Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ0HWHN15Y8RDFFWAK5Z15

Run Details

Duration:
21.0s
Cost:
$0.002302
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn's boots crunched against the gravel as she stepped out of her car, the tails of her black overcoat fluttering in the chilly night breeze. Her sharp eyes scanned the abandoned Tube station platform, now cordoned off with police tape. This was no ordinary crime scene. She ducked under the tape, her jaw set with determination. The flickering fluorescent lights cast eerie shadows across the platform, the echoes of her footsteps the only sound disturbing the unsettling silence. "What have we got?" Harlow demanded, her gaze sweeping over the gathered officers. "Female victim, early twenties. Throat cut." Detective Sergeant Briggs approached, his brow furrowed. "We found her about an hour ago." Harlow nodded, her eyes narrowing as she took in the details. "And the location?" "Abandoned Camden Tube station. Looks like some kind of...underground market." Briggs gestured toward the shadowy archways that led deeper into the tunnels. Harlow's expression darkened. "The Veil Market." She knew of the notorious supernatural black market, having tracked its elusive trail for years. But to find a body here... "You know about this place?" Briggs asked, his tone laced with a mix of curiosity and unease. "Unfortunately." Harlow strode toward the body, her keen gaze sweeping over the victim. "Have you ID'd her?" "Eva Kowalski, 26 years old." Briggs consulted his notebook. "Works as a research assistant at the British Museum." Harlow's brow furrowed. "The Veil Market..." She knelt beside the body, her fingers gently tracing the deep gash across Eva's throat. "This doesn't fit the usual M.O. of the Veil Market. No signs of a struggle, no other wounds..." Her eyes narrowed as she studied the victim's face. "What was she doing here?" "Maybe she stumbled onto something she shouldn't have," Briggs offered, his tone grave. Harlow stood, her gaze sweeping the platform once more. "Where's her companion?" Briggs blinked. "Companion?" "Eva Kowalski was known to frequent the Veil Market. She wouldn't have come alone." Harlow's eyes narrowed. "Find her friend. Now." As the officers dispersed, Harlow knelt beside the body once more, her fingers tracing the delicate gold chain around Eva's neck. A small, ornate locket dangled from it, the surface marred by a splotch of crimson. Harlow's breath caught in her throat as she gently pried it open, revealing a faded photograph of two young women — one with red curls, the other with a brilliant smile. "Aurora," Harlow whispered, her heart sinking. Eva's companion was Aurora Sinclair, the ringleader of the supernatural clique she'd been investigating for months. And if Eva was involved... "Detective Quinn?" A tentative voice drew Harlow's attention, and she turned to see a young woman with red curls and round glasses approaching cautiously. "You must be Eva's friend," Harlow said, rising to her feet. The woman's green eyes were wide with fear and grief. "I-I'm Aurora Sinclair. What happened to Eva?" Harlow studied her for a moment, seeing the genuine distress etched across her features. "I'm afraid Eva Kowalski has been murdered." Aurora's face crumpled, a strangled cry escaping her lips as she sank to her knees. "No, no, this can't be..." Her trembling hands covered her face, her shoulders shaking with sobs. Harlow's expression softened, a flicker of sympathy crossing her hardened features. She crouched beside Aurora, her voice low and measured. "I need you to tell me everything you know about Eva's involvement with the Veil Market." Aurora lifted her head, her eyes red-rimmed and desperate. "The Veil Market? I don't... I don't understand." "Don't play coy with me, Ms. Sinclair." Harlow's tone was sharp. "Eva was your friend, and she was found dead in the heart of the Veil Market. I need to know what she was doing there." Aurora shook her head, her curls bouncing wildly. "I-I don't know anything about the Veil Market. Eva and I... we've been friends since we were children. She's an occult researcher at the British Museum, but she's never mentioned anything about... about this place." Harlow studied the young woman's face, searching for any signs of deception. But Aurora's grief and confusion appeared genuine. "If that's true, then why was she here?" Aurora's brow furrowed, her gaze darting around the platform as if the answer lay hidden in the shadows. "I... I don't know. We were supposed to meet for dinner tonight, but she never showed up. I came to look for her, and..." Her voice trailed off, a fresh wave of anguish washing over her features. Harlow's jaw tightened, her mind racing with unanswered questions. If Eva wasn't involved with the Veil Market, then what had brought her to this dark, dangerous place? And who had wanted her dead? "Detective Quinn!" Briggs' voice echoed across the platform, drawing Harlow's attention. She rose to her feet, her gaze locking with Aurora's. "Stay here. I need to speak with my colleague." As Harlow strode toward Briggs, she couldn't shake the feeling that there was more to this case than met the eye. The evidence didn't add up, and the presence of the Veil Market only deepened the mystery. She had to uncover the truth, no matter the cost. Briggs greeted her with a solemn expression. "We found her bag, just over there." He gestured