Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ14C47534DNXEF3MSK16J

Run Details

Duration:
2m 28s
Cost:
$0.002026
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station was cold and thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—ozone, maybe, or rust. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the cracked tile steps, her footsteps echoing against the curved walls. The emergency lights strung along the tunnel flickered, casting long, jumping shadows. The scene was cordoned off at platform level with police tape. Uniformed officers stood at attention. A forensics team in white suits moved through the space like ghosts, their headlamps slicing the gloom. A figure separated from the cluster of white suits and approached. Detective Sergeant Greaves, a man with a perpetually concerned expression and a bad knee that made him list to one side. “Quinn. Glad you’re here. It’s a strange one.” “They’re all strange down here, Greaves.” Quinn’s voice was flat. She scanned the platform. It was the Camden branch, closed since the seventies. Graffiti covered the vintage advertising tiles—faded exhortations to drink Bovril faded between modern tags. The Veil Market used this place. She’d tracked rumors of it for months. Entry required a bone token. She didn’t have one, but a murder gave her a warrant. “Victim’s over here.” Greaves led her past a forensics photographer documenting a spill of dark liquid on the tiles. Not blood. Too black, with a faint iridescent sheen under the lights. The body lay near the tunnel mouth, half in shadow. Male, late thirties, dressed in expensive but practical dark wool. No visible wounds. His face was slack, eyes open and staring at the curved ceiling. The expression wasn’t fear or pain. It was blank. Empty. “John Doe for now,” Greaves said. “No wallet, no phone. Prints aren’t in the system. Cause of death isn’t obvious. No blunt force, no stabbing, no ligature marks. Petechiae suggest asphyxiation, but there’s no bruising on the neck.” Quinn crouched, her knees protesting. She didn’t touch the body. Her eyes traced the lines of his clothing. The wool coat was unbuttoned. Beneath it, a dark sweater. His left hand was curled loosely. Something glinted between his fingers. “Bag that,” she said to a forensic tech nearby, pointing. The tech nodded, moved in with tweezers and a evidence pouch. Quinn stood, her gaze lifting to the tunnel beyond. The darkness there felt thick, resistant to the portable lights. “Who found him?” “Anonymous tip called into the station. Male voice, no caller ID. Said there was a body at the old Camden station, platform level. That was three hours ago.” “No witnesses down here? No marketeers?” Greaves shifted his weight off his bad leg. “Place was empty when uniforms arrived. Looks like it was cleared out in a hurry. Left some stuff behind.” He gestured to a stall further down the platform—a collapsed wooden framework, a scatter of strange items: brass scales, bundles of dried herbs, small vials containing liquids that seemed to move on their own. Quinn walked over. The items were evidence of the Market, but they felt staged. Too obvious. A deliberate scatter to explain the location. “What’s your read?” she asked. Greaves joined her, rubbing his chin. “Robbery gone wrong? The Market deals in shady goods. Maybe the victim was a buyer or seller, things turned violent. Killer took his identification, cleared out.” “Violent how? No wounds.” “Poison? Something quick-acting. We’ll know after the post-mortem.” Quinn moved back to the body. The forensic tech had bagged the item from the victim’s hand—a small brass compass. Through the clear plastic, Quinn could see the casing was tarnished with verdigris. The face was etched with intricate, spiraling sigils. The needle wasn’t pointing north. It was pointing straight into the dark tunnel. “That’s odd,” Greaves said, peering at it. “Compass is broken.” Quinn didn’t answer. She knew what it was. A Veil Compass. She’d read descriptions in the files she’d compiled after Morris’s death. It pointed to supernatural rifts. She looked from the compass to the tunnel. The needle was steady. “I want lights down that tunnel,” she said. “Quinn, it’s a crime scene here. The tunnel’s not relevant.” “It is if the killer went that way.” “There’s no evidence of that. No footprints, no disturbance past the platform edge. Forensics swept the first twenty meters. Nothing.” Quinn stared into the darkness. The air coming from the tunnel was colder than the platform air. It carried a faint, metallic hum, a vibration she felt in her teeth more than heard. She walked to the platform edge. The tracks were gone, ripped up long ago. The tunnel floor was a mess of debris—brick fragments, old newspapers, pooled water. She switched on her torch, sweeping the beam. No footprints. But near the wall, about five meters in, something reflected the light. A patch of the brickwork glistened, wet. Not water. It had the same iridescent sheen as the spill near the body. “There,” she said. Greaves limped over, squinting. “Oil? Some chemical?” “Same substance as by the body. He wasn’t killed on the platform. He was moved.” Greaves frowned. “Why move a body? And from where? That tunnel