Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ1CE918FYMWBRFD4BNYA4

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Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.002215
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber sky stretched above them like a dome of melted honey, cloudless and warm. Rory stepped through the shimmering portal and felt a sudden, dizzying shift in the air—thicker, sweet with the scent of ripe fruit and baked earth. Beside her, Nyx solidified from their shadow form, their violet eyes scanning the horizon. “Welcome,” they whispered, the sound like rustling leaves, “to Dymas.” Before them lay a landscape of impossible abundance. Rolling hills folded into valleys choked with vineyards, the grapes hanging heavy and luminous, each one glowing from within like tiny lanterns. Orchards sprawled in perfect rows, trees bent under the weight of fruit Rory didn’t recognize—some spiked, some smooth and opalescent, others pulsing with soft light. In the distance, grand pavilions rose above the fields, their silken banners fluttering in a breeze that carried the murmur of distant celebration. Rory took another step. The grass beneath her boots was velvet-soft, too perfect. She knelt and ran her fingers through it. “It’s like carpet.” “Everything here is cultivated for pleasure,” Nyx said. “For indulgence.” A low hum filled the air, a vibration Rory felt in her teeth. She straightened, her hand going to the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It pulsed warmly against her skin, a steady heartbeat of crimson light. “It’s reacting.” Nyx nodded. “The Veil is thin here. This realm brushes against yours in places.” They moved forward, following a stone path laid with mosaic tiles depicting scenes of feasting—figures laughing, goblets raised, mountains of food. The tiles were warm underfoot, as though heated from below. As they walked, Rory noticed shapes moving among the orchards. At first she thought they were workers, but as one drew nearer she caught the hollow look in its eyes, the mechanical precision of its movements. “Helbound,” Nyx murmured. The soul—for that’s what it was, Rory realized with a chillwas harvesting the glowing fruit with careful, practiced motions. It wore simple robes, its face gaunt but peaceful, vacant. It didn’t glance at them as they passed. Further on, they came across a sprawling kitchen complex built into the side of a hill. Open archways revealed fires burning without smoke, cauldrons bubbling with iridescent soups, and chefs moving with frenetic grace. The air here was thick with smells—caramelized sugar, searing meat, spices Rory could name and others she couldn’t. Her stomach growled despite herself. One of the chefs, a tall figure with coppery skin and eyes like molten gold, looked up from a simmering pot. He wiped his hands on a pristine apron and approached. His smile was broad, welcoming, but his gaze lingered on Nyx with a flicker of recognition. “Travelers! Welcome, welcome. You’ve come during the Grand Tasting.” His voice was rich, smooth as warmed honey. “The Prince’s competition begins at sundown. Are you here to compete? Or to savor?” Nyx shifted, their form wavering at the edges. “We are merely passing through.” “Ah, a pity. The Prince does so love new blood in the kitchens.” The chef’s eyes slid to Rory. “You have the look of one who appreciates fine things.” Rory kept her expression neutral. “We’re looking for someone.” “Many come to Dymas looking. Few find what they seek, but all find something to their taste.” He gestured toward a long table set under a canopy of flowering vines. Platters piled high with delicacies steamed in the amber light—bread that glistened with crystallized honey, roasted meats glazed in dark sauces, fruits cut into intricate shapes. “Refresh yourselves. The journey between realms is taxing.” Nyx placed a shadowy hand on Rory’s arm. “We should not linger.” But Rory’s eyes caught on a figure at the far end of the table, a woman with silver hair reaching her waist. She was sampling a sliver of pale cake, her movements graceful, deliberate. She wore simple robes, but her ears came to delicate points, and her lavender eyes seemed to glow with their own light. Isolde. Rory started forward, but Nyx’s grip tightened. “Wait.” The chef followed their gaze. “Ah, the Seer. Yes, she arrived yesterday. Quite the palate, that one. She’s been judging the preliminary rounds.” He leaned closer, lowering his voice. “They say she can taste the truth in a dish. Or the lies.” Isolde set down her fork and turned. Her eyes met Rory’s across the distance, and a small smile touched her lips. She raised a hand, a faint gesture, and then she was moving away, slipping between two chefs carrying a massive roast pig on a spit. “Go,” Nyx said. “I will distract.” They flowed away from Rory, their form dissolving into a pool of shadow that slid across the mosaic tiles toward the chef. The chef’s eyes widened with fascination as Nyx rose before him, taking shape once more, whispering something Rory couldn’t hear. She didn’t wait. She ducked under a low-hanging vine heavy with purple blossoms and followed the path Isolde had taken. It led away from the kitchens, down a sloping hill into a garden of night-blooming flowers. Here, the light from the amber sky deepened into gold, and the air grew cooler, scented with jasmine and something sharper, like anise. The garden was a labyrinth of tall hedges, their leaves dark and waxy. Rory moved quickly, her boots silent on the mossy path. She rounded a corner and nearly collided with Isolde, who stood waiting beside a marble fountain shaped like a gaping mouth, water pouring from its lips into a basin of liquid that shimmered like mercury. “You found me,” Isolde said. Her voice was melodic, but there was an edge to it. “Or the path found you.” “You left the Grove,” Rory said. “The Grove is where I dwell. Not where I am bound.” Isolde’s lavender eyes studied her. “You wear the Heartstone. And you travel with a Shade. Dangerous company.” “Nyx is helping me.” “Isolde smiled, a faint, knowing curve of her lips. “Shades help themselves. But that is a truth you must taste for yourself.” She turned to the fountain, trailing her fingers through the shimmering water. It clung to her skin like quicksilver before dripping away. “You seek the warlock.” “You know I do.” “I have seen him,” Isolde said. “He walks these fields, sampling the excess. He thinks himself hidden, but his hunger leaves a trail. Like rot in sweet fruit.” Rory’s pulse quickened. “Where?” “The Prince’s pavilion. At the heart of the feast.” Isolde’s gaze shifted past Rory, toward the distant sounds of music and laughter. “He will be there tonight, competing. He believes a victory here will grant him power enough to tear the Veil wider.” The cold weight of the Fae-forged dagger pressed against Rory’s thigh where she’d hidden it beneath her clothes. “Why are you telling me this?” “Because the balance must be kept,” Isolde said softly. “And because I, too, have tasted his ambition. It is bitter. It spoils everything it touches.” She reached into the folds of her robe and withdrew a small, crystalline vial filled with clear liquid. “A gift. For when you face him. One drop will reveal what is hidden.” Rory took the vial. It was cold, colder than ice, and the liquid inside moved sluggishly. “What is it?” “Truth,” Isolde said. “Distilled from a Fae spring where no lies can be spoken.” She stepped back, her form blurring at the edges. “Go now. Your Shade cannot distract forever. And remember—in Dymas, nothing is as it seems. Even the food can bind you, if you consume it willingly.” With that, she melted into the shadows of the hedge, leaving no footprints on the moss. Rory stood alone by the fountain, the vial clenched in her hand. From beyond the garden walls, the sounds of the feast swelled—music, laughter, the clatter of plates. The amber sky began to darken toward twilight, streaks of orange and crimson bleeding across the honeyed dome. She slipped the vial into her pocket and turned back the way she’d come, the Heartstone pulsing against her chest like a warning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.488
leniency0.977
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.047
88.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"warmly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"warmly"
1"quickly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count2
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"mosaic"
count2
6
word"mechanical"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"simmering"
count1
12
word"pristine"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"wavering"
count1
15
word"crystallized"
count1
16
word"intricate"
count1
17
word"marble"
count1
18
word"shimmered"
count1
19
word"pulse"
count1
20
word"quickened"
count1
21
word"crystalline"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"perfect"
2"weight"
3"velvet"
4"pulsed"
5"mosaic"
6"mechanical"
7"chill"
8"complex"
9"searing"
10"stomach"
11"simmering"
12"pristine"
13"flicker"
14"wavering"
15"crystallized"
16"intricate"
17"marble"
18"shimmered"
19"pulse"
20"quickened"
21"crystalline"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1336
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1018
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx10
Rory21
Heartstone2
Platters1
Isolde9
Veil1
Fae-forged1
Shade1
Dymas1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Platters"
3"Isolde"
4"Shade"
places
0"Dymas"
globalScore0.469
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1336
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean31.07
std21.05
cv0.678
sampleLengths
054
110
278
324
410
539
614
767
83
937
1057
1147
1231
1313
1429
159
1664
1712
1856
191
208
2142
2246
236
2442
2559
2658
2721
286
2928
304
3148
324
3328
344
3543
3624
3757
3819
3949
4016
4146
4223
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
92.47% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was harvesting"
1"was sampling"
2"was moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences102
ratio0.078
matches
0"Rory stepped through the shimmering portal and felt a sudden, dizzying shift in the air—thicker, sweet with the scent of ripe fruit and baked earth."
