Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ122JFE9PN9CK5C1F8VYF

Run Details

Duration:
52.9s
Cost:
$0.002806
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped through the shimmering rift, her heart pounding as she left the familiar behind. The air on the other side felt charged, humming against her skin. She glanced back at her companions. Nyx flowed through the portal like liquid shadow, their violet eyes glowing faintly. Isolde followed, her ageless face serene. The landscape stretched before them, a place of wonder and excess. Amber light bathed sprawling vineyards and gardens, the colors richer and more saturated than anything on Earth. Groves of strange, twisted trees bore fruits that glittered like jewels. The air was heavy with the scent of spices and ripe, succulent things. "Welcome to Dymas," Isolde said, her voice a lilting melody. "Realm of Gluttony and Excess." Rory's fingers found the Heartstone pendant at her throat, its pulsing warmth a reminder of her purpose. "This is...not what I expected from Hel." She took a few steps forward, marvelming at a crystalline stream that cut through the orchard. The water sang as it flowed over smooth, multi-colored pebbles. "This is only one face of Hell," Nyx whispered, solidifying beside her. "Do not let the beauty deceive. Every pleasure comes with a price." Isolde smiled, a secretive thing. "Prince Belphegor's domain is generous to those who know its nature. Look." She pointed to a distant cluster of elegant buildings, their spires brushing the amber sky. "His palace. Many travel from Earth for a taste of its delights." "I've seen enough." Rory turned away, a scowl twisting her lips. "This excess...it's obscene. People are struggling and suffering while these fuckers stuff their faces." Nyx tilted their head. "It is the way of things. Balance." "Fuck balance," Rory snapped. Her hand dropped to the moonsilver dagger at her hip, a parting gift from Isolde. "Let's find this portal and get out of here." Isolde gestured to a path winding through the vineyard. "As you wish. The Veil will be thinnest at the heart of the realm." They walked in silence, the only sound the rustle of leaves and the distant calls of strange birds. The vines curled and twisted, plump grapes glistening in the warm light. Exotic flowers lined the path, some glowing faintly, others exhaling intoxicating perfumes. A shiver ran down Rory's spine as the pendant against her skin pulsed. She stopped, frowning. "Wait. Something's not right." The air shimmered, the vines suddenly writhing like serpents. Thorns burst from the tangles, grasping at the group. Rory cried out, slashing with her dagger. Black ichor spattered from the severed vines. They ran. The once inviting beauty of Dymas now warped into a hungry, living thing. The ground bucked and thrashed beneath them, flowers snapping with glassine teeth. Isolde hummed a spell beneath her breath, silver light dancing from her hands. Where it touched, the plants recoiled. "The land recognizes you as a threat. We must hurry, Aurora!" The path twisted, the amber sky churning with unnatural clouds. Wind whipped through the grove, carrying manic laughter and snatches of tortuous screams. Ahead, a luminous tear hung in the air, roiling darkness visible beyond. "The rift," Nyx said, voice urgent. "Through there." Rory gripped her dagger, plunging into the portal with her companions close behind. The darkness swallowed them, the hungry howls of Dymas cutting off as reality twisted. They emerged, stumbling, into a moonlit glade. Massive oaks formed a ring around the clearing, their branches a canopy against the night sky. Ancient stones stood at the cardinal points, age-worn runes etched deep. "The Fae Grove," Isolde breathed. She turned to Rory, her eyes wide. "I did not intend...this place should not be possible to reach from Dymas." Rory sucked in a breath, the air crisp and heavy with old magic. She turned, making sure they were alone. "It was that or be eaten by demon grapevines. I'll take a detour through Fae-land." The sense of being watched lifted gooseflesh on her arms. The shadows pooled at the base of the stones, dense and impenetrable. The pendant's pulse slowed to a sullen throb against her chest. Nyx shifted restlessly. "This place is not meant for Shade. We must not linger." "We won't," Rory assured them. Her gaze lingered on the standing stones. "But we should rest while we can. I don't think we'll have another chance." Isolde nodded, settling gracefully onto the soft grass. "A moment to regroup and plan our next move. The Veil is weakest at the solstice. That gives us some time." Rory sat beside her, Nyx remaining standing in a pool of darkness. The Fae Grove hummed with magic, a living breathing thing that watched and waited. And plotted.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.083
93.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount771
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount771
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"crystalline"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"glistening"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"dancing"
count1
11
word"churning"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"throb"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"familiar"
2"charged"
3"warmth"
4"reminder"
5"crystalline"
6"silence"
7"glistening"
8"pulsed"
9"shimmered"
10"dancing"
11"churning"
12"etched"
13"sense of"
14"pulse"
15"throb"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"The air was heavy with"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords769
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount564
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Earth1
Rory11
Heartstone1
Isolde8
Nyx6
Dymas2
Fae1
Grove1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Dymas"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.525
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount769
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
81.13% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean28.48
std12.36
cv0.434
sampleLengths
052
152
215
350
424
544
625
711
828
923
1042
1120
1232
1327
1430
1535
168
1727
1834
1925
2035
2133
2214
2326
2429
2526
262
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs103
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount565
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.024778761061946902
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010619469026548672
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean10.53
std4.79
cv0.454
sampleLengths
015
112
26
313
46
511
617
711
813
910
105
1117
1223
1310
1412
1512
165
1727
1812
1911
2014
214
227
234
2415
259
269
2714
2818
2912
3012
3113
323
334
349
359
367
377
382
3913
4012
4113
426
4311
4410
4513
4612
476
482
4913
72.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4657534246575342
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences54
matches
0"She glanced back at her"
1"She took a few steps"
2"She pointed to a distant"
3"Her hand dropped to the"
4"They walked in silence, the"
5"She stopped, frowning."
6"They emerged, stumbling, into a"
7"She turned to Rory, her"
8"She turned, making sure they"
9"Her gaze lingered on the"
ratio0.185
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences54
matches
0"Rory stepped through the shimmering"
1"The air on the other"
2"She glanced back at her"
3"Nyx flowed through the portal"
4"Isolde followed, her ageless face"
5"The landscape stretched before them,"
6"Amber light bathed sprawling vineyards"
7"Groves of strange, twisted trees"
8"The air was heavy with"
9"Isolde said, her voice a"
10"Rory's fingers found the Heartstone"
11"She took a few steps"
12"The water sang as it"
13"Nyx whispered, solidifying beside her"
14"Isolde smiled, a secretive thing."
15"She pointed to a distant"
16"Rory turned away, a scowl"
17"Nyx tilted their head."
18"Her hand dropped to the"
19"Isolde gestured to a path"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde said, her voice a lilting melody"
1"She pointed, their spires brushing the amber sky"
2"Rory turned away, a scowl twisting her lips"
3"Nyx said, voice urgent"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory snapped (snap)"
2"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
3"Rory assured (assure)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.333
76.0499%