leads to a dead end—the line was sealed when they closed the station.” Quinn’s mind worked, pieces clicking. The anonymous tip. The cleared-out Market. The staged scatter of items. The body with no wounds, holding a compass that pointed into the tunnel. The spill of unknown substance here and there. “The tip came after the Market cleared out,” she said quietly. “After the body was placed. This isn’t a robbery scene. It’s a message. A taunt.” “A taunt from who?” “Someone who knows we’re looking for the Market. Someone who wanted us to find this.” She looked at the compass in the evidence bag. “And this.” The hum from the tunnel seemed to intensify. A draft of cold air sighed out, lifting the hairs on Quinn’s arms. Her worn leather watch felt tight on her wrist. “Greaves, I need a team to search that tunnel thoroughly. And I want spectral analysis on that fluid. Now.” “Quinn, this is a straightfor—” “It’s not.” Her voice cut through his protest, sharp with military precision. “Look at his eyes.” She pointed her torch beam at the victim’s face. Up close, the emptiness wasn’t just an expression. The irises were washed out, a pale, milky grey. Normal eyes didn’t look like that post-mortem, not this soon. “His soul’s gone,” she heard herself say, the words leaving her lips before she could filter them. Greaves stared at her. “What?” She didn’t elaborate. She couldn’t. Not without mentioning Morris, the way his body had been found with that same hollowed-out look. The official report called it a sudden catastrophic stroke. Quinn knew it was something else. Something that left the shell intact but scraped the person out. The compass needle quivered, then swung a few degrees to the left, pointing at a section of tunnel wall that looked no different from the rest. “There’s a rift,” Quinn muttered. “Close. Maybe it’s still open.” “A rift? Quinn, you’re not making sense.” She ignored him, stepping off the platform onto the tunnel floor. The debris crunched under her boots. She walked toward the glistening patch, her torch beam fixed on the wall the compass indicated. The bricks were old, mortar crumbling. But one section, about waist-high, looked wrong. The pattern was slightly off, the bricks set a fraction too neatly. A door. A concealed entrance. She pressed her gloved hand against the cold brick. A vibration thrummed through the material. The metallic hum was loudest here. “This isn’t a dead end,” she said, turning back to Greaves. His face was a mask of confusion and concern. “They moved the body from in there. Through a hidden door. The spill happened during transport. The victim died in there, wherever *there* is.” “You’re talking about a secret room? In a Tube tunnel?” “Not a room.” Quinn looked at the compass needle, unwavering. “A gateway.” The implications settled over her like a weight. The Market wasn’t just a black market. It was a front. A waypoint. This victim hadn’t been killed in a deal gone bad. He’d been killed by something that came through from the other side. And someone—the tipster—wanted the police to find the body, to find the compass, to maybe even find the door. Why? To expose the Market? To lure someone in? To lure *her* in? She thought of Morris again. His case was buried, classified. But someone knew. Someone who understood that she was looking, that she’d been piecing together the supernatural truths behind the city’s unexplained crimes. The cold air from the tunnel seemed to wrap around her. She took a step back from the wall. “Seal this area,” she ordered, her voice leaving no room for argument. “Full forensic quarantine. No one touches that wall. I want a patrol posted here 24/7 until we get a structural engineer and a… a specialist team down here.” “What kind of specialist team?” “I’ll make the calls.” She turned, walking back to the platform. Her mind was already racing ahead, through the chain of command, through the contacts she’d cultivated over the past three years. People who wouldn’t laugh at terms like “rift” or “soul theft.” She paused by the body, looking down at the empty face. “And get me everything you have on recent missing persons,” she said to Greaves. “Anyone reported vanished under unusual circumstances. Especially anyone with known connections to occult groups or fringe research.” “You think he’s one of them?” “I think he was in the wrong place at the wrong time.” She glanced once more at the dark tunnel, at the hidden door she couldn’t yet see. “Or he knew something he shouldn’t.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"She glanced once [once]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.679
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.075
93.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1625
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1625
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"framework"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"spectral"
count1
11
word"quivered"
count1
12
word"glistening"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"flickered"
3"gloom"
4"scanned"
5"traced"
6"weight"
7"framework"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"spectral"
11"quivered"
12"glistening"
13"unwavering"
