| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.477 | | leniency | 0.955 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1212 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1212 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "tinged" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "remarkable" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "almost alive" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "otherworldly" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "newfound" | | 14 | "etched" | | 15 | "symphony" | | 16 | "tapestry" | | 17 | "gleaming" | | 18 | "furrowed" | | 19 | "chill" | | 20 | "down her spine" | | 21 | "whisper" | | 22 | "beacon" | | 23 | "furrowing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 50.37% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 6 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "d with unease" | | 1 | "y with warmth" | | 2 | "d with determination" | | 3 | "felt a chill" | | 4 | "g with warmth" | | 5 | "g with confusion" |
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| 36.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1213 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 793 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Isolde | 15 | | Nyx | 9 | | Aurora | 2 | | Rory | 17 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Together | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.428 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "vines that seemed to glow from within" | | 2 | "appeared almost alive their branches reaching out as if to grasp at the sunlight" | | 3 | "as if breathing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1213 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.68% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 36.76 | | std | 12.55 | | cv | 0.341 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 34 |
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| 94.79% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "were tinged" | | 1 | "were suspended" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.37% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora paused, her gaze drawn to the shimmering distortion that rippled across the boundary — the Veil, as Isolde had called it." | | 1 | "Bursts of color dotted the landscape — vibrant wildflowers, lush ferns, and trailing vines that seemed to glow from within." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 792 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.026515151515151516 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013888888888888888 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 13.48 | | std | 5.77 | | cv | 0.428 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 70.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.43333333333333335 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, with a sudden rush," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She extended a slender hand," | | 1 | "They turned to Aurora" | | 2 | "Her gaze hardened with determination" | | 3 | "She gestured to the standing" | | 4 | "she asked, turning to Isolde" | | 5 | "they murmured, their voice carrying" | | 6 | "she said, her gaze lifting" | | 7 | "She gestured to the water" | | 8 | "she said, her voice lilting" | | 9 | "They turned to Isolde, their" | | 10 | "She gestured to the trees," | | 11 | "She turned to Rory, her" | | 12 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 13 | "she murmured, her brow furrowing" |
| | ratio | 0.212 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora paused, her gaze drawn" | | 2 | "Rory breathed, turning to the" | | 3 | "Nyx hovered at her side," | | 4 | "Nyx's whispered words were tinged" | | 5 | "Isolde's pale lavender eyes met" | | 6 | "She extended a slender hand," | | 7 | "Nyx's form coalesced into a" | | 8 | "They turned to Aurora" | | 9 | "Rory's fingers closed around the" | | 10 | "Her gaze hardened with determination" | | 11 | "Rory's breath caught in her" | | 12 | "Shafts of golden light filtered" | | 13 | "Nyx murmured, their form solidifying" | | 14 | "Isolde smiled serenely, her footsteps" | | 15 | "She gestured to the standing" | | 16 | "Rory's gaze swept across the" | | 17 | "The air felt charged, humming" | | 18 | "she asked, turning to Isolde" | | 19 | "Isolde replied, She began to" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "For a heartbeat, Rory felt as if she were suspended in a void, the world around them distorted and dreamlike." | | 1 | "Vibrant wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals swaying gently in a breeze that carried the sweet scent of blooming flora." | | 2 | "Bursts of color dotted the landscape — vibrant wildflowers, lush ferns, and trailing vines that seemed to glow from within." | | 3 | "Nyx drifted at her side, their form casting flickering shadows that danced across the ground." | | 4 | "The trees seemed to pulse with life, their branches swaying as if breathing." | | 5 | "The wildflowers seemed to pulse with an inner light, their petals shimmering as if infused with magic." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their form solidifying as they moved forward" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice carrying a note of wonder" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured, their voice echoing with a strange, otherworldly resonance" | | 3 | "she said, her voice lilting with a melodic quality" | | 4 | "Rory breathed, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone pendant" | | 5 | "They turned, their violet eyes gleaming with curiosity" | | 6 | "She gestured, their branches swaying overhead" | | 7 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 8 | "she murmured, her brow furrowing with confusion" |
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| 13.64% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.273 | |