| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory turned away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 93.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 771 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 771 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "glistening" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "churning" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "throb" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 769 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.48% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 564 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Earth | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Nyx | 6 | | Dymas | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.525 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 769 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.13% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 28.48 | | std | 12.36 | | cv | 0.434 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 565 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 14 | | adverbRatio | 0.024778761061946902 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010619469026548672 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 10.53 | | std | 4.79 | | cv | 0.454 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 72.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4657534246575342 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at her" | | 1 | "She took a few steps" | | 2 | "She pointed to a distant" | | 3 | "Her hand dropped to the" | | 4 | "They walked in silence, the" | | 5 | "She stopped, frowning." | | 6 | "They emerged, stumbling, into a" | | 7 | "She turned to Rory, her" | | 8 | "She turned, making sure they" | | 9 | "Her gaze lingered on the" |
| | ratio | 0.185 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the shimmering" | | 1 | "The air on the other" | | 2 | "She glanced back at her" | | 3 | "Nyx flowed through the portal" | | 4 | "Isolde followed, her ageless face" | | 5 | "The landscape stretched before them," | | 6 | "Amber light bathed sprawling vineyards" | | 7 | "Groves of strange, twisted trees" | | 8 | "The air was heavy with" | | 9 | "Isolde said, her voice a" | | 10 | "Rory's fingers found the Heartstone" | | 11 | "She took a few steps" | | 12 | "The water sang as it" | | 13 | "Nyx whispered, solidifying beside her" | | 14 | "Isolde smiled, a secretive thing." | | 15 | "She pointed to a distant" | | 16 | "Rory turned away, a scowl" | | 17 | "Nyx tilted their head." | | 18 | "Her hand dropped to the" | | 19 | "Isolde gestured to a path" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice a lilting melody" | | 1 | "She pointed, their spires brushing the amber sky" | | 2 | "Rory turned away, a scowl twisting her lips" | | 3 | "Nyx said, voice urgent" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Rory assured (assure)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |