Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ13QY5DFA1G8VSDR3CF7W

Run Details

Duration:
9.5s
Cost:
$0.030165
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stepped cautiously into the hidden grove in Richmond Park. The ancient oak standing stones loomed around her, their gnarled surfaces whispering secrets of ages past. She glanced back at her companions, Nyx and Isolde Varga, before taking a deep breath and moving forward. The air felt different here, charged with a subtle energy that made the hair on her arms stand on end. "Feels like we're stepping into another world," Rory murmured, her bright blue eyes scanning the wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors. Nyx, a living shadow with faintly glowing violet eyes, drifted beside her. "In a way, we are. The Fae Grove exists between realms, a pocket of magic on Earth." Isolde, the ethereal Half-Fae seer, glided ahead, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight. "Time moves differently here. An hour inside can be minutes or days outside. Tread carefully." Rory nodded, her fingers brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habit she had when she felt uneasy. The grove's beauty was undeniable, but there was an underlying sense of danger, like a predator lurking just out of sight. As they ventured deeper, the flora grew more fantastical. Flowers with petals like stained glass shimmered in the dappled light, and vines with leaves of gold and silver twisted around ancient trees. The air was thick with the scent of blooming jasmine and something else, something otherworldly and intoxicating. "Look at this," Rory said, kneeling to examine a cluster of luminescent mushrooms. They pulsed with a soft, inner light, casting an eerie glow on her face. Nyx's voice, a whisper carried on the wind, drifted to her. "Fae mushrooms. They can be both a blessing and a curse. Consume them, and you might gain visions or fall into an eternal sleep." Rory stood, brushing dirt from her jeans. "I'll pass, thanks." Isolde paused by a tree with bark like polished obsidian. "The grove is alive. It senses our presence." Rory felt a shiver run down her spine. "Is that a good thing?" Isolde's pale lavender eyes met hers. "It depends on our intentions." They continued, the path winding through the grove like a serpent. The deeper they went, the more the environment seemed to shift. The sky above, visible through the canopy, changed from a clear blue to a twilight hue, stars beginning to twinkle in the growing darkness. "Time's playing tricks on us," Rory muttered, glancing at her watch. The hands spun erratically, unable to keep pace with the grove's temporal flux. Nyx's form flickered, shifting between solid and incorporeal. "Stay close. The grove can be treacherous." Rory's hand instinctively went to the Heartstone Pendant around her neck. The deep crimson gemstone pulsed faintly with warmth, a comforting presence in the alien landscape. She had received it from an unknown benefactor, and its purpose remained a mystery. "What's that?" Rory pointed to a distant glow, a soft, inviting light that beckoned them forward. Isolde's expression grew serious. "The heart of the grove. It is where the veil between realms is thinnest." They moved towards the light, the air growing cooler with each step. The ground beneath their feet felt softer, almost spongy, as if they were walking on a living carpet. The sounds of the grove changed too, the rustling leaves and distant bird calls replaced by a low, melodic hum. Rory's breath caught as they entered a clearing. At the center stood a massive tree, its trunk wider than a house, its branches reaching up to the heavens. The tree's bark glowed with a soft, golden light, and its leaves shimmered like emeralds. "This is... incredible," Rory whispered, awe in her voice. Nyx's violet eyes glowed brighter. "The Heart Tree. It is the source of the grove's magic." Isolde approached the tree, her movements reverent. "It is said that the Heart Tree was planted by the first Fae to walk the Earth. Its roots reach into the very fabric of the realms." Rory felt a pull towards the tree, an almost magnetic attraction. She stepped closer, her hand reaching out to touch the glowing bark. The moment her fingers made contact, a surge of energy coursed through her, filling her with warmth and light. "Rory!" Nyx's voice was sharp, filled with concern. Rory pulled her hand back, her heart racing. "I'm okay. It just... it felt like it was alive." Isolde nodded. "The Heart Tree is alive. It is the heart of the grove, the anchor that keeps this place connected to both Earth and the Fae realm." Rory took a step back, her mind racing with questions. "Why did you bring us here, Isolde?" The seer turned, her pale lavender eyes filled with a mix of sorrow and determination. "The Veil is weakening. The solstice approaches, and with it, the barriers between realms will be at their thinnest. We must prepare." Nyx's form solidified, their expression unreadable. "What do you need us to do?" Isolde's gaze shifted to Rory. "You have the Heartstone Pendant. It is a key, a link to the realm of Hel. We must use it to strengthen the Veil, to prevent the rift points from tearing open." Rory's hand went to the pendant, feeling its warmth against her skin. "How do we do that?" Isolde's voice was soft, almost