Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ0SMSXE32H1X081DH4KTT

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.002522
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sharp rap at the door startled them both. Aurora glanced up from the tattered grimoire in her lap, frowning. "You expecting someone?" "No." Eva shook her head, brow creased. "Stay here." Rory watched her friend cross the cluttered flat in a few brisk strides, smooth her dress, and crack open the door. The security chain glinted in the light from the hall. A low voice rumbled, too muffled to catch the words. Eva tensed. Her fingers went white around the door. Knowing the look, Rory eased up off the couch. Pulse quickening. Eva's posture remained rigid. She didn't unfasten the chain. "You shouldn't be here." The voice again, husky, with a faint French lilt. Heart stumbling into a sprint, Rory edged closer. "I told you to stay away from me," Eva hissed. Rory halted mid-step. She knew that voice. Thought she'd never hear it again. A thread of ice wound through her. Eva glanced back. "Rory? Is Lucien...?" A strangled sound punched from her throat. She pivoted. Slam. Eva cranked the deadbolts, shoulders heaving. Seconds stretched. "Rory? Is Lucien who?" "The Frenchman," Rory croaked. "My...the ex." The deadbolts clicked open. Eva undid the chain. Yanked the door wide. Lucien Moreau loomed on the threshold. Charcoal suit immaculate, one hand gripping his ever-present cane. Heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — flashed beneath the brim of his hat as they swept the tiny flat. He froze when he caught sight of Rory. "Bonsoir, mon chéri," Lucien drawled. Soft as velvet. She flinched. He only ever called her that in private. Eva recoiled. Swung the door. It crashed into the jamb. Wood splintered. The door smashed open, deadbolts ripping from the frame. Lucien stalked in. Eva stumbled back, eyes wide, until the back of her knees hit the couch. Rory planted herself in front of her friend. Jaw clenched so tight her teeth ached. "You're not welcome here." Lucien sauntered around the apartment, skimming shelves, rifling through papers. "Interesting reading material, chérie. You've been doing research, non?" Rory's stomach bottomed out. They'd been careful. How much did he know? She forced her voice steady. "Get out of here before I call the police." "The police?" Lucien sneered. "What would you tell them, ma petite? That your demon ex-lover is making you nervous?" He trailed a finger over her cheek. "I think not." Rory smacked his hand away. "What do you want, Lucien?" "That is between me and chère Eva." He gave her friend a pointed, predatory look. Eva trembled behind her. Ptolemy the tabby cat crouched at her feet, eyes slit, ears flat. Rory's hands balled to fists. "Not happening. Leave. Now." Lucien's lips pulled back in a sharp smile. With a twist of his wrist, he unsheathed the slim blade concealed in his cane. He pressed the tip under her chin. "You are in no position to make demands, chérie. Sit down and stay out of this." Fear lanced through her. But she refused to blink. Refused to let him see. "Always the bully." In her periphery, Eva shifted. Tension crackled in the air. Lucien's gaze dipped to the blade. "Always so defiant. It is good to see that has not changed." Every muscle in her body coiled. "Go to hell." "Ah, but I have already been there, mon chéri. Many times." He caressed her jaw with the flat of the blade. "Now. Sit." Rory jerked her head away. "No." "Rory," Eva whispered. "She will do as I say." Lucien's blade tapped beneath her chin again. A low growl thrummed. Lucien stilled. Eyes narrowed, Rory searched for the sound's source. Ptolemy crouched at the edge of the sofa, ears flat, tail lashing. Hackles raised, green eyes locked on Lucien. "Call off your beast, Eva," Lucien said. "Leave her alone," Eva replied. The growl grew louder.widget The blade lowered an inch. Lucien glanced at the cat. Ptolemy hissed and spat. In one smooth motion, Lucien pivoted. Swung the sword. Rory dove. Hit the floor. Rolled. An agonized yowl split the air. Ptolemy streaked away — straight for Lucien's face. Claws unsheathed. Lucien cursed. Dropped the blade with a clang. He staggered back, a hand swiping at his cheek. Rory snatched up the fallen sword. In the same breath, she lunged. The blade punched into Lucien's chest. He howled. Crumpled to his knees. Ptolemy leapt clear. Teeth gritted, Rory drove the blade deeper. Leaned into it with all her weight. Lucien crumpled sideways. Hit the carpet. Rory hovered over him. Watching. Waiting. A wet, rattling sound came from his lungs. One amber eye stared sightlessly at the ceiling, the other at her. Eva crept up beside her. Trembling fingers pressed to her lips. "Is he...?" Rory held up a hand for silence. Lucien didn't move. Didn't breathe. She prodded his still form with a toe. Throat tight. Nothing. Legs unsteady, she crouched. Eased the sword free. Wiped it clean on his jacket. Only then did she meet Eva's wide-eyed gaze. "I think he is." She cleared her throat. "Dead." Eva stared at Lucien's body for a long beat. Hugged herself. Shivered. Then, she stooped. Picked up