Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ0WG5FY3W5MNTXCS2AAMK

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Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.026495
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in the narrow hallway of Eva's flat, her hand hovering over the third deadbolt. She hesitated, her breath catching in her throat. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, weaved between her legs, purring softly. She glanced down at him, grateful for the distraction, but the moment of reprieve was fleeting. She turned the final lock and opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood on the other side, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers. The sight of him, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit, sent a jolt through her. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, and he leaned casually on his ivory-handled cane. The air between them crackled with unspoken words and unresolved tension. "Rory," he greeted, his voice smooth and measured. "Lucien," she replied, her tone cooler than she intended. She stepped aside, allowing him to enter. The flat felt even smaller with him in it, his presence filling the space. He glanced around, taking in the clutter of books and scrolls. "Eva's not here?" "No, she's out for the evening," Rory said, closing the door behind him. "What do you want, Lucien?" He turned to face her, his eyes searching hers. "I need your help." Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the door. "You always need something, don't you?" Lucien's lips twitched into a faint smile. "And you always have a way of making it sound like a crime." "Maybe because it usually is," she shot back, unable to keep the edge out of her voice. The memories of their last encounter flooded back, the arguments, the accusations, the hurt. She had walked away, vowing never to get entangled with him again. Yet here he was, standing in front of her, as if the past months had never happened. He took a step closer, his gaze never wavering. "This is different, Rory. It's important." "Important to you, maybe," she said, her voice softening despite herself. "Why should I care?" "Because it's about Evan," he said, his tone serious. Rory's heart skipped a beat at the mention of her ex. "What about him?" Lucien's expression darkened. "He's back in London. And he's looking for you." She felt a chill run down her spine. "How do you know?" "I have my sources," he said, his voice low. "He's been asking around, trying to find out where you are. I thought you should know." Rory swallowed hard, the fear and anger bubbling up inside her. "Why are you telling me this? What's in it for you?" Lucien's eyes softened, and for a moment, she saw a flicker of something genuine. "I don't want to see you get hurt, Rory. Not again." She looked away, the weight of his words pressing down on her. "I can take care of myself." "I know you can," he said, stepping closer. "But you don't have to do it alone." Rory's eyes met his, the intensity of his gaze making her heart race. She wanted to believe him, to trust him, but the scars of their past were still fresh. "Why should I trust you, Lucien? After everything?" He reached out, his hand gently brushing against her cheek. "Because I care about you, Rory. More than you know." She closed her eyes, the warmth of his touch stirring emotions she had tried to bury. "You have a funny way of showing it." "I know," he whispered, his voice filled with regret. "But I'm here now. And I want to make things right." Rory opened her eyes, searching his face for any sign of deception. All she saw was sincerity and a hint of vulnerability. She took a deep breath, the walls she had built around her heart beginning to crumble. "What do you need me to do?" Lucien's eyes lit up with relief. "I need you to come with me. There's a safe place where we can figure out our next move." She hesitated, the thought of leaving the relative safety of Eva's flat daunting. But the thought of facing Evan alone was even more terrifying. "Alright," she said, her voice steady. "But this doesn't mean I forgive you." "I understand," he said, his tone earnest. "One step at a time." Rory nodded, grabbing her coat from the hook by the door. "Let's go." As they stepped out into the cool night air, Lucien's hand found hers, giving it a reassuring squeeze. She glanced at him, a mixture of emotions swirling inside her. The future was uncertain, but for the first time in a long while, she felt a glimmer of hope. They walked in silence, the streets of East London bustling with life around them. Rory's mind raced with thoughts of Evan, of the danger he posed, and of the man beside her. She had always been drawn to Lucien, despite the complications and the secrets. There was something about him that made her feel alive, even when everything else seemed to be falling apart. As they turned a corner, Lucien stopped, his eyes scanning the area. "This way," he said, leading her down a narrow alley. Rory followed, her grip on his hand tightening. "Where are we going?" "To a place where we can talk without being overheard," he said, his voice low. "It's not far." They reached a small, unmarked door at the end of the alley. Lucien knocked three times, and a moment later, it creaked open. A burly man with a scar across his face peered out, his eyes narrowing as he saw Lucien. "Lucien," the man grunted. "Who's the girl?" "She's with me, Silas," Lucien said, his tone firm. "We need a place to talk." Silas eyed Rory for a moment before stepping aside. "Alright. But keep