a whisper. "We must perform a ritual, one that requires the essence of both realms. The Heart Tree will provide the Fae essence, and the Heartstone will provide the essence of Hel." Rory's mind raced, the weight of the task settling on her shoulders. "And if we fail?" Isolde's expression grew grim. "If we fail, the Veil will tear, and the realms will collide. Chaos will reign." Rory took a deep breath, her resolve hardening. "Then we won't fail. Let's do this." Nyx stepped forward, their presence a comforting shadow. "We are with you, Rory." Isolde nodded, her silver hair shimmering in the light of the Heart Tree. "Then let us begin." As they prepared for the ritual, Rory couldn't shake the feeling of unease that lingered in the back of her mind. The grove was beautiful, but it was also a place of great power and danger. They were treading on sacred ground, and the stakes had never been higher. But with her friends by her side, Rory felt a glimmer of hope. They would face whatever challenges lay ahead, and they would do it together. The fate of the realms depended on it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1085
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"carefully"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1085
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"sense of"
count1
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count2
6
word"otherworldly"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"down her spine"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"treacherous"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count3
13
word"comforting"
count2
14
word"magnetic"
count1
15
word"racing"
count2
16
word"unreadable"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
19
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"charged"
2"scanning"
3"sense of"
4"predator"
5"shimmered"
6"otherworldly"
7"pulsed"
8"whisper"
9"down her spine"
10"flickered"
11"treacherous"
12"warmth"
13"comforting"
14"magnetic"
15"racing"
16"unreadable"
17"raced"
18"weight"
19"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"a glimmer of hope"
57.80% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences62
matches
0"felt uneasy"
1"felt a shiver"
2"y with warmth"
3"r with warmth"
4"the feeling of unease"
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1083
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount752
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory20
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx8
Isolde11
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Heart1
Tree1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Heart"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
3"Tree"
globalScore0.17
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1083
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean27.08
std14.37
cv0.531
sampleLengths
071
121
229
329
442
549
627
735
810
918
1013
1111
1246
1324
1415
1540
1616
1718
1850
1943
209
2116
2234
2342
248
2518
2628
2717
2837
2913
3037
3117
3237
3316
3419
3515
3613
3717
3849
3934
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
90.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs122
matches
0"were walking"
1"were treading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences86
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount754
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.029177718832891247
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007957559681697613
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.59
std6.47
cv0.514
sampleLengths
017
116
218
320
421
512
617
714
815
921
1021
119
1223
1317
1413
1514
1611
1724
187
193
2010
218
228
235
246
255
2611
2711
2824
2911
3013
318
327
3311
3415
3514
3616
374
3814
3912
4018
4120
428
4320
4415
459
465
4711
487
4927
51.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3372093023255814
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences61
matches
0"She glanced back at her"
1"They pulsed with a soft,"
2"They continued, the path winding"
3"She had received it from"
4"They moved towards the light,"
5"She stepped closer, her hand"
6"They were treading on sacred"
7"They would face whatever challenges"
ratio0.131
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences61
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She glanced back at her"
3"The air felt different here,"
4"Rory murmured, her bright blue"
5"Nyx, a living shadow with"
6"Isolde, the ethereal Half-Fae seer,"
7"Rory nodded, her fingers brushing"
8"The grove's beauty was undeniable,"
9"Flowers with petals like stained"
10"The air was thick with"
11"Rory said, kneeling to examine"
12"They pulsed with a soft,"
13"Nyx's voice, a whisper carried"
14"Rory stood, brushing dirt from"
15"Isolde paused by a tree"
16"Rory felt a shiver run"
17"Isolde's pale lavender eyes met"
18"They continued, the path winding"
19"The deeper they went, the"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The ground beneath their feet felt softer, almost spongy, as if they were walking on a living carpet."
1"As they prepared for the ritual, Rory couldn't shake the feeling of unease that lingered in the back of her mind."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, kneeling to examine a cluster of luminescent mushrooms"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.2
75.6224%