like he does everything — with confident, practiced ease that leaves you dizzy."
2"I wind my arms around his neck, yanking him closer, forgotten promises of keeping this professional evaporating like smoke."
3"His cane clatters to the floor and he hoists me up onto the kitchen counter, hands greedily roaming my back, my hips, kneading, caressing."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he murmurs, thumb caressing my jaw"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he drawls (drawl)"
1"he murmurs (murmur)"
2"I admit (admit)"
3"I tease breathlessly (tease)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.32
77.7499%