Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ0XNAMYCRAHB7PGY013KH

Run Details

Duration:
22.2s
Cost:
$0.008956

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before she could finish turning the last deadbolt. Eva stood there, her dark curls wild as if she’d been running her hands through them all night, her usual sharp gaze softened by something Rory couldn’t place—surprise, maybe, or the ghost of an old argument. "Rory." Eva’s voice was rough, like she hadn’t spoken in hours. "You’re early." Rory held up the plastic bag of takeout. "Yu-Fei said you called in an order. Figured I’d kill two birds." Eva didn’t move. The scent of turmeric and cumin from the curry house downstairs curled between them, thick as the silence. Ptolemy wound around Eva’s ankles, tail flicking, but even the cat’s usual indifference felt charged. "You didn’t have to." "I know." Rory stepped forward, forcing Eva to either back up or let her in. The doorframe brushed her shoulder as she slipped past, the heat of the flat wrapping around her like a too-tight embrace. Books teetered on every surface, scrolls unfurled across the coffee table, their edges curling from neglect. A half-empty mug of tea sat cold beside a stack of yellowed papers. Eva shut the door, the deadbolts clicking into place one by one. The sound was too loud, too final. Rory set the bag on the counter, the plastic crinkling. "You look like hell." Eva’s laugh was sharp, humorless. "Charming as ever." "Just stating facts." Rory pulled out the containers, the steam rising in lazy tendrils. "You called in an order at midnight. Either you’re working on something big, or you’re avoiding sleep." Eva’s fingers drummed against the counter. "Both." Rory slid a fork across the surface. "Talk to me." "I don’t—" Eva cut herself off, jaw tightening. She turned away, plucking a book from the nearest stack. The spine cracked as she opened it, her shoulders rigid. "It’s nothing you need to worry about." Rory leaned against the counter, arms crossed. "That’s not how this works." Eva’s knuckles whitened around the book. "We’re not—we don’t do this anymore, Rory. You made that clear." The words hung between them, heavier than the scent of spices. Rory exhaled through her nose, slow and controlled. "I’m here. With food. That’s not nothing." Eva’s amber eyes flicked to hers, sharp and assessing. "Why are you really here?" Rory could’ve lied. Could’ve said she was just doing her job, that Yu-Fei had asked her to drop off the order. But Eva would see through it, same as she always had. "Because you called," Rory said. "And I wanted to see you." Eva’s breath hitched. The book slipped from her fingers, thudding onto the counter. "Don’t." "Don’t what?" "Don’t do this." Eva’s voice was low, dangerous. "Don’t stand there like nothing happened. Like you didn’t walk out the last time I needed you." Rory’s chest tightened. "That’s not fair." "Fair?" Eva’s laugh was a blade. "You want to talk about fair? You left, Rory. You left, and you didn’t look back." The air between them crackled, charged with something older than anger. Rory stepped closer, close enough to see the flecks of gold in Eva’s eyes, the way her pulse jumped in her throat. "I had to." Eva’s hands balled into fists. "Bullshit." Rory reached out, her fingers brushing Eva’s wrist. The contact was electric, sending a jolt up her arm. Eva flinched but didn’t pull away. "You know why I left," Rory said, voice low. Eva’s gaze dropped to Rory’s mouth. "I know you chose him over me." Rory’s thumb traced the inside of Eva’s wrist, slow and deliberate. "I chose survival." Eva’s breath came faster. "That’s not—" Rory cut her off with a kiss. It wasn’t gentle. It wasn’t soft. It was teeth and heat and the taste of old coffee and something darker, something that had been simmering between them for years. Eva gasped against her mouth, her hands flying to Rory’s hips, pulling her closer. The counter dug into Rory’s back, but she didn’t care. All that mattered was the way Eva’s body arched into hers, the way her fingers tangled in Rory’s hair, the way she made that low, desperate sound in the back of her throat. Rory pulled back just enough to speak, her lips brushing Eva’s. "I’m not leaving again." Eva’s eyes were dark, her pupils blown wide. "You can’t promise that." Rory kissed her again, slower this time, savoring the way Eva melted against her. "Watch me." Eva’s hands slid under Rory’s shirt, her touch searing. "You’re an idiot." Rory grinned against her mouth. "Yeah. But I’m your idiot." Eva’s laugh was breathless, disbelieving. "God help me." Rory kissed her again, deeper this time, until the world narrowed to just the two of them, to the heat between their bodies and the way Eva’s hands gripped her like she was afraid Rory would disappear. The takeout would get cold. The books could wait. None of it mattered as much as this.
total_cost0.008956

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount825
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount825
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"charged"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"simmering"
count1
7
word"blown wide"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"charged"
2"flicked"
3"pulse"
4"electric"
5"traced"
6"simmering"
7"blown wide"
8"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences62
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords819
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount636
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity4.72
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory26
Eva30
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Yu-Fei"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount819
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean19.5
std16.53
cv0.848
sampleLengths
048
113
220
336
44
565
619
714
88
931
107
1110
1235
1312
1417
1526
1614
1732
1811
1914
202
2125
226
2322
2436
256
2624
279
2813
2914
306
317
3286
3315
3412
3516
3612
3710
388
3937
409
418
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences92
ratio0.011
matches
0"Eva stood there, her dark curls wild as if she’d been running her hands through them all night, her usual sharp gaze softened by something Rory couldn’t place—surprise, maybe, or the ghost of an old argument."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount640
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.028125
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean8.9
std6.95
cv0.781
sampleLengths
012
136
211
32
48
512
63
718
815
94
1015
1121
1216
1313
1412
157
1610
174
185
193
2014
2117
226
231
247
253
268
2710
2810
297
307
315
326
3311
3411
358
367
379
385
393
4018
4111
425
436
443
4510
461
472
488
4917
47.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.32608695652173914
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners30
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"All that mattered was the"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences61
matches
0"She turned away, plucking a"
1"It wasn’t gentle."
2"It wasn’t soft."
3"It was teeth and heat"
ratio0.066
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences61
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Eva stood there, her dark"
2"Eva’s voice was rough, like"
3"Rory held up the plastic"
4"Eva didn’t move."
5"The scent of turmeric and"
6"Ptolemy wound around Eva’s ankles,"
7"Rory stepped forward, forcing Eva"
8"The doorframe brushed her shoulder"
9"Books teetered on every surface,"
10"A half-empty mug of tea"
11"Eva shut the door, the"
12"The sound was too loud,"
13"Rory set the bag on"
14"Eva’s laugh was sharp, humorless."
15"Rory pulled out the containers,"
16"Eva’s fingers drummed against the"
17"Rory slid a fork across"
18"Eva cut herself off, jaw"
19"She turned away, plucking a"
ratio0.951
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Eva stood there, her dark curls wild as if she’d been running her hands through them all night, her usual sharp gaze softened by something Rory couldn’t place—s…"
1"It was teeth and heat and the taste of old coffee and something darker, something that had been simmering between them for years."
2"Eva gasped against her mouth, her hands flying to Rory’s hips, pulling her closer."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory pulled out, the steam rising in lazy tendrils"
1"Eva cut, jaw tightening"
2"Rory said, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.053
leniency0.105
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.8748%