Ptolemy. Cradling the cat close, she crossed to the shattered door. Looked back at Rory. Turned away. Two steps into the hall, keys in hand, Eva paused. "Rory...?" She glanced back. "Yeah?" "Thank you." Eva gulped a breath. "For everything." Rory dipped her chin. "Anytime. Just...stay safe out there." Eva crossed the hall. Knocked on a neighbor's door. Rory exhaled. Tight and shaky. She dragged a hand down her face. Still clutching Lucien's sword, she slumped against the wall. Grief, shock, fear, and a hundred other emotions warred for dominance in her chest. Her vision blurred. She sucked in a deep breath. Another. And another. When the urge to cry or scream or both passed, she straightened. Rolled the tension from her shoulders. Surveyed the wreck of Eva's flat. She had a feeling her friend wouldn't be coming back here anytime soon. If ever. Resolved, she crossed to the scattered scrolls and books. Picked one up. She and Eva still had a lot of work to do.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:27:40.708Z" 2/19/2026, 3:27:40 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1022
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1022
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"jaw clenched"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"tension"
count2
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"lilt"
2"loomed"
3"velvet"
4"jaw clenched"
5"stomach"
6"trembled"
7"tension"
8"weight"
9"silence"
10"shattered"
11"resolved"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"Eyes narrowed"
1"Jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences152
filterMatches
0"know"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences176
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1022
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount851
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.47
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory20
French1
Moreau1
Soft1
Eva21
Lucien20
Ptolemy6
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.266
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1022
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences176
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean12.31
std8.31
cv0.675
sampleLengths
09
114
29
331
419
511
613
79
88
910
1020
116
129
131
1412
156
1612
1744
188
1910
2010
2114
2214
2319
2419
2512
2614
2729
2810
2915
3016
319
3246
3317
3410
3518
369
3723
386
393
4013
414
422
438
4419
457
465
4714
484
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences176
ratio0.011
matches
0"Heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — flashed beneath the brim of his hat as they swept the tiny flat."
1"Ptolemy streaked away — straight for Lucien's face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount851
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03055229142185664
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0035252643948296123
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences176
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences176
mean5.81
std4.05
cv0.698
sampleLengths
09
111
23
37
42
521
610
710
82
97
109
112
124
135
144
159
168
1710
183
194
206
217
223
233
247
252
261
276
282
294
304
312
324
334
344
356
369
3721
388
395
403
412
428
432
443
455
462
479
483
4914
89.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5397727272727273
totalSentences176
uniqueOpeners95
84.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"Only then did she meet"
1"Then, she stooped."
2"Still clutching Lucien's sword, she"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences119
matches
0"Her fingers went white around"
1"She didn't unfasten the chain."
2"She knew that voice."
3"He froze when he caught"
4"He only ever called her"
5"It crashed into the jamb."
6"They'd been careful."
7"She forced her voice steady."
8"He trailed a finger over"
9"He gave her friend a"
10"He pressed the tip under"
11"He caressed her jaw with"
12"He staggered back, a hand"
13"She prodded his still form"
14"She cleared her throat"
15"She glanced back."
16"She dragged a hand down"
17"Her vision blurred."
18"She sucked in a deep"
19"She had a feeling her"
ratio0.176
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences119
matches
0"The sharp rap at the"
1"Aurora glanced up from the"
2"Eva shook her head, brow"
3"Rory watched her friend cross"
4"The security chain glinted in"
5"A low voice rumbled, too"
6"Her fingers went white around"
7"Eva's posture remained rigid."
8"She didn't unfasten the chain."
9"The voice again, husky, with"
10"Heart stumbling into a sprint,"
11"Rory halted mid-step."
12"She knew that voice."
13"A thread of ice wound"
14"Eva glanced back."
15"A strangled sound punched from"
16"Eva cranked the deadbolts, shoulders"
17"The deadbolts clicked open."
18"Eva undid the chain."
19"Lucien Moreau loomed on the"
ratio0.689
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
18.42% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Eva hissed (hiss)"
1"Rory croaked (croak)"
2"Lucien drawled (drawl)"
3"Lucien sneered (sneer)"
4"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.184
leniency0.368
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.263
86.5161%