Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ0QDT6V2V1NFT4R15QNR2

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43.7s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock felt different somehow. Three sharp raps that cut through the gentle patter of rain on Eva's window. Aurora knew that knock—remembered it from years ago, when it meant late-night conversations and tangled sheets. "Coming!" She set down the weathered tome she'd been cataloguing for Eva, brushing dust from her fingers. Ptolemy stretched languidly across the sofa, unimpressed by the interruption. She unlocked the deadbolts one by one, their familiar clicks marking the countdown to whatever waited on the other side. The door swung open. "Carter." Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, rainwater glistening on his charcoal suit. His platinum hair was darker when wet, slicked back with casual precision. "May I come in?" Aurora's body reacted before her mind could intervene—pulse quickening, breath catching. Two years since she'd last seen him, yet nothing had changed. Same impeccable posture. Same thin lips curved into a knowing smile. Same eyes—one amber, one black—that saw too much. "Three deadbolts now?" He nodded toward the door. "Your paranoia has evolved." "Eva's paranoia." Aurora stepped back, allowing him inside without explicitly inviting him. "They're hers." Lucien entered with the quiet confidence of someone who belonged everywhere and nowhere simultaneously. His ivory-handled cane tapped softly against the floorboards. He surveyed the cramped space—the towers of books, the scrolls carefully weighted at the corners, the half-eaten curry on the coffee table. "I see Eva's organizational system remains... unique." He removed his coat, folding it over his arm rather than looking for a place to hang it. "Is she here?" "She's in Cambridge for a conference." Aurora closed the door but didn't engage the locks. A clear message: this visit would be brief. "Three days." "Convenient." "Is it?" Lucien smiled, the expression never quite reaching his mismatched eyes. "That depends entirely on your perspective, doesn't it?" Aurora crossed her arms. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "Direct as ever." He moved toward the kitchen area, examining a stack of ancient-looking notebooks. "No 'how have you been' or 'lovely weather we're having'?" "The weather's shit and I know exactly how you've been. You're still Moreau, still wearing suits that cost more than my monthly rent, still carrying secrets like currency." She watched him trace a finger along a book spine. "And you still haven't answered my question." "I require your assistance with a matter." "My assistance." A bitter laugh escaped her lips. "Last time I assisted you, I ended up with three cracked ribs and a curse that took months to lift." "A regrettable outcome." "Regrettable." The word tasted wrong. "Is that what you call it?" Lucien set his cane against the counter and turned to face her fully. Water dripped from his sleeve cuff, forming a small puddle on the linoleum. "What would you prefer I call it, Aurora?" Her name in his mouth—her full name, not the nickname everyone else used—sent an unwelcome shiver down her spine. Two years, and still her body remembered the way he'd whispered it against her skin. "I'd prefer you call it what it was." She moved to the kitchenette, putting the counter between them. "A betrayal." "A miscalculation." "You knew exactly what would happen." "I knew what might happen." His voice remained infuriatingly calm. "There's a distinction." "Not to me." She filled the electric kettle, needing something to do with her hands. "Not when I was the one bleeding on the floor while you negotiated with that thing." "I got you out." "After you got what you wanted." Lucien's jaw tightened—a nearly imperceptible tell that she'd hit a nerve. "That's unfair." "Is it?" She slammed two mugs onto the counter harder than necessary. "You used me as a distraction while you stole from a demon lord. Forgive me if I don't consider that behavior worthy of a second chance." "I'm not asking for a second chance, Carter." He moved toward her, close enough that she could smell his cologne beneath the rain. "I'm asking for your expertise." "Find another linguistic expert." "I don't want another expert. I want you." The kettle clicked off. Aurora poured boiling water over tea bags, watching the liquid darken. She pushed one mug toward him without meeting his eyes. "What's the job?" "A translation." He accepted the mug, their fingers brushing briefly. "Ancient text. Pre-Babylonian." "There are people at Oxford who specialize in—" "It's written in blood." Aurora paused. "Human?" "No." "Demon?" "Yes." "Whose blood?" Lucien's lips quirked. "That's the interesting part." Despite herself, Aurora felt curiosity kindle. Damn him for knowing exactly which buttons to push. "Why me?" "You have a particular talent for understanding the nuances of demonic scripts. The emotional contexts. The subtextual layers." He sipped his tea. "Also, you're not currently affiliated with any institution that might claim ownership of the findings." "You mean I'm off-grid enough that no one will notice if things go sideways." "A crude assessment, but not entirely inaccurate." Aurora studied him over her mug rim. Two years had etched subtle changes into his face—a new scar near his temple, deeper lines around his eyes. Whatever he'd been doing since their parting hadn't been gentle. "The last time nearly killed me," she said quietly. "This is different." He set his mug down