Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ1KCH2NN9EE70Y42SZRE8

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Duration:
2.9s
Cost:
$0.000106

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove hummed like a thousand bees, thick and sweet, before it even touched Aurora’s skin. She stepped through the standing stones, her boots sinking into the damp earth, the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant clinking against her wrist. The moment her bare feet hit the moss, the world tilted. The trees here were no ordinary oaks. Their bark shimmered with veins of silver light, pulsing faintly as if breathing. The leaves above her were not just green—they were translucent, shifting between hues of violet and gold, catching the light like stained glass. Aurora’s breath caught. *This isn’t real.* Nyx materialized beside her, their form a shifting shadow that seemed to drink in the glow of the trees. They tilted their head, voice a whisper that slithered into the air between them. *"You’ve been warned."* Aurora didn’t flinch. She’d heard that before. *"So have I."* She lifted the Heartstone, its crimson glow pulsing weakly against the silver chain. *"What’s this place?"* Isolde stepped from the undergrowth, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars. The seer’s hands hovered just above the earth, fingers tracing patterns in the air that made the flowers around her bloom brighter. *"A pocket. A place where the Veil thins."* She turned, her pale lavender eyes scanning the grove. *"You shouldn’t be here."* Aurora exhaled sharply. *"We’re not exactly invited."* Nyx’s form flickered, the edges of their silhouette rippling like water. *"Invitation isn’t the point."* A low growl rumbled through the trees. The air grew colder, the scent of damp earth and something older, something *wrong*, pressing in. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the Fae blade at her belt. The dagger’s cold edge hummed faintly, its glow dimming as the shadows deepened. *"What’s that?"* Isolde’s voice dropped to a whisper, though her eyes remained steady. *"A warning,"* Nyx said, their voice a sigh. *"Or a hunger."* The ground trembled beneath Aurora’s feet. The trees leaned in, their branches twisting toward the center of the grove, where the light dimmed. And then, from the darkness, something moved. Not a creature. Not quite. A shape, half-formed, half-shadow, its edges bleeding into the gloom. It didn’t breathe like a living thing—it *pulled* the air around it, sucking the light from the grove like a wound. Aurora’s pulse hammered in her throat. She didn’t need to see it to know what it was. Nyx’s voice was a blade in her ear. *"You shouldn’t have come."* Aurora didn’t answer. She already had. She’d come because the Heartstone had called her, because the Veil had whispered her name. And now, the grove was answering back. The thing in the center of the grove let out a sound like tearing silk. The trees snapped back, their branches lashing out as if defending something buried beneath them. Isolde’s hands stilled. *"It’s not a creature,"* she murmured. *"It’s a door."* Aurora’s grip on the dagger tightened. *"A door to what?"* The ground split open. Not with a sound. Not with a crack. It *unraveled*, the earth itself parting as if yielding to something deeper. The air inside the rift was different—thick, heavy, like breathing in the back of a closed room. The Heartstone’s glow flared violently, its crimson light bleeding into the void. Nyx’s form dissolved into the shadows, leaving only a whisper. *"You’re not supposed to see this."* Aurora didn’t hesitate. She stepped forward, the blade raised, the Fae blade’s cold edge cutting through the air like a promise. The rift yawned wider, and for a heartbeat, she saw it—the edge of something vast and hungry, something that had been waiting for her. And then the light returned.
total_cost0.00010588000000000001

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount614
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount614
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count3
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"whisper"
2"tracing"
3"scanning"
4"flickered"
5"trembled"
6"gloom"
7"pulse"
8"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans19
markdownWords63
totalWords608
ratio0.104
matches
0"This isn’t real."
1"\"You’ve been warned.\""
2"\"So have I.\""
3"\"What’s this place?\""
4"\"A pocket. A place where the Veil thins.\""
5"\"You shouldn’t be here.\""
6"\"We’re not exactly invited.\""
7"\"Invitation isn’t the point.\""
8"wrong"
9"\"What’s that?\""
10"\"A warning,\""
11"\"Or a hunger.\""
12"pulled"
13"\"You shouldn’t have come.\""
14"\"It’s not a creature,\""
15"\"It’s a door.\""
16"\"A door to what?\""
17"unraveled"
18"\"You’re not supposed to see this.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount551
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora10
Heartstone4
Nyx5
Isolde3
Fae2
Veil1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Veil"
places(empty)
globalScore0.593
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"shadow that seemed to drink in the glow of the trees"
2"as if defending something buried beneath them"
3"as if yielding to something deeper"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount608
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean27.64
std18.04
cv0.653
sampleLengths
054
149
236
326
457
57
615
746
813
911
1030
115
1248
1312
1428
1542
1610
174
1849
1916
2045
215
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs97
matches
0"was answering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences64
ratio0.063
matches
0"The leaves above her were not just green—they were translucent, shifting between hues of violet and gold, catching the light like stained glass."
1"It didn’t breathe like a living thing—it *pulled* the air around it, sucking the light from the grove like a wound."
2"The air inside the rift was different—thick, heavy, like breathing in the back of a closed room."
3"The rift yawned wider, and for a heartbeat, she saw it—the edge of something vast and hungry, something that had been waiting for her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount557
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"different—thick, heavy, like"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03231597845601436
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010771992818671455
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean9.5
std6.34
cv0.668
sampleLengths
019
124
211
37
413
523
63
73
819
914
103
113
124
1316
143
1514
1622
1717
184
193
204
2111
224
237
2416
2510
2613
2713
288
293
306
3117
327
333
342
3510
3621
376
3811
398
404
413
423
4315
447
4515
4615
473
486
493
37.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.28125
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners18
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences52
matches
0"She stepped through the standing"
1"Their bark shimmered with veins"
2"They tilted their head, voice"
3"She’d heard that before."
4"She lifted the Heartstone, its"
5"She turned, her pale lavender"
6"It didn’t breathe like a"
7"She didn’t need to see"
8"She already had."
9"She’d come because the Heartstone"
10"It *unraveled*, the earth itself"
11"She stepped forward, the blade"
ratio0.231
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences52
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"She stepped through the standing"
2"The moment her bare feet"
3"The trees here were no"
4"Their bark shimmered with veins"
5"The leaves above her were"
6"Aurora’s breath caught."
7"*This isn’t real.*"
8"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
9"They tilted their head, voice"
10"Aurora didn’t flinch."
11"She’d heard that before."
12"She lifted the Heartstone, its"
13"Isolde stepped from the undergrowth,"
14"The seer’s hands hovered just"
15"She turned, her pale lavender"
16"Aurora exhaled sharply."
17"Nyx’s form flickered, the edges"
18"A low growl rumbled through"
19"The air grew colder, the"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She stepped through the standing stones, her boots sinking into the damp earth, the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant clinking against her wrist."
1"Their bark shimmered with veins of silver light, pulsing faintly as if breathing."
2"They tilted their head, voice a whisper that slithered into the air between them."
3"The trees snapped back, their branches lashing out as if defending something buried beneath them."
4"It *unraveled*, the earth itself parting as if yielding to something deeper."
5"The rift yawned wider, and for a heartbeat, she saw it—the edge of something vast and hungry, something that had been waiting for her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She lifted, its crimson glow pulsing weakly against the silver chain"
1"Isolde’s voice dropped, though her eyes remained steady"
2"Nyx said, their voice a sigh"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.133
66.4687%