Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ0GFSXW9WHPG9FX4Z5807

Run Details

Duration:
45.1s
Cost:
$0.001890
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"Rory?" Lucien's voice cracked ever so slightly, the vulnerability in his amber and black eyes on full display. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meowed softly, brushing against his tailored charcoal suit, seeming to sense the tension in the air. "Lucien. What are you doing here?" Aurora's bright blue eyes narrowed, her hand gripping the doorframe. The scent of curry wafted up from the restaurant below, filling the cramped flat with its spicy aroma. "I had to see you. After what happened last time..." He averted his gaze, a sentiment Aurora echoed as she fingered the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "That was six months ago, Lucien. You can't just show up at my flat unannounced like that. We agreed to keep things professional between us." Her voice was steady, but her heart pounded in her chest. "I know, I know. But damn it, Rory, I can't get you out of my head," he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper. His hand unconsciously tapped the hidden blade in his ivory-handled cane. For a moment, they stood in silence, the weight of their history pressing down on them. Slowly, Aurora stepped aside, allowing him entrance into the flat. He moved with a quiet grace, his heterochromatic eyes scanning the mountains of books and scrolls scattered about. "Still trying to save the world, I see," he noted with a hint of a smile, picking up a research note from the nearest pile. "Old habits die hard," Aurora replied, crossing her arms over her chest, trying to put up a protective wall between them. "Rory..." Lucien began, his voice trailing off. He moved towards her, closing the distance between them. Aurora's heart hammered in her chest, her resolve wavering. "Lucien, don't," she breathed, but there was no conviction in her words. "I tried, Rory," he whispered, his fingers brushing a strand of her straight, shoulder-length black hair from her face. "I tried to forget you, but I can't." "Why do you think I left Cardiff?" Aurora replied, her voice barely audible. "I couldn't bear to be near you, knowing we could never be together." "But we can," Lucien insisted, his hand cupping her face, his thumb wiping away a stray tear she hadn't realized had fallen. "We are, Rory, whether we like it or not. We're bound together by something greater than either of us understands." Aurora wanted to argue, to insist that he leave, that they could never work - but the words wouldn't come. Instead, she found herself leaning into his touch, her body drawn to the warmth of his like a moth to a flame. "Lucien," she breathed, a soft surrender. In the next instant, his lips were on hers, the kiss searing, branding, exorcising the ghosts of their past. His arms wrapped around her, pulling her close, and she found herself falling, tumbling head over heels into the fire that burned between them. "Rory," he murmured against her lips, his voice thick with emotion. "My Rory." "I'm so tired of fighting this," she admitted, her hands fisting in the material of his suit jacket. "I want... I want..." "Tell me," Lucien urged, his lips trailing along her jaw, her neck, leaving a trail of fire in their wake. "I want you," Aurora admitted, surrendering to the inevitable. "I've always wanted you, even when it hurt." Lucien's response was swift, his arms lifting her, carrying her to the small bed in the corner of the flat. They tumbled onto it, lost in the sea of books and scrolls and forgotten history. "I'm here now," he promised, his body covering hers. "And I'm not letting you go again." "Promise?" Aurora breathed, her heart caught in her throat. "Promise," Lucien echoed, sealing the vow with a kiss that left no room for doubt. And there, in the cramped flat above the curry house, they came together - two lost souls finding solace in the chaos, two hearts that had never truly forgotten the rhythm of the other's beat. "I love you, Rory," Lucien whispered, his voice a vow. "I love you too," Aurora replied, surrendering to the truth she had always known, the truth that had haunted her dreams and chased her from Cardiff to London and back again. "I always have."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:27:31.329Z" 2/19/2026, 3:27:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien's voice cracked ever [ever]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.733
leniency1
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.045
64.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount711
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"ever so slightly"
1"softly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"slowly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount711
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"resolve"
count1
7
word"wavering"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"moth to a flame"
count1
10
word"searing"
count1
11
word"solace"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"echoed"
2"whisper"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"scanning"
6"resolve"
7"wavering"
8"warmth"
9"moth to a flame"
10"searing"
11"solace"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count2
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"heart hammered in her chest"
2"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences37
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences45
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords710
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount533
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy1
Aurora10
Lucien7
Cardiff1
London1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.562
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount710
matches(empty)
18.52% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences45
matches
0"insist that he leave, that they"
78.38% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean26.3
std11.16
cv0.424
sampleLengths
038
134
228
336
435
544
625
721
816
921
1027
1126
1242
1342
146
1543
1613
1722
1820
1917
2035
2116
229
2315
2435
2510
2634
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs93
matches(empty)
15.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences45
ratio0.044
matches
0"Aurora wanted to argue, to insist that he leave, that they could never work - but the words wouldn't come."
