Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ1FJERAKQ8VDM7VT3RZAX

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Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.026068
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The flat's heavy locks hadn’t been tampered with, but Ptolemy wasn’t at the door, waiting to greet her. Not a good sign. Rory placed her bag on the floor and cupped her hands around her mouth. “Eva? Kitty-Kitty?” A crash rang out from the back of the apartment, followed by a frustrated cry. “At least she's home,” Rory muttered, shutting the door with a click. She weaved through the stacks of books, wincing as she nudged a teetering pile. “Eva?” “In here, for the love of-” A woman's exasperated voice trailed off, her gaze darting from a mess of papers on her desk to the investigator leaning against the doorframe. Aurora smirked. “Sounded like you needed help. I'll have your head if anything happens to that poppet.” Eva's glare softened at the mention of her cat. Her shoulder-length red curls, once meticulously styled, now formed a tangled halo around her freckled face. “Just—watch the papers, will you? My presentation's tomorrow...” Stepping into the bedroom-turned-office was like entering a maze, and Rory moved cautiously. “Need a hand finding what you’re looking for?” She picked up a sheaf of notes from the floor. “It was right here. Someone jinxed me!” Eva's blue eyes glinted with frustration. “This is my—argh!” Laughter spilled from Rory's lips. “Eva! You’re still superstitions as ever.” “I’m not. Well, maybe a bit.” A faint blush tinted her pale cheeks. In the familiar space of her best friend's flat, Rory felt herself relax for the first time since the day's close call. They had been inseparable in secondary school, and in uni... until things changed. Until they changed. A tingle of discomfort ran through Rory at the memory, but she ignored it. She understood—duty first, everything else second. Often not even second. Aurora knew this. Expected it. Even though the why behind it had hurt. The years hadn’t dimmed the memories, but the ache of them faded when Rory smiled. “I thought you didn’t believe in that stuff any—” “Look, can we not talk about the past right now? I need to finish this before tomorrow.” Eva groaned, pushing her glasses up her nose. “Still with the proximity PhD?” Rory teased, searching the cluttered desk. “Yes, and it's not easy. Not everyone is a genius like you, skipping courses, finishing in record time, and getting the best law degree Cardiff Uni ever saw,” Eva huffed. “Now, that spell book—” “Oi! Found it.” Rory held up a worn tome, its pages loose and frayed. “Thought these kids these days Googled everything.” “Ha-ha." Eva’s smile faded quickly. "Listen, Rory. I'm sorry I didn't come with you this morning. After everything that's happened—” “Hey, no worries.” Aurora gave a dismissive wave. “You were at the inquest. The evidence is strong. There's nothing you could have done. Besides, I wanted to move on with this quickly.” “But what if they hadn’t released the body yet? I could have-” “They did.” Rory's voice was uncharacteristically cold. “And I needed to make sure it was truly him.” The declaration hung in the air, both women staring at each other. Finally, Eva sighed and shuffled some papers into a pile. Unbidden, the memories slipped in. Aurora's steady breath wavered as she pictured not the past but the future. Not a future she wanted or would ever choose, but one that was nonetheless clear: Ordered takeout and card games on the coffee table. Eva's cackle as Rory lost again. Late-night readings of obscure legends and folklore, their eyes straining under the lamplight, Ptolemy nestled between them. That could be it, she thought. That could be the future. In a different timeline. But this one had gone awry the moment she'd found Adrian beside the canal. The moment she'd seen her fingerprints on his skin, fresh despite the sea of blood covering the rest of him, making it clear the murderer had used those very fingerprints to frame her. Aurora knew better than anyone how framing worked, and it was her job to clear her name. Which is why she had to confirm it was him. Which is why she had to get all the details she could from his body before it was... handled by the authorities. When Eva yawned and stretched, Rory realized she'd been silent for a few minutes, lost in thought. Eva was bringing her fingers to her mouth when Rory caught her wrist mid-yawn. Aurora would have given the world to know the taste of her lips. How she'd imagined pressing their bodies together, learning each other's shapes, kissing every inch of skin. But she wouldn't ask again. She hadn't relished saying no the first time, doing what she thought was best. For them both. “Rory? You alright?” Eva's voice was a soft whisper. “Yeah. Sorry.” She let go of Eva's wrist and picked up the half-eaten takeaway box on the desk. “You even finish it before your deadline?” “Research is nine-tenths spicy chicken, you know.” Eva pinched the bridge of her nose. “And one-tenth cranky professor who won't leave us alone on the weekends.” “Says the one living over her office.” “It was easier than going back to Anglesey every other week to check in. Besides, you're the one with the cat sitter now. We're like one-woman London showing. Remember that time you—" “Showed up late with pastry for everyone?” Rory asked, jogging back a step. She leaned into the door frame, out of the direct light, trying to relax. “No, the