it quiet." They entered the dimly lit bar, the air thick with the scent of smoke and alcohol. Rory glanced around, taking in the worn leather booths and the low hum of conversation. Lucien led her to a secluded corner, away from prying eyes. "Sit," he said, gesturing to a booth. Rory slid into the seat, her nerves on edge. "What now?" Lucien sat across from her, his expression serious. "Now we figure out how to deal with Evan. Together." She nodded, the weight of the situation settling over her. "Alright. But no more secrets, Lucien. If we're going to do this, I need to know everything." He reached across the table, his hand covering hers. "You have my word, Rory. No more secrets." For the first time in months, she felt a sense of clarity. The road ahead would be difficult, but with Lucien by her side, she felt ready to face whatever came their way.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.327
leniency0.653
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"fleeting"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"encounter"
count1
5
word"wavering"
count1
6
word"skipped a beat"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"race"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"raced"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"fleeting"
1"unspoken"
2"tension"
3"measured"
4"encounter"
5"wavering"
6"skipped a beat"
7"chill"
8"down her spine"
9"flicker"
10"weight"
11"intensity"
12"race"
13"warmth"
14"silence"
15"raced"
16"scanning"
17"sense of"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
1"sent a jolt through"
2"a glimmer of hope"
79.95% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences74
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"filled with regret"
2"d with regret"
3"p with relief"
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1105
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount809
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva2
Ptolemy1
Moreau1
Rory12
Evan2
Lucien14
East1
London1
Silas1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Lucien"
7"Silas"
places
0"East"
1"London"
globalScore0.635
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1105
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.02
std14.95
cv0.622
sampleLengths
060
155
28
330
414
518
613
714
820
960
1015
1115
129
1314
1412
1512
1625
1722
1825
1918
2016
2138
2220
2324
2420
2545
2625
2737
2812
2913
3048
3164
3222
3312
3418
3541
367
3715
3814
3942
407
4111
4218
4327
4417
4533
91.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences74
matches
0"was slicked"
1"get entangled"
2"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was fleeting"
1"was, standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount810
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.025925925925925925
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007407407407407408
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean10.33
std4.4
cv0.426
sampleLengths
017
18
210
316
49
513
616
715
811
98
109
117
1214
1311
143
1513
165
179
184
198
206
217
2213
2317
2414
2512
2617
279
286
2911
304
319
3211
333
343
359
368
374
389
3916
4011
4111
4214
4311
4412
456
468
478
4813
4917
57.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.35514018691588783
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
25.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences74
matches
0"She hesitated, her breath catching"
1"She glanced down at him,"
2"She turned the final lock"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"he greeted, his voice smooth"
5"she replied, her tone cooler"
6"She stepped aside, allowing him"
7"He glanced around, taking in"
8"He turned to face her,"
9"she shot back, unable to"
10"She had walked away, vowing"
11"He took a step closer,"
12"she said, her voice softening"
13"he said, his tone serious"
14"She felt a chill run"
15"he said, his voice low"
16"She looked away, the weight"
17"he said, stepping closer"
18"She wanted to believe him,"
19"He reached out, his hand"
ratio0.486
7.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences74
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood in the"
1"She hesitated, her breath catching"
2"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, weaved"
3"She glanced down at him,"
4"She turned the final lock"
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"The sight of him, impeccably"
7"His platinum blond hair was"
8"The air between them crackled"
9"he greeted, his voice smooth"
10"she replied, her tone cooler"
11"She stepped aside, allowing him"
12"The flat felt even smaller"
13"He glanced around, taking in"
14"Rory said, closing the door"
15"He turned to face her,"
16"Rory crossed her arms, leaning"
17"Lucien's lips twitched into a"
18"she shot back, unable to"
19"The memories of their last"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Yet here he was, standing in front of her, as if the past months had never happened."
1"There was something about him that made her feel alive, even when everything else seemed to be falling apart."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he greeted, his voice smooth and measured"
1"she replied, her tone cooler than she intended"
2"she shot back, unable to keep the edge out of her voice"
3"she said, her voice softening despite herself"
4"he said, his tone serious"
5"he said, his voice low"
6"she said, her voice steady"
7"he said, his tone earnest"
8"he said, his voice low"
9"Lucien said, his tone firm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"the man grunted (grunt)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.082
74.4785%