and reached into his jacket, extracting a slim leather portfolio. "This is academic. Translation only. No rituals, no summoning." "And what happens after the translation?" His expression remained neutral. "That's not your concern." "It becomes my concern when the words I decipher open gates to places that should stay closed." Aurora pushed away from the counter. "I've seen what happens when you get hold of certain knowledge, Lucien. I still have the scars." Something flashed in his mismatched eyes—guilt, perhaps, or something dangerously close to regret. "I never intended for you to be harmed." "But you weren't surprised when I was." He didn't deny it. Aurora turned away, facing the window. Rain traced jagged paths down the glass, distorting the lights of Brick Lane below. The curry house was busy tonight; she could see the golden glow of its windows reflected in puddles on the pavement. "You should go," she said finally. "Will you look at it, at least?" He placed the portfolio on the counter. "Before you decide?" "Why? So you can gauge my reaction and tailor your manipulation accordingly?" A small smile. "You always did understand me too well." "Not well enough, apparently." She didn't turn. "Not when it mattered." Lucien moved behind her, close enough that she could feel his breath stir her hair. "What happened in Prague—" "Don't." Her voice came out sharper than intended. "Don't pretend it was anything other than what it was." "And what was it?" Aurora faced him then, forcing herself to meet those unnerving eyes. "A transaction. You needed something I could provide. I was convenient." "Is that what you believe?" "It's what I know." He reached toward her face, hesitated, then let his hand fall back to his side. "You were never just convenient, Aurora." The way he said it—soft, almost reverent—made her chest ache. This was the danger of Lucien Moreau: the moments of seeming vulnerability that made you forget what he was capable of. "The tea's getting cold," she said, retreating to safer ground. He accepted the change of subject with a slight nod. "Earl Grey. You remembered." "Hard to forget a man who carries his own tea blend when he travels." A small, unwanted smile tugged at her lips. "Still have that silver case?" "Of course." He produced it from an inner pocket, the engraved surface catching the light. "Some habits are worth maintaining." Their fingers brushed again as she took it, examining the familiar pattern of intertwined serpents. When she looked up, Lucien was watching her with an intensity that made her skin warm. "One translation," she said, not entirely sure why she was agreeing. "No field work. No rituals. I look at it here, with proper protective measures." Relief softened his features. "Acceptable terms." "And you tell me what you're really after." His expression closed again. "The translation will make that clear enough." "That's not how this works." Aurora set the silver case down firmly. "Full disclosure or no deal." Lucien's fingers tapped a rhythm against his thigh—a rare display of agitation. "The text contains information about traveling between realms." "We already know how to do that." "Not all realms." He leaned closer, voice dropping. "There are places beyond Avaros. Places my father mentioned only in whispers." Aurora felt a chill that had nothing to do with the rain outside. "And you want to go there? Why?" The silence stretched between them, charged with unspoken truths. "Because something was taken from me," he finally said. "Something I intend to get back."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Aurora stepped back [back]"
1"His voice remained infuriatingly [infuriatingly]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
3"Aurora pushed away [away]"
4"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences103
tagDensity0.291
leniency0.583
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.097
86.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1470
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"languidly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"languidly"
1"softly"
2"carefully"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1470
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"glistening"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"glistening"
2"pulse"
3"down her spine"
4"electric"
5"etched"
6"traced"
7"could feel"
8"intensity"
9"firmly"
10"chill"
11"silence"
12"charged"
13"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"felt a chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1452
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount822
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Ptolemy1
Moreau2
Aurora14
Lucien10
Brick1
Lane1
Relief1
Two3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
5"Relief"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.648
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1452
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences156
matches
0"knew that knock"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs88
mean16.5
std11.92
cv0.723
sampleLengths
035
127
224
330
441
512
614
744
828
925
101
112
1218
139
1425
1545
167
1728
183
1911
2034
2134
2220
232
246
2513
2631
274
286
2913
3038
3128
324
338
3425
353
3613
378
384
393
401
411
421
432
447
4517
4637
4714
487
4936
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was watching"
1"was agreeing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences156
ratio0.071
matches
0"Aurora knew that knock—remembered it from years ago, when it meant late-night conversations and tangled sheets."
