| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 30 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "His voice remained infuriatingly [infuriatingly]" | | 2 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "Aurora pushed away [away]" | | 4 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 103 | | tagDensity | 0.291 | | leniency | 0.583 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.097 | |
| 86.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1470 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "languidly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1470 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "glistening" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "down her spine" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "firmly" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "charged" | | 13 | "unspoken" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 156 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1452 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.84% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 822 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Moreau | 2 | | Aurora | 14 | | Lucien | 10 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Relief | 1 | | Two | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Relief" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.648 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1452 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 88 | | mean | 16.5 | | std | 11.92 | | cv | 0.723 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 37 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 36 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was agreeing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 156 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora knew that knock—remembered it from years ago, when it meant late-night conversations and tangled sheets." | | 1 | "Aurora's body reacted before her mind could intervene—pulse quickening, breath catching." | | 2 | "Same eyes—one amber, one black—that saw too much." | | 3 | "He surveyed the cramped space—the towers of books, the scrolls carefully weighted at the corners, the half-eaten curry on the coffee table." | | 4 | "Her name in his mouth—her full name, not the nickname everyone else used—sent an unwelcome shiver down her spine." | | 5 | "Lucien's jaw tightened—a nearly imperceptible tell that she'd hit a nerve." | | 6 | "Two years had etched subtle changes into his face—a new scar near his temple, deeper lines around his eyes." | | 7 | "Something flashed in his mismatched eyes—guilt, perhaps, or something dangerously close to regret." | | 8 | "The curry house was busy tonight; she could see the golden glow of its windows reflected in puddles on the pavement." | | 9 | "The way he said it—soft, almost reverent—made her chest ache." | | 10 | "Lucien's fingers tapped a rhythm against his thigh—a rare display of agitation." |
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| 99.54% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 839 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.04052443384982122 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01907032181168057 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 156 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 156 | | mean | 9.31 | | std | 6.19 | | cv | 0.665 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 65.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4230769230769231 | | totalSentences | 156 | | uniqueOpeners | 66 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She set down the weathered" | | 1 | "She unlocked the deadbolts one" | | 2 | "His platinum hair was darker" | | 3 | "He nodded toward the door" | | 4 | "His ivory-handled cane tapped softly" | | 5 | "He surveyed the cramped space—the" | | 6 | "He removed his coat, folding" | | 7 | "He moved toward the kitchen" | | 8 | "She watched him trace a" | | 9 | "Her name in his mouth—her" | | 10 | "She moved to the kitchenette," | | 11 | "His voice remained infuriatingly calm" | | 12 | "She filled the electric kettle," | | 13 | "She slammed two mugs onto" | | 14 | "He moved toward her, close" | | 15 | "She pushed one mug toward" | | 16 | "He accepted the mug, their" | | 17 | "He sipped his tea" | | 18 | "she said quietly" | | 19 | "He set his mug down" |
| | ratio | 0.422 | |
| 20.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock felt different somehow." | | 1 | "Aurora knew that knock—remembered it" | | 2 | "She set down the weathered" | | 3 | "Ptolemy stretched languidly across the" | | 4 | "She unlocked the deadbolts one" | | 5 | "The door swung open." | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 7 | "His platinum hair was darker" | | 8 | "Aurora's body reacted before her" | | 9 | "He nodded toward the door" | | 10 | "Aurora stepped back, allowing him" | | 11 | "Lucien entered with the quiet" | | 12 | "His ivory-handled cane tapped softly" | | 13 | "He surveyed the cramped space—the" | | 14 | "He removed his coat, folding" | | 15 | "Aurora closed the door but" | | 16 | "A clear message: this visit" | | 17 | "Lucien smiled, the expression never" | | 18 | "Aurora crossed her arms." | | 19 | "He moved toward the kitchen" |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien entered with the quiet confidence of someone who belonged everywhere and nowhere simultaneously." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 30 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau stood, rainwater glistening on his charcoal suit" | | 1 | "He accepted, their fingers brushing briefly" | | 2 | "He leaned, voice dropping" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 103 | | tagDensity | 0.039 | | leniency | 0.078 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |