Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ198XBR2GFV8Z31N588ZY

Run Details

Duration:
23.1s
Cost:
$0.009034

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt scraped back with a sound like a knife being drawn. Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the door, her knuckles pressing white against the wood. The scent of turmeric and frying oil curled up from the curry house below, thick in the warm evening air. Lucien stood in the hallway, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, the other adjusting the cuff of his charcoal suit. His amber eye caught the light from the bare bulb overhead, sharp as a blade. The black one swallowed the glow whole. "You’re not Eva," he said. Rory’s jaw set. "She’s out. What do you want?" A pause. The weight of the question hung between them, heavier than it should have been. Lucien exhaled through his nose, a sound that might have been a laugh if it hadn’t been so hollow. "I need to talk to you." "About?" "Things that aren’t best discussed in a hallway where half of Brick Lane can hear." Ptolemy wound between her ankles, tail flicking. She nudged him back with her foot. "I don’t owe you my time." "No," Lucien agreed. "But you might owe yourself the answers." The words settled into her ribs like a hook. She stepped back, letting the door swing wider. "Five minutes. Then you leave." He moved past her, the faintest brush of wool against her arm, the scent of bergamot and something darker, something that clung to him like smoke. The flat was a mess of papers and half-empty mugs, the air thick with the ghost of old tea and the musk of Ptolemy’s fur. Lucien didn’t sit. He never did. He stood by the window, one hand still on his cane, the other tapping against his thigh in a rhythm that wasn’t quite steady. Rory crossed her arms. "Clock’s ticking." His mouth twitched. "Always so impatient." "Always so cryptic." A beat. The amber eye flicked toward her, the black one following a second later. "I heard about Evan." Her stomach dropped. "From who?" "Does it matter?" "It does if you’re trading in gossip." Lucien’s fingers stilled. "I’m not. But I know what it’s like to have someone’s hands on you when you don’t want them there." His voice was quiet, the French accent sharpening the edges of the words. "I know what it’s like to carry that." Rory’s breath hitched. She turned away, busying herself with straightening a stack of books that didn’t need straightening. "I don’t need your pity." "I’m not offering it." He stepped closer, the floorboards creaking under his weight. "I’m offering you a way to make sure he never touches you—or anyone else—again." She whirled around. "What, like some kind of demonic hitman service? No thanks." Lucien’s laugh was low, humorless. "Not a hit. Something cleaner. Something that leaves no trace." He reached into his jacket, pulled out a small vial of dark liquid. "A drop in his drink. A touch to his skin. He’ll forget you exist. Forget he ever wanted to hurt you." Rory stared at the vial. It sloshed gently, thick as oil. "And what’s the catch?" "Nothing you haven’t already paid." His voice was soft now, almost gentle. "I’m not asking for your soul, Rory. Just the truth." The air between them was too thick, too charged. She swallowed. "What truth?" "That you want him gone." His fingers brushed against hers as he held out the vial. "That you’re tired of looking over your shoulder. That you’re angry." Her hand closed around the glass before she could stop herself. The liquid inside was cold, unnaturally so. "And what do you get out of this?" Lucien’s smile didn’t reach his eyes. "The satisfaction of knowing I was right about you." Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. She should have thrown the vial back at him. Should have told him to leave. But the weight of it in her palm was a promise, a dark little secret she could keep. "And if I say no?" "Then I walk out that door, and you never see me again." He turned toward the hallway, his cane tapping against the floor. "But you’ll still wonder, won’t you? What if. What if." She didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. Lucien paused at the threshold, his back to her. "You know where to find me if you change your mind." The door clicked shut behind him. Rory stood there, the vial burning against her skin. Ptolemy jumped onto the table, knocking over a stack of papers. She didn’t move to pick them up. Outside, the sounds of Brick Lane carried on—laughter, the clatter of dishes, the hum of life moving forward. But in the flat, the air was still, thick with the weight of choices not yet made. She uncorked the vial. The scent of it curled into her nose, sharp and metallic. A single drop fell onto her wrist, sizzling against her skin like acid. Rory hissed, jerking her hand back. The liquid vanished, leaving no mark. But the memory of it lingered, a ghost of what could have been. She corked the vial and slipped it into her pocket. The clock on the wall ticked. Somewhere, a door slammed. Rory exhaled, long and slow. Then she grabbed her jacket.
total_cost0.009034

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount880
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount880
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"stomach"
3"charged"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords876
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount618
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Ptolemy3
French1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien8
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.772
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount876
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean20.86
std16.64
cv0.798
sampleLengths
048
146
25
39
441
51
615
720
810
922
1081
116
126
133
1419
155
163
177
1844
1923
2027
2113
2249
2315
2422
2513
2627
2726
2815
2944
3033
317
3220
336
3427
3535
3628
3725
3810
3910
405
415
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"being drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs97
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences96
ratio0.01
matches
0"Outside, the sounds of Brick Lane carried on—laughter, the clatter of dishes, the hum of life moving forward."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount620
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02903225806451613
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0032258064516129032
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean9.13
std6.57
cv0.72
sampleLengths
012
116
220
324
415
57
65
73
86
92
1014
1119
126
131
1415
157
167
176
183
197
209
218
225
2326
2425
253
263
2724
284
292
303
313
323
332
3413
354
363
372
383
397
403
4133
428
433
4415
455
4613
4714
483
4910
44.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"Somewhere, a door slammed."
1"Then she grabbed her jacket."
ratio0.032
67.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences63
matches
0"His amber eye caught the"
1"She nudged him back with"
2"She stepped back, letting the"
3"He moved past her, the"
4"He never did."
5"He stood by the window,"
6"His mouth twitched."
7"Her stomach dropped."
8"His voice was quiet, the"
9"She turned away, busying herself"
10"He stepped closer, the floorboards"
11"She whirled around."
12"He reached into his jacket,"
13"It sloshed gently, thick as"
14"His voice was soft now,"
15"His fingers brushed against hers"
16"Her hand closed around the"
17"She should have thrown the"
18"He turned toward the hallway,"
19"She didn’t answer."
ratio0.381
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences63
matches
0"The deadbolt scraped back with"
1"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
2"The scent of turmeric and"
3"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"The black one swallowed the"
6"Rory’s jaw set."
7"The weight of the question"
8"Lucien exhaled through his nose,"
9"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
10"She nudged him back with"
11"The words settled into her"
12"She stepped back, letting the"
13"He moved past her, the"
14"The flat was a mess"
15"Lucien didn’t sit."
16"He never did."
17"He stood by the window,"
18"Rory crossed her arms."
19"His mouth twitched."
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He moved past her, the faintest brush of wool against her arm, the scent of bergamot and something darker, something that clung to him like smoke."
1"He stood by the window, one hand still on his cane, the other tapping against his thigh in a rhythm that wasn’t quite steady."
2"She turned away, busying herself with straightening a stack of books that didn’t need straightening."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He stepped, the floorboards creaking under his weight"
1"He turned, his cane tapping against the floor"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.056
83.1610%