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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ1CHAGRE5242S17AK3RTS
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.005523
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
94.98%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.04%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
77.89%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
54.64%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
16.72%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
50.16%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
87.3703%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The knock at the door
jarred Aurora from her thoughts. She hesitated before opening it, hand hovering over the handle. Three deadbolts. Unusual for Eva.
Another glance around the cramped
one-bedroom flat above the curry house on Brick Lane. No one should even know she was here. The knock came again. Not the rapid-fire staccato of a delivery. Not the friendly double tap of a neighbor. Heavy. Insistent. Like the person on the other side knew she was there.
She swallowed her nerves and
opened the door. "Hello, Rory."
Lucien's voice was smooth as
French
silk
.
His tailored charcoal suit screamed
money.
His eyes, one amber, one
black, caught hers. Cold. Assessing. Like she was a problem to be solved. "L-Lucien. What are you doing here? How did you find me?" He stepped inside without invitation, cane in hand. "Finding people is my specialty. Or have you forgotten?" Aurora folded her arms. "You're a long way from Marseille. Must be important."
Lucien wandered the flat, gaze
sweeping over the books and research notes cluttering every surface. "Your little trip to London has caused some... difficulties." Rory frowned. "I didn't ask to come here. Eva dragged me into this." "Doesn't matter. Your name is on paperwork. You're... involved. The wrong people are asking questions." "Like you?"
He pinned her with a
look. "No. Much worse." Aurora held her ground. "I don't know anything. This was supposed to just be a... research trip."
Lucien picked up a scroll
from the table. His lip curled. "You've always been a terrible liar, Aurora. It's your one charming quality." She snatched it back. "Don't make this more than it is. Eva needs me. We go back a long way." "I see."
He studied her
. Worse than a problem. A complication. "No matter. The situation has changed. You need to return to Cardiff." "I can't just leave!" "You can. And you will."
He leaned in close
. She smelled expensive cologne. "Unless you want your brother to find out about your little side job." Blood drained from Aurora's face. "You wouldn't." "I would. And I will."
His brows rose
. Challenging her. "Your family may overlook you fleeing like a thief in the night, but stealing from them? They're less forgiving." Aurora's
fists clenched
. "I'm not abandoning Eva. Not for you to clean up one of your messes. No incentive." Lucien sighed.
His hand shot out and
gripped her wrist. The one with the small crescent-shaped scar. "Remember this?"
His thumb stroked over it
. Possessive. "You were always impulsive. Running into things without looking." "Things change."
She yanked her arm back
. His grip burned. "Do they?"
His eyes were cold and
amused. "Because right now, I see a little girl hiding from her past. Again." "I'm not hiding." "No?" A predatory step closer. "Then let me enlighten you. While you've been playing researcher, the Ellis Cartel has been buying up property in London. A hostile takeover. Fully funded by slave labor." Aurora paled. "That's impossible." "I have proof."
He pulled out his phone
. A photo of a ledger. One with Ellis Banking stamp on it. "Aside from their usual smuggling, they're jumping into full-blown human trafficking. Every grain of dirt I have on them is linked to that cartel." She looked away. "That's not my problem." "Isn't it?" Lucien tipped her chin back until their eyes met. "Your name is all over these documents. You've been busy since leaving Cardiff. Carrying packages for Mr. Cheung. Moonlighting for a certain information broker..."
It's not like
that-" He cut her off. "Did you forget what it means to take Ellis money? They'll own you." "I'm done with Ellis money. And you." "Not quite." His
eyes narrowed
. He touched the ivory handle of his cane. "Seems your brother got wind of my inquiries. Sent heaviest after me." "What does Brendan want with you?" She hated herself for asking. For caring. This side of Lucien was dangerous. But he just smiled. That same smile that made her run in the first place. "Why do you think I'm here, Rory? Brendan doesn't want me dead." Her heart pounded. "Then what does he want?" "Me." His voice dropped. He leaned in and brushed her ear with his lips. "In exchange for you." Aurora felt the floor tilt. No. Not after everything. She couldn't go back. "I won't do it." Her voice cracked. Damn him for making her
feel
weak. Vulnerable. Lucien pulled back and studied her. Every flaw. Every secret. "You misunderstand. I'm not giving you a choice." He headed for the door. "You're a bastard," she said to his retreating back. Her hands shook. "The moment I'm out-" He paused. Looked back. "The moment you step outside this door, Ellis' men will handcuff you to my private plane and deliver you to your brother." He shrugged. "But you made your decision when you started digging where you shouldn't." "I haven't done anything wrong!" Desperation clawed her chest. Caged. Constrained. She hated everything about him. His indifference. His control. But he was her only lifeline now. A stray thought. Another moment of weakness. "Save me." She hated herself more. For the tears. For the way his eyes softened when she cried. Never because he cared. But he cherished watching her break. His eyes flashed demon black. "Am I your savior now, Aurora?" He stepped closer. "Maybe we can discuss our arrangement." "I have nothing to offer." She lifted her chin. Fear spiked in her blood. Every instinct screamed to run. "I'll decide that." He grabbed her wrist and hauled her close. Her chest collided with his. "You're coming to Marseille. The rest..." His eyes dropped to her mouth. "We'll negotiate." Then his lips crushed hers, stealing her breath. Stealing her resistance. Stealing whatever decency she had left. Kissing Lucien was gasoline and lightning. But the match was already struck. Lucien Moreau would burn her to ash. And she'd walk through hell to light the fire.
created_at
"2026-02-19T03:28:00.061Z"
2/19/2026, 3:28:00 AM
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4591
tokens_completion
1542
native_tokens_prompt
4148
native_tokens_completion
1375
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0
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(null)
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0
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
23
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Lucien pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences
58
tagDensity
0.397
leniency
0.793
rawRatio
0.043
effectiveRatio
0.034
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
996
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
94.98%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
996
totalAiIsms
1
found
0
word
"silk"
count
1
highlights
0
"silk"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"fists clenched"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
75
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
75
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
101
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
45
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
991
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
5
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
66.04%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
27
wordCount
536
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
1.68
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora
7
Eva
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
French
1
Worse
1
Challenging
1
Possessive
1
Ellis
1
Banking
1
Sent
1
Lucien
9
Moreau
1
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Eva"
2
"Challenging"
3
"Ellis"
4
"Banking"
5
"Lucien"
6
"Moreau"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
globalScore
0.66
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
35
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
991
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
101
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
48
mean
20.65
std
11.67
cv
0.565
sampleLengths
0
47
1
32
2
8
3
33
4
11
5
17
6
13
7
24
8
13
9
15
10
2
11
9
12
17
13
23
14
20
15
23
16
4
17
26
18
7
19
29
20
19
21
34
22
10
23
21
24
3
25
33
26
4
27
44
28
7
29
35
30
4
31
17
32
7
33
25
34
19
35
27
36
8
37
18
38
28
39
23
40
16
41
40
42
27
43
35
44
20
45
19
46
30
47
45
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
75
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
107
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
101
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
485
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount
8
adverbRatio
0.016494845360824743
lyAdverbCount
2
lyAdverbRatio
0.004123711340206186
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
101
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
101
mean
9.81
std
8.42
cv
0.858
sampleLengths
0
10
1
10
2
2
3
3
4
14
5
8
6
4
7
7
8
8
9
1
10
1
11
11
12
8
13
9
14
6
15
8
16
1
17
1
18
8
19
11
20
8
21
9
22
4
23
9
24
15
25
9
26
2
27
11
28
15
29
2
30
6
31
3
32
4
33
13
34
8
35
3
36
12
37
4
38
16
39
5
40
4
41
2
42
12
43
4
44
9
45
4
46
13
47
5
48
2
49
8
77.89%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.48514851485148514
totalSentences
101
uniqueOpeners
49
54.64%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
61
matches
0
"Then his lips crushed hers,"
ratio
0.016
16.72%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
31
totalSentences
61
matches
0
"She hesitated before opening it,"
1
"She swallowed her nerves and"
2
"His tailored charcoal suit screamed"
3
"His eyes, one amber, one"
4
"He stepped inside without invitation,"
5
"He pinned her with a"
6
"His lip curled."
7
"She snatched it back."
8
"He studied her"
9
"He leaned in close"
10
"She smelled expensive cologne."
11
"His brows rose"
12
"His hand shot out and"
13
"His thumb stroked over it"
14
"She yanked her arm back"
15
"His grip burned."
16
"His eyes were cold and"
17
"He pulled out his phone"
18
"She looked away."
19
"It's not like"
ratio
0.508
50.16%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
50
totalSentences
61
matches
0
"The knock at the door"
1
"She hesitated before opening it,"
2
"Another glance around the cramped"
3
"The knock came again."
4
"She swallowed her nerves and"
5
"Lucien's voice was smooth as"
6
"His tailored charcoal suit screamed"
7
"His eyes, one amber, one"
8
"He stepped inside without invitation,"
9
"Aurora folded her arms."
10
"Lucien wandered the flat, gaze"
11
"He pinned her with a"
12
"Aurora held her ground."
13
"Lucien picked up a scroll"
14
"His lip curled."
15
"She snatched it back."
16
"He studied her"
17
"He leaned in close"
18
"She smelled expensive cologne."
19
"Blood drained from Aurora's face."
ratio
0.82
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
61
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
6
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
19
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
58
tagDensity
0.017
leniency
0.034
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
87.3703%