1"Aurora's body reacted before her mind could intervene—pulse quickening, breath catching."
2"Same eyes—one amber, one black—that saw too much."
3"He surveyed the cramped space—the towers of books, the scrolls carefully weighted at the corners, the half-eaten curry on the coffee table."
4"Her name in his mouth—her full name, not the nickname everyone else used—sent an unwelcome shiver down her spine."
5"Lucien's jaw tightened—a nearly imperceptible tell that she'd hit a nerve."
6"Two years had etched subtle changes into his face—a new scar near his temple, deeper lines around his eyes."
7"Something flashed in his mismatched eyes—guilt, perhaps, or something dangerously close to regret."
8"The curry house was busy tonight; she could see the golden glow of its windows reflected in puddles on the pavement."
9"The way he said it—soft, almost reverent—made her chest ache."
10"Lucien's fingers tapped a rhythm against his thigh—a rare display of agitation."
99.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount839
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04052443384982122
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01907032181168057
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean9.31
std6.19
cv0.665
sampleLengths
05
114
216
317
410
520
64
714
812
94
1011
1111
123
138
148
158
164
1712
182
1914
208
2122
2225
233
2415
258
262
271
282
2910
308
314
325
3315
3410
3538
367
377
388
3920
403
415
426
4313
4413
458
4619
4715
4818
492
65.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4230769230769231
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners66
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences83
matches
0"She set down the weathered"
1"She unlocked the deadbolts one"
2"His platinum hair was darker"
3"He nodded toward the door"
4"His ivory-handled cane tapped softly"
5"He surveyed the cramped space—the"
6"He removed his coat, folding"
7"He moved toward the kitchen"
8"She watched him trace a"
9"Her name in his mouth—her"
10"She moved to the kitchenette,"
11"His voice remained infuriatingly calm"
12"She filled the electric kettle,"
13"She slammed two mugs onto"
14"He moved toward her, close"
15"She pushed one mug toward"
16"He accepted the mug, their"
17"He sipped his tea"
18"she said quietly"
19"He set his mug down"
ratio0.422
20.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences83
matches
0"The knock felt different somehow."
1"Aurora knew that knock—remembered it"
2"She set down the weathered"
3"Ptolemy stretched languidly across the"
4"She unlocked the deadbolts one"
5"The door swung open."
6"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7"His platinum hair was darker"
8"Aurora's body reacted before her"
9"He nodded toward the door"
10"Aurora stepped back, allowing him"
11"Lucien entered with the quiet"
12"His ivory-handled cane tapped softly"
13"He surveyed the cramped space—the"
14"He removed his coat, folding"
15"Aurora closed the door but"
16"A clear message: this visit"
17"Lucien smiled, the expression never"
18"Aurora crossed her arms."
19"He moved toward the kitchen"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien entered with the quiet confidence of someone who belonged everywhere and nowhere simultaneously."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood, rainwater glistening on his charcoal suit"
1"He accepted, their fingers brushing briefly"
2"He leaned, voice dropping"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences103
tagDensity0.039
leniency0.078
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.3903%