toward a shadowy alcove, where a worn leather satchel lay discarded on the ground. Harlow nodded, her eyes narrowing. "Anything else?" "Yeah, and... you're not going to like it." Briggs hesitated, his brow furrowing. "We found a Veil Compass." Harlow's heart sank. The Veil Compass, a tool used to navigate the supernatural realm, was a prized possession of the Veil Market. If Eva had one, it meant she was more deeply involved with the underground world than she had initially let on. "Damn it." Harlow's jaw tightened, her mind racing. "This just got a lot more complicated." Briggs nodded, his expression grave. "What do you want to do?" Harlow's gaze drifted back to where Aurora sat, her shoulders shaking with grief. "We need to find out what Eva Kowalski was doing here. And we need to keep a close eye on her friend."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:27:32.76Z" 2/19/2026, 3:27:32 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1012
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count2
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1012
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"echoes"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"furrowed"
count3
5
word"tracing"
count2
6
word"grave"
count2
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"racing"
count2
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"furrowing"
count1
13
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"echoes"
2"footsteps"
3"silence"
4"furrowed"
5"tracing"
6"grave"
7"etched"
8"flicker"
9"measured"
10"racing"
11"echoed"
12"furrowing"
13"navigate"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
69.44% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences60
matches
0"t with determination"
1"e with fear"
2"a flicker of sympathy"
3"g with grief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1010
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount668
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity3.44
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Tube1
Detective1
Sergeant1
Briggs10
Harlow23
Eva6
Aurora9
Sinclair1
Veil4
Market3
Compass1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Sergeant"
2"Briggs"
3"Harlow"
4"Eva"
5"Aurora"
6"Sinclair"
7"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared genuine"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1010
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean25.9
std14.4
cv0.556
sampleLengths
047
132
213
320
414
522
627
717
817
918
1053
1113
1212
133
1421
1567
1627
1724
1811
1917
2021
2131
2236
2317
2436
2543
2627
2755
2833
2911
3019
3147
3230
337
3418
3543
3615
3711
3835
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences82
ratio0.012
matches
0"Harlow's breath caught in her throat as she gently pried it open, revealing a faded photograph of two young women — one with red curls, the other with a brilliant smile."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount561
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"notorious supernatural black market,"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.030303030303030304
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0106951871657754
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean12.32
std7.67
cv0.623
sampleLengths
026
115
26
310
422
513
613
77
811
93
1022
113
1218
136
1417
1513
164
179
189
193
2018
2127
225
2313
249
253
262
271
2817
294
3021
3115
3231
336
3416
355
3624
3711
3810
397
4014
417
4215
4316
4411
459
4616
479
488
4911
67.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4024390243902439
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences59
matches
0"Her sharp eyes scanned the"
1"She ducked under the tape,"
2"She knew of the notorious"
3"She knelt beside the body,"
4"Her eyes narrowed as she"
5"Her trembling hands covered her"
6"She crouched beside Aurora, her"
7"Her voice trailed off, a"
8"She rose to her feet,"
9"She had to uncover the"
10"He gestured toward a shadowy"
ratio0.186
27.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences59
matches
0"Harlow Quinn's boots crunched against"
1"Her sharp eyes scanned the"
2"This was no ordinary crime"
3"She ducked under the tape,"
4"The flickering fluorescent lights cast"
5"Harlow demanded, her gaze sweeping"
6"Detective Sergeant Briggs approached, his"
7"Harlow nodded, her eyes narrowing"
8"Briggs gestured toward the shadowy"
9"Harlow's expression darkened."
10"She knew of the notorious"
11"Briggs asked, his tone laced"
12"Harlow strode toward the body,"
13"Briggs consulted his notebook"
14"Harlow's brow furrowed."
15"She knelt beside the body,"
16"Her eyes narrowed as she"
17"Briggs offered, his tone grave"
18"Harlow stood, her gaze sweeping"
19"Harlow's eyes narrowed"
ratio0.864
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"If Eva wasn't involved with"
1"If Eva had one, it"
ratio0.034
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Harlow demanded, her gaze sweeping over the gathered officers"
1"Detective Sergeant Briggs approached, his brow furrowed"
2"She knelt, her fingers gently tracing the deep gash across Eva's throat"
3"Harlow whispered, her heart sinking"
4"trembling hands covered, her shoulders shaking with sobs"
5"Briggs hesitated, his brow furrowing"
6"Harlow's jaw tightened, her mind racing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Harlow demanded (demand)"
1"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.095
80.4365%