Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ0S5AYKZ2YDQQXNRE57TX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.001766
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Camden Tube station smelled of damp concrete and rusted iron. Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed on the cracked platform tiles as she approached the cordon. Yellow police tape stretched across the arched entrance to what had once been the ticket hall. A uniformed officer lifted the tape for her without a word. Quinn paused just inside, her eyes scanning the space. The hall was vast, vaulted, empty except for a circle of evidence markers and two forensic technicians in white suits. In the centre of that circle lay a body—male, early thirties, dressed in dark jeans and a leather jacket. No visible wounds. His face was turned away from her, one arm outstretched as if reaching for something just beyond his fingertips. Detective Inspector Chen stood near the body, hands in his pockets, staring at the ground with a weary expression. He looked up as Quinn approached. “Quinn.” “Sir.” “What do you make of this?” She walked the perimeter first, ignoring the body for the moment. Her eyes tracked the pattern of the tiles, the dust, the way the light from the forensic lamps fell across the floor. “Point of entry?” she asked. “Wandered in. There’s no sign of forced entry anywhere in the station. Door at street level was propped open with a brick.” Chen shrugged. “Homeless, probably. Had a hit of something bad.” Quinn knelt beside the first evidence marker. It marked a small, dark smear on the tile. Dried blood? She leaned closer. No—it was something else, something that gleamed faintly iridescent under the lamplight. She took out her own torch, clicked it on, and held the beam at an angle. The smear wasn’t liquid. It was more like a stain, a discolouration burnt into the tile itself. It shimmered with a faint purplish hue. “This is part of the scene?” she said, not looking up. “One of them. There’s a few like it.” She moved to the next marker. Another patch, this one smaller, like a droplet spatter pattern. Then another, a handprint on the wall near the body—five fingers, a palm, but the edges were blurred as if the hand had been melting. Quinn stood up. “Was he alone?” “No witnesses. No ID. We’re running prints.” She turned her attention to the body. The man’s outstretched hand was inches from a small object on the floor—a twisted piece of brass, shaped like a compass, but the glass face was shattered. She could see intricate etchings on the casing even from this distance. “Has that been photographed?” “It’s part of the scene,” Chen said, his tone tightening. Quinn ignored him and crouched beside the body. She looked at the man’s face. His eyes were open, wide, staring at the ceiling with an expression of pure terror. No blood from the nose or mouth. No foam. No visible signs of a struggle. She checked his hands. No defensive wounds. Nails clean. She pulled back the collar of his jacket. No bruises on the neck. No injection marks. Her eyes drifted to the compass again. It lay between two tiles, lodged in a crack. The needle was bent, pointing not north, but toward the deepest part of the station, where the tunnel mouth yawned black. “He wasn’t homeless,” Quinn said. Chen came to stand beside her. “How do you figure?” “His boots.” She pointed. “Custom-made, good leather, barely scuffed. His watch is a vintage Breitling. His jacket’s tailored. He’s not sleeping rough. And he didn’t wander in.” She gestured toward the handprint on the wall. “He was running.” Chen frowned. “Running from what?” “Not from someone. Toward something.” Quinn stood, her gaze shifting from the body to the compass, then to the tunnel beyond. “He was holding that when he died.” “It’s junk.” “Is it?” she said quietly. She took out a pair of nitrile gloves, snapped them on, and picked up the compass. The brass was cold, colder than the air around them. The etchings on the casing weren’t decorative—they were symbols, angular and precise. Protective sigils. She’d seen them before, in files she wasn’t supposed to have, in notes left by a partner who’d disappeared three years ago. The needle trembled as she turned it over in her hand. It didn’t point north; it swung weakly toward the tunnel, then back toward the body, as if caught between two poles. “Put that down, Quinn.” Chen’s voice was flat. She ignored him. “These stains—they’re not blood. They’re not any substance I’ve seen at a crime scene. And this handprint.” She walked to the wall, studied the blurred edges. “He wasn’t leaving a print. He was trying to push himself away from the wall. But his hand slipped.” “Because he was high.” “No.” She turned to face Chen. “Because the wall was slick. Because something was coming out of it.” Chen stared at her. The forensic techs had stopped working, were watching them now. “Out of the wall?” Quinn went back to the first stain on the floor. She crouched, touched the tile with her gloved fingertip. It wasn’t sticky. It was smooth, like glass. “This isn’t a spill. It’s a residue. Something evaporated here. Or condensed.” She stood again, her mind racing. “He came here with that compass. He was looking for something. A door. A rift. He found it.” Chen shook his head. “You’re jumping to conclusions.” “Look at the evidence.” Her voice was low, controlled. “No signs of violence. No drugs in his system—we’ll confirm that, but I can see it in his eyes. He wasn’t overdosing. He was terrified. He saw something he couldn’t comprehend. He reached for the compass, dropped it, and whatever he’d found reached back.” She held up the compass again. The needle shivered, pointing insistently toward the tunnel. “This is pointing to where he came from. Where he breached.” Chen’s jaw tightened. “Quinn, this is a dead man in an abandoned station. Occam’s razor. He was high, he had a bad trip, he died. End of.” “Occam’s razor only works when you ignore the evidence that doesn’t fit.” She turned the compass over, examining the sigils. “This was made by someone who knew what they were doing. It’s a tool. A guide. He didn’t just stumble in here. He was guided.” She walked toward the tunnel mouth. The darkness swallowed the light from the forensic lamps after a few feet. She could feel a draft coming from it—cold, damp air that smelled of ozone and something else, something metallic. “There’s nothing down there,” Chen called after her. “How do you know? Have you searched it?” “It’s a dead end. The tunnel’s been sealed for twenty years.” “Sealed by who?” “By the city.” Quinn stood at the edge of the darkness, the compass cold in her hand. The needle pulled, like a magnet drawn to iron. She felt a chill crawl up her spine—not from the cold, but from recognition. This was how Morris had started. With anomalies. With evidence that didn’t add up. With things that couldn’t be explained. She looked back at Chen. He was watching her with a mixture of pity and frustration. “We’ll do a sweep of the tunnel,” he said. “For completeness. But Quinn—don’t go chasing ghosts.” Ghosts. She almost laughed. Ghosts were simple. Ghosts were folklore. What she was thinking of was something else entirely—something that left residues that shimmered purple, something that came out of walls, something that scared a man to death without touching him. She looked down at the compass again. The sigils seemed to pulse under the light. Protective sigils. Against what? “I want the lab to run a spectral analysis on these stains,” she said, walking back toward the body. “And I want to know what this is.” She held up the compass. “It’s evidence.” “It’s more than that.” She met his eyes. “This is a key. And I think our victim was trying to unlock something.