1"And there, in the cramped flat above the curry house, they came together - two lost souls finding solace in the chaos, two hearts that had never truly forgotten the rhythm of the other's beat."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount534
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.031835205992509365
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.013108614232209739
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences45
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences45
mean15.78
std7.96
cv0.504
sampleLengths
018
120
216
318
428
536
624
711
816
910
1018
1125
1221
137
149
159
1612
1719
188
1913
2013
2122
2220
2320
2422
256
2619
2724
2811
292
3018
314
3220
339
348
3520
3615
379
387
399
4015
4135
4210
4331
443
71.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5111111111111111
totalSentences45
uniqueOpeners23
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences37
matches
0"Slowly, Aurora stepped aside, allowing"
1"Instead, she found herself leaning"
ratio0.054
57.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences37
matches
0"He averted his gaze, a"
1"Her voice was steady, but"
2"he admitted, his voice barely"
3"His hand unconsciously tapped the"
4"He moved with a quiet"
5"he noted with a hint"
6"He moved towards her, closing"
7"she breathed, but there was"
8"he whispered, his fingers brushing"
9"she breathed, a soft surrender"
10"His arms wrapped around her,"
11"he murmured against her lips,"
12"she admitted, her hands fisting"
13"They tumbled onto it, lost"
14"he promised, his body covering"
ratio0.405
27.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences37
matches
0"Lucien's voice cracked ever so"
1"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, meowed"
2"Aurora's bright blue eyes narrowed,"
3"The scent of curry wafted"
4"He averted his gaze, a"
5"Her voice was steady, but"
6"he admitted, his voice barely"
7"His hand unconsciously tapped the"
8"He moved with a quiet"
9"he noted with a hint"
10"Aurora replied, crossing her arms"
11"Lucien began, his voice trailing"
12"He moved towards her, closing"
13"Aurora's heart hammered in her"
14"she breathed, but there was"
15"he whispered, his fingers brushing"
16"Aurora replied, her voice barely"
17"Lucien insisted, his hand cupping"
18"Aurora wanted to argue, to"
19"she breathed, a soft surrender"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His arms wrapped around her, pulling her close, and she found herself falling, tumbling head over heels into the fire that burned between them."
1"Lucien's response was swift, his arms lifting her, carrying her to the small bed in the corner of the flat."
2"And there, in the cramped flat above the curry house, they came together - two lost souls finding solace in the chaos, two hearts that had never truly forgotten…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"blue eyes narrowed, her hand gripping the doorframe"
1"he admitted, his voice barely above a whisper"
2"Lucien began, his voice trailing off"
3"Aurora replied, her voice barely audible"
4"he murmured, his voice thick with emotion"
5"she admitted, her hands fisting in the material of his suit jacket"
6"Lucien whispered, his voice a vow"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
1"he noted (note)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
4"Lucien insisted (insist)"
5"she breathed (breathe)"
6"he murmured (murmur)"
7"she admitted (admit)"
8"Lucien urged (urge)"
9"Aurora admitted (admit)"
10"he promised (promise)"
11"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
12"Lucien whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.813
effectiveRatio0.813
67.5657%