14"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1611
ratio0.001
matches
0"there"
1"her"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1138
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Sergeant1
Greaves11
Camden1
Bovril1
Veil2
Market5
Compass1
Morris3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Greaves"
4"Bovril"
5"Market"
6"Morris"
places
0"Compass"
globalScore0.885
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"liquids that seemed to move on their own"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1611
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences172
matches
0"understood that she looking, that she’d"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean24.41
std16.25
cv0.666
sampleLengths
050
133
240
366
431
545
638
739
821
922
1028
116
1261
1323
145
1532
164
178
1854
1910
2027
2112
228
2310
248
2520
2633
2735
282
2933
303
317
3215
3324
3437
3526
364
3726
3830
3919
405
4116
4236
4317
445
4547
4626
4710
487
4933
80.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount10
totalSentences140
matches
0"was cordoned"
1"was unbuttoned"
2"was curled"
3"was etched"
4"were gone"
5"were washed"
6"been found"
7"been killed"
8"been killed"
9"was buried"
97.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs196
matches
0"wasn’t pointing"
1"was pointing"
2"was looking"
43.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences172
ratio0.035
matches
0"The air in the abandoned Tube station was cold and thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—ozone, maybe, or rust."
1"Graffiti covered the vintage advertising tiles—faded exhortations to drink Bovril faded between modern tags."
2"“Place was empty when uniforms arrived. Looks like it was cleared out in a hurry. Left some stuff behind.” He gestured to a stall further down the platform—a collapsed wooden framework, a scatter of strange items: brass scales, bundles of dried herbs, small vials containing liquids that seemed to move on their own."
3"The forensic tech had bagged the item from the victim’s hand—a small brass compass."
4"The tunnel floor was a mess of debris—brick fragments, old newspapers, pooled water."
5"And someone—the tipster—wanted the police to find the body, to find the compass, to maybe even find the door."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1149
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.022628372497824196
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004351610095735422
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean9.37
std7.01
cv0.748
sampleLengths
023
115
212
311
45
517
611
721
88
910
104
119
1214
136
147
155
1611
1719
182
1910
2010
2110
223
2312
246
253
261
276
2832
295
305
318
325
335
346
355
3610
3711
389
3910
403
4128
426
438
4453
453
4611
472
487
495
45.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.31976744186046513
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners55
26.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"Too black, with a faint"
ratio0.008
82.40% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences125
matches
0"She scanned the platform."
1"It was the Camden branch,"
2"She’d tracked rumors of it"
3"She didn’t have one, but"
4"His face was slack, eyes"
5"It was blank."
6"She didn’t touch the body."
7"Her eyes traced the lines"
8"His left hand was curled"
9"she said to a forensic"
10"He gestured to a stall"
11"It was pointing straight into"
12"She knew what it was."
13"She’d read descriptions in the"
14"It pointed to supernatural rifts."
15"She looked from the compass"
16"It carried a faint, metallic"
17"She walked to the platform"
18"She switched on her torch,"
19"It had the same iridescent"
ratio0.344
24.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences125
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"The emergency lights strung along"
3"The scene was cordoned off"
4"A forensics team in white"
5"A figure separated from the"
6"Detective Sergeant Greaves, a man"
7"Quinn’s voice was flat"
8"She scanned the platform."
9"It was the Camden branch,"
10"Graffiti covered the vintage advertising"
11"The Veil Market used this"
12"She’d tracked rumors of it"
13"Entry required a bone token."
14"She didn’t have one, but"
15"Greaves led her past a"
16"The body lay near the"
17"His face was slack, eyes"
18"The expression wasn’t fear or"
19"It was blank."
ratio0.872
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences125
matches
0"To expose the Market?"
1"To lure someone in?"
2"To lure *her* in?"
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Detective Sergeant Greaves, a man with a perpetually concerned expression and a bad knee that made him list to one side."
1"Someone who understood that she was looking, that she’d been piecing together the supernatural truths behind the city’s unexplained crimes."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she heard, the words leaving her lips before she could filter them"
1"she ordered, her voice leaving no room for argument"
93.40% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she heard (hear)"
1"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
2"she ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.226
leniency0.453
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.113
85.7898%