| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.576 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1064 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1064 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "steeled" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "surreal" | | 5 | "furrowed" | | 6 | "beacon" | | 7 | "gleaming" | | 8 | "tinged" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "down her spine" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "tracing" | | 16 | "intricate" | | 17 | "rhythmic" | | 18 | "echoed" | | 19 | "glinting" | | 20 | "racing" | | 21 | "charged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A shiver ran down her spine" |
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| 62.11% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "e with wonder" | | 1 | "e with awe" | | 2 | "l with panic" | | 3 | "g with determination" |
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| 88.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1060 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.70% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 787 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Shade | 2 | | Nyx | 5 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 7 | | Varga | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | Moreno | 1 | | Silas | 4 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Eva" | | 7 | "Moreno" | | 8 | "Silas" | | 9 | "Blackwood" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.547 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "luminescence that seemed to seep through the very air" | | 1 | "as if reaching out to grasp the unwary traveler" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to shift and dance just beyond her line of sight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.943 | | wordCount | 1060 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.72% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 34.19 | | std | 16.11 | | cv | 0.471 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 70 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 64 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory glanced back to see two more figures emerging from the boundary of the grove — Eva Moreno, her oldest and dearest friend, and Silas Blackwood, the owner of the bar where Rory lived." | | 1 | "As she reached out to touch one, a faint warmth blossomed in her palm, and she felt a distant, rhythmic pulse - like the heartbeat of the world itself." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 401 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "single silver-haired figure" |
| | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.017456359102244388 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0024937655860349127 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 15.36 | | std | 7.16 | | cv | 0.466 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 65.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.43478260869565216 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a bolt of energy" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out" | | 1 | "She spoke in the cryptic" | | 2 | "She leveled her gaze at" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 4 | "Her lavender eyes bored into" | | 5 | "Their voice was a whisper," | | 6 | "She swept her hand across" | | 7 | "She gestured towards a shadowy" | | 8 | "he breathed, his expression a" | | 9 | "she murmured, her eyes hardening" |
| | ratio | 0.189 | |
| 35.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The cool evening breeze rustled" | | 1 | "A flicker of violet caught" | | 2 | "Rory murmured, her gaze sweeping" | | 3 | "Wildflowers of every hue carpeted" | | 4 | "Nyx replied, their voice a" | | 5 | "The Shade gestured towards the" | | 6 | "Rory steeled herself and approached" | | 7 | "she called out" | | 8 | "Isolde's lavender eyes slowly opened," | | 9 | "She spoke in the cryptic" | | 10 | "Rory glanced back to see" | | 11 | "Eva's dark eyes were wide" | | 12 | "Eva breathed, her gaze sweeping" | | 13 | "Isolde replied, rising from her" | | 14 | "She leveled her gaze at" | | 15 | "Rory glanced down at the" | | 16 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 17 | "Isolde inclined her head in" | | 18 | "Her lavender eyes bored into" | | 19 | "Silas shifted uneasily, his hand" |
| | ratio | 0.849 | |
| 94.34% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stood a massive," |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory glanced down at the pulsing warmth of the Heartstone pendant that hung around her neck, a gift from an unknown benefactor." | | 1 | "Silas shifted uneasily, his hand drifting towards the hilt of the Fae-forged blade that hung at his side, a gift from Isolde." | | 2 | "The trees grew thicker, their branches twisting and gnarled, as if reaching out to grasp the unwary traveler." | | 3 | "Rory caught glimpses of flickering movement in the corners of her vision, shadows that seemed to shift and dance just beyond her line of sight." | | 4 | "Suspended from the branches were dozens of glowing orbs, casting a warm, pulsing light that illuminated the space." | | 5 | "Closing her eyes, she allowed herself to become lost in the sensation, her consciousness expanding to encompass the very fabric of the grove." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory murmured, her gaze sweeping across the ethereal landscape" | | 1 | "Nyx replied, their voice a whisper on the wind" | | 2 | "she took, while Silas' brow was furrowed with unease" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 4 | "Eva whispered, her eyes wide with awe" | | 5 | "Nyx murmured, their voice barely audible" | | 6 | "he breathed, his expression a mixture of fascination and unease" | | 7 | "Eva cried, her voice shrill with panic" | | 8 | "she murmured, her eyes hardening with determination" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She spoke (speak)" | | 2 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "he breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "Eva cried (cry)" | | 7 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.727 | | effectiveRatio | 0.485 | |