| 84.62% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quickly [quickly]" | | 1 | "Lucien said simply [simply]" | | 2 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.553 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.115 | | effectiveRatio | 0.115 | |
| 73.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "warily" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "sent shivers down" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "sent shivers down" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "racing" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "churned" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 6 | | maxInWindow | 5 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 2 |
| | 4 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "blood ran cold" | | 2 | "stomach churned" | | 3 | "couldn't help but wonder" | | 4 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1125 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 28 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 833 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 2.16 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 17 | | Moreau | 1 | | Frenchman | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Aurora | 18 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Silence" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.42 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 22.22% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.778 | | wordCount | 1125 | | matches | | 0 | "no choice but" | | 1 | "no choice but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 25.57 | | std | 14.73 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 44 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 45 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | | |
| 57.14% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "She swung the door open, and there he stood — Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, the half-demon who had once turned her world upside down." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — bore into hers, searching for something she wasn't ready to give." | | 2 | "Aurora's heart pounded in her chest, a mix of anger and something else — something she didn't want to acknowledge." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 832 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.026442307692307692 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009615384615384616 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 11.25 | | std | 6.75 | | cv | 0.6 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 69.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.42 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 62.11% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She swung the door open," | | 1 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 2 | "she replied, her tone colder" | | 3 | "He stepped inside without waiting" | | 4 | "His heterochromatic eyes — one" | | 5 | "he said, his voice softer" | | 6 | "He took a step closer," | | 7 | "she shot back, her eyes" | | 8 | "She hated the way her" | | 9 | "she asked, her voice hardening" | | 10 | "He opened it to reveal" | | 11 | "he said, holding it out" | | 12 | "Her blood ran cold." | | 13 | "he said quickly" | | 14 | "she asked, her voice trembling" | | 15 | "His words hung in the" | | 16 | "She wanted to push him" | | 17 | "she said, snatching the necklace" | | 18 | "She couldn't afford to let" | | 19 | "she said, her voice firm" |
| | ratio | 0.395 | |
| 45.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's hand froze on the" | | 1 | "The three deadbolts clinked as" | | 2 | "She swung the door open," | | 3 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 4 | "she replied, her tone colder" | | 5 | "He stepped inside without waiting" | | 6 | "The scent of his cologne," | | 7 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed" | | 8 | "Lucien said, turning to face" | | 9 | "His heterochromatic eyes — one" | | 10 | "Aurora scoffed, crossing her arms" | | 11 | "Lucien's gaze flickered to the" | | 12 | "he said, his voice softer" | | 13 | "Aurora's laugh was bitter" | | 14 | "He took a step closer," | | 15 | "she shot back, her eyes" | | 16 | "Silence hung heavy between them," | | 17 | "Aurora's heart pounded in her" | | 18 | "Lucien admitted, his voice barely" | | 19 | "She hated the way her" |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "If she was in danger," | | 1 | "Either way, there was no" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She swung the door open, and there he stood — Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, the half-demon who had once turned her world upside down." | | 1 | "And as they descended the stairs, Aurora couldn't help but wonder if this was the beginning of a new chapter, or the final act in a story that had started long …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "she replied, her tone colder than she intended" | | 1 | "Lucien said, turning to face her" | | 2 | "he said, his voice softer now, almost pleading" | | 3 | "she shot back, her eyes narrowing" | | 4 | "Lucien admitted, his voice barely above a whisper" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice hardening" | | 6 | "Lucien said, his eyes locking onto hers," | | 7 | "she said, her voice firm" | | 8 | "Aurora asked, suspicion lacing her words" | | 9 | "Lucien said, his eyes darkening," | | 10 | "she asked, her voice sharp" | | 11 | "he interrupted, his voice earnest" | | 12 | "he replied, a hint of a smile on his lips" |
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| 86.17% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 23 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien admitted (admit)" | | 1 | "Lucien explained (explain)" | | 2 | "he interrupted (interrupt)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.489 | | leniency | 0.979 | | rawRatio | 0.13 | | effectiveRatio | 0.128 | |