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"She stood again [again]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.08
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"spectral"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"scanning"
2"shimmered"
3"shattered"
4"intricate"
5"trembled"
6"racing"
7"could feel"
8"chill"
9"pulse"
10"spectral"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences105
matches
0"felt a chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1318
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount892
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Chen"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Chen"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Quinn10
Inspector1
Chen12
Morris1
Ghosts3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Inspector"
2"Chen"
3"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.827
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if reaching for something just beyond his fingertips"
48.25% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.517
wordCount1318
matches
0"not north, but toward the deepest part of the station"
1"not from the cold, but from recognition"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean23.12
std18.99
cv0.821
sampleLengths
053
170
225
31
41
56
633
75
832
949
1024
1111
128
1341
146
157
1646
174
1810
1944
2025
2137
225
2310
2438
255
2628
272
285
2962
3032
318
3248
334
3418
3514
364
3763
388
3953
4025
4127
4245
4338
448
458
4611
473
483
4957
95.24% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences105
matches
0"was turned"
1"were blurred"
2"was shattered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs155
matches
0"were watching"
1"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences135
ratio0.067
matches
0"In the centre of that circle lay a body—male, early thirties, dressed in dark jeans and a leather jacket."
1"No—it was something else, something that gleamed faintly iridescent under the lamplight."
2"Then another, a handprint on the wall near the body—five fingers, a palm, but the edges were blurred as if the hand had been melting."
3"The man’s outstretched hand was inches from a small object on the floor—a twisted piece of brass, shaped like a compass, but the glass face was shattered."
4"The etchings on the casing weren’t decorative—they were symbols, angular and precise."
5"It didn’t point north; it swung weakly toward the tunnel, then back toward the body, as if caught between two poles."
6"She could feel a draft coming from it—cold, damp air that smelled of ozone and something else, something metallic."
7"She felt a chill crawl up her spine—not from the cold, but from recognition."
8"What she was thinking of was something else entirely—something that left residues that shimmered purple, something that came out of walls, something that scared a man to death without touching him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount900
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.024444444444444446
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006666666666666667
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean9.76
std7.52
cv0.77
sampleLengths
012
114
216
311
49
520
619
73
819
919
106
111
121
136
1411
1522
165
1724
188
197
209
212
223
2312
2416
254
2613
277
2811
298
306
3110
3225
333
343
357
367
3727
3812
394
4010
418
426
4315
447
452
466
474
483
492
54.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.37037037037037035
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners50
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then another, a handprint on"
ratio0.011
26.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences91
matches
0"His face was turned away"
1"He looked up as Quinn"
2"She walked the perimeter first,"
3"Her eyes tracked the pattern"
4"It marked a small, dark"
5"She leaned closer."
6"She took out her own"
7"It was more like a"
8"It shimmered with a faint"
9"she said, not looking up"
10"She moved to the next"
11"She turned her attention to"
12"She could see intricate etchings"
13"She looked at the man’s"
14"His eyes were open, wide,"
15"She checked his hands."
16"She pulled back the collar"
17"Her eyes drifted to the"
18"It lay between two tiles,"
19"She gestured toward the handprint"
ratio0.484
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences91
matches
0"The abandoned Camden Tube station"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed on"
2"A uniformed officer lifted the"
3"Quinn paused just inside, her"
4"The hall was vast, vaulted,"
5"His face was turned away"
6"Detective Inspector Chen stood near"
7"He looked up as Quinn"
8"She walked the perimeter first,"
9"Her eyes tracked the pattern"
10"Quinn knelt beside the first"
11"It marked a small, dark"
12"She leaned closer."
13"She took out her own"
14"The smear wasn’t liquid."
15"It was more like a"
16"It shimmered with a faint"
17"she said, not looking up"
18"She moved to the next"
19"Another patch, this one smaller,"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His face was turned away from her, one arm outstretched as if reaching for something just beyond his fingertips."
1"No—it was something else, something that gleamed faintly iridescent under the lamplight."
2"She could feel a draft coming from it—cold, damp air that smelled of ozone and something else, something metallic."
3"What she was thinking of was something else entirely—something that left residues that shimmered purple, something that came out of walls, something that scared…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, not looking up"
1"Chen said, his tone tightening"
2"She stood again, her mind racing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.32
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.3977%