time you-” Eva stopped short, her cheeks flushing. “Well, look at it this way: that prof is paying me to be here. Just think of all the fieldwork we'd be doing otherwise.” “Yeah, but...” Rory paused, tongue-tied, not quite meeting Eva's eyes. Her words felt stilted in her mouth, so she settled on a small smile before busying herself with arranging the papers. It was tough trying not to fold them in the routine, reflexive way she usually did. Rory had to consider their order now. Why was that a challenge of its own? She looked up at her roommate, but her attention was on finishing her detailed, meticulous, tactile task. The silence grew heavy, the air warmer as the evening deepened. A world of unspoken words, a lifetime of almosts. “We need to talk about it sometime,” Eva said, folding the last page neatly. Rory stopped and met her gaze, an unrequited call flickering in her bright blue eyes. She wanted to say yes; she never wanted to say anything else. But it was Eva who broke the silence. “Sometime. When this is all over. For now, dinner?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva’s smile faded quickly [quickly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.447
leniency0.895
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.053
77.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count2
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"quickly"
2"truly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"wavered"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"wavered"
2"whisper"
3"silence"
4"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences75
matches
0"d with frustration"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1099
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, Eva sighed and shuffled some papers into a pile."
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount770
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Aurora6
Rory17
Eva16
Laughter1
Ordered1
Adrian1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Aurora"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Laughter"
5"Adrian"
places(empty)
globalScore0.396
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite meeting Eva's eyes"
18.02% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.82
wordCount1099
matches
0"not the past but the future"
1"Not a future she wanted or would ever choose, but one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"was that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean30.53
std23.85
cv0.781
sampleLengths
038
115
227
330
417
533
631
716
811
913
1099
1125
1211
1334
1421
1520
1632
1712
1817
1922
2033
2132
22111
2382
249
2525
2626
277
2832
2927
3034
3179
3220
3314
3427
3517
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"been tampered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs147
matches
0"was bringing"
82.07% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences94
ratio0.021
matches
0"She understood—duty first, everything else second."
1"She wanted to say yes; she never wanted to say anything else."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount778
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02313624678663239
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008997429305912597
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean11.69
std6.79
cv0.581
sampleLengths
018
14
214
32
415
512
614
71
830
92
1015
119
1216
138
1413
1518
1613
173
185
196
2013
2122
2210
233
243
2514
266
274
283
292
308
3115
329
3325
3411
3530
364
3714
387
395
4015
418
4224
4312
447
4510
4612
4710
485
4913
92.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.574468085106383
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners54
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Often not even second."
1"Finally, Eva sighed and shuffled"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences72
matches
0"She weaved through the stacks"
1"Her shoulder-length red curls, once"
2"She picked up a sheaf"
3"They had been inseparable in"
4"She understood—duty first, everything else"
5"She hadn't relished saying no"
6"She let go of Eva's"
7"She leaned into the door"
8"Her words felt stilted in"
9"It was tough trying not"
10"She looked up at her"
11"She wanted to say yes;"
ratio0.167
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences72
matches
0"The flat's heavy locks hadn’t"
1"Rory placed her bag on"
2"A crash rang out from"
3"Rory muttered, shutting the door"
4"She weaved through the stacks"
5"A woman's exasperated voice trailed"
6"Eva's glare softened at the"
7"Her shoulder-length red curls, once"
8"She picked up a sheaf"
9"Eva's blue eyes glinted with"
10"Laughter spilled from Rory's lips."
11"A faint blush tinted her"
12"They had been inseparable in"
13"A tingle of discomfort ran"
14"She understood—duty first, everything else"
15"Aurora knew this."
16"The years hadn’t dimmed the"
17"Eva groaned, pushing her glasses"
18"Rory teased, searching the cluttered"
19"Rory held up a worn"
ratio0.694
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Even though the why behind"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"How she'd imagined pressing their bodies together, learning each other's shapes, kissing every inch of skin."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory held up, its pages loose and frayed"
1"Eva stopped, her cheeks flushing"
71.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Eva groaned (groan)"
2"Rory teased (tease)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.158
89.1925%