1"Orchards sprawled in perfect rows, trees bent under the weight of fruit Rory didn’t recognize—some spiked, some smooth and opalescent, others pulsing with soft light."
2"They moved forward, following a stone path laid with mosaic tiles depicting scenes of feasting—figures laughing, goblets raised, mountains of food."
3"The soul—for that’s what it was, Rory realized with a chill—was harvesting the glowing fruit with careful, practiced motions."
4"The air here was thick with smells—caramelized sugar, searing meat, spices Rory could name and others she couldn’t."
5"Platters piled high with delicacies steamed in the amber light—bread that glistened with crystallized honey, roasted meats glazed in dark sauces, fruits cut into intricate shapes."
6"And remember—in Dymas, nothing is as it seems."
7"Rory stood alone by the fountain, the vial clenched in her hand. From beyond the garden walls, the sounds of the feast swelled—music, laughter, the clatter of plates. The amber sky began to darken toward twilight, streaks of orange and crimson bleeding across the honeyed dome."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount929
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.017222820236813777
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0032292787944025836
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean13.1
std8.73
cv0.666
sampleLengths
015
125
214
310
48
522
625
723
84
99
108
113
128
132
1413
1512
1612
172
182
1912
2021
2110
2210
2326
243
2519
2610
278
2816
2918
3018
315
3221
3310
3416
3517
3614
378
385
3919
4010
415
424
4330
4426
458
468
474
4822
4912
68.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4411764705882353
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners45
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Further on, they came across"
1"Even the food can bind"
ratio0.027
65.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences75
matches
0"they whispered, the sound like"
1"She knelt and ran her"
2"She straightened, her hand going"
3"It pulsed warmly against her"
4"They moved forward, following a"
5"It wore simple robes, its"
6"It didn’t glance at them"
7"Her stomach growled despite herself."
8"He wiped his hands on"
9"His smile was broad, welcoming,"
10"His voice was rich, smooth"
11"He gestured toward a long"
12"She was sampling a sliver"
13"She wore simple robes, but"
14"He leaned closer, lowering his"
15"Her eyes met Rory’s across"
16"She raised a hand, a"
17"They flowed away from Rory,"
18"She didn’t wait."
19"She ducked under a low-hanging"
ratio0.387
80.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences75
matches
0"The amber sky stretched above"
1"Rory stepped through the shimmering"
2"they whispered, the sound like"
3"Orchards sprawled in perfect rows,"
4"Rory took another step."
5"The grass beneath her boots"
6"She knelt and ran her"
7"A low hum filled the"
8"She straightened, her hand going"
9"It pulsed warmly against her"
10"They moved forward, following a"
11"The tiles were warm underfoot,"
12"The soul—for that’s what it"
13"It wore simple robes, its"
14"It didn’t glance at them"
15"The air here was thick"
16"Her stomach growled despite herself."
17"He wiped his hands on"
18"His smile was broad, welcoming,"
19"His voice was rich, smooth"
ratio0.76
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Before them lay a landscape"
ratio0.013
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"In the distance, grand pavilions rose above the fields, their silken banners fluttering in a breeze that carried the murmur of distant celebration."
1"The tiles were warm underfoot, as though heated from below."
2"Platters piled high with delicacies steamed in the amber light—bread that glistened with crystallized honey, roasted meats glazed in dark sauces, fruits cut int…"
3"She rounded a corner and nearly collided with Isolde, who stood waiting beside a marble fountain shaped like a gaping mouth, water pouring from its lips into a …"
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"they whispered, the sound like rustling leaves,"
1"She stepped back, her form blurring at the edges"
80.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"forged dagger pressed (forge press)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.465
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.14
83.2501%