Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ1NV9P29GYKPPR01NE4D3

Run Details

Duration:
29.3s
Cost:
$0.014682
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts Aurora had installed after moving in were no match for the Frenchman's powers. Lucien pushed open the door, his tall frame filling the doorway. Aurora stood frozen, her heart pounding in her chest at the sight of the man she'd been trying so hard to forget. "Well, well," he said, his voice laced with a mix of amusement and satisfaction. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, seemed to see right through her. "Look who's hiding behind the deadbolts." Aurora's hand tightened around the stack of mail she had been holding when she opened the door. She took a steadying breath, her gaze flicking from Lucien's face to the threshold behind him. Her voice, when she found it, was steadier than she'd expected. "I thought I made it clear I wanted nothing to do with you." Lucien raised an eyebrow, his expression a mix of arrogance and pain. "So, you decided to hide away in this tiny flat and pretend I don't exist?" Aurora rolled her eyes, taking a step back to make room for him to enter. She knew she couldn't keep him out, but she wasn't about to welcome him with open arms either. "I don't hide from anyone. I've been busy, and you—" "Busy avoiding me?" Lucien smirked, stepping into the flat. The slam of the door reverberated through the small space, and the tabby cat, Ptolemy, shot out from under the couch, hissing at the sudden intrusion. "I have a life, Lucien. A job, friends..." Aurora trailed off, gesturing to the cluttered space around her. "This place might not be much, but it's mine." Lucien's gaze swept over the piles of books and scrolls, his mouth curving into a wry smile. "A library fit for a scholar. Though I never pegged you for a hoarder." "A researcher, not a hoarder," Aurora corrected, setting the mail down on a stack of ancient-looking tomes. "And I'd appreciate it if you didn't snoop." "Can't help it, my dear. Curiosity is my curse." He scanned the titles, his eyes lingering on a particular scroll. "Ah, this one is a rare find. Where did you get it?" Aurora hesitated, considering the wisdom of engaging with him. But as she watched him run his long fingers over the delicate surface of the parchment, she couldn't help but feel the old pull of his charm. "I have my sources," she said, her voice softening despite herself. Lucien turned, leaning against the small kitchen counter, his arms folded casually across his chest. "I remember when all you could talk about was getting out of Cardiff, escaping your family's expectations. Now you're researching forgotten tomes and living above a curry house." "It's not just about research." Aurora felt the weight of his scrutiny and looked away. "I can do what I want here...who I want to be without..." He straightened, his eyes narrowing. "Without me?" Aurora bit her lip, wishing she could take back the words. The silence stretched between them, heavy with unspoken emotions. Lucien sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back blond hair. "I never wanted to be that person, Rory." Hearing him say her nickname, the one only close friends used, sent a shiver down her spine. "A name doesn't change what you did," she retorted, her voice wavering. Lucien's eyes flashed, pain cutting through his usual arrogance. "I made mistakes, yes, but so did you. I loved you, and you left without a word." Aurora's eyes widened at his blunt confession. She felt her throat constrict, emotions rising unbidden. "I had my reasons." "Reasons? Or fear?" Lucien's gaze was piercing, and she felt exposed, as if he could see every doubt and secret she'd tried to hide. "Bit of both." Aurora took a deep breath, steeling herself. "I was scared, but I also saw things in you...Things you didn't want me to. Like the night of the fire..." His face paled, and for a moment, he looked almost vulnerable. "I told you to stay away for your own good." "And I should've fought harder to stay. But I was scared, and you made it easier to leave." Aurora's eyes filled with unshed tears, memories of the past flooding back. "I thought I'd never see you again." Lucien closed the distance between them in two strides, his hands gently cupping her face. "I never wanted to hurt you. I let you go because I thought it was the only way to protect you." Aurora's heart raced as she felt the warmth of his touch, the familiar spark igniting deep within. She wanted to push him away, to deny the connection, but her body was betraying her. "Do you still want to protect me?" she whispered, her voice laden with doubt and desire. Lucien's eyes searched hers, his thumb brushing against her cheek. "More than anything, but I won't be the reason you hide anymore, or we'll both end up in our own personal hells." The raw honesty in his words caught Aurora off guard, softening her resolve. She felt the weight of the past easing, even if just for a moment. "I'm not hiding," she insisted, her voice breaking. "I'm living, here and now..." Lucien's face was inches from hers, their breaths mingling. "Then live without fear, with me. No more running."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.382
leniency0.765
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount886
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount886
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"reverberated"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"charm"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"wavering"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"desire"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"eyebrow"
2"reverberated"
3"scanned"
4"charm"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"unspoken"
8"down her spine"
9"wavering"
10"raced"
11"warmth"
12"familiar"
13"desire"
14"resolve"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"couldn't help but"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"couldn't help but feel"
2"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords884
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
23.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount554
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.53
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora14
Frenchman1
Lucien12
Ptolemy1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Frenchman"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.236
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount884
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
61.59% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean27.63
std10.1
cv0.366
sampleLengths
049
134
244
313
427
543
635
727
831
925
1032
1136
1211
1343
1427
157
1620
1718
1829
1926
2019
2124
2231
2321
2437
2536
2633
2716
2832
2927
3013
3118
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs105
matches
0"was betraying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount556
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.017985611510791366
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00539568345323741
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean13.6
std5.89
cv0.433
sampleLengths
016
111
222
314
414
56
617
716
811
913
1012
1115
1215
1318
1410
159
1626
1718
189
1917
2014
2117
228
2320
2412
259
2627
2711
2815
2928
3015
3112
325
332
3411
359
3610
378
3817
3912
409
4117
427
438
444
4524
4610
4721
4811
4910
63.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.64% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences44
matches
0"he said, his voice laced"
1"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
2"She took a steadying breath,"
3"Her voice, when she found"
4"She knew she couldn't keep"
5"He scanned the titles, his"
6"she said, her voice softening"
7"He straightened, his eyes narrowing."
8"she retorted, her voice wavering"
9"She felt her throat constrict,"
10"His face paled, and for"
11"She wanted to push him"
12"she whispered, her voice laden"
13"She felt the weight of"
14"she insisted, her voice breaking"
ratio0.341
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences44
matches
0"The three deadbolts Aurora had"
1"Lucien pushed open the door,"
2"Aurora stood frozen, her heart"
3"he said, his voice laced"
4"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
5"Aurora's hand tightened around the"
6"She took a steadying breath,"
7"Her voice, when she found"
8"Lucien raised an eyebrow, his"
9"Aurora rolled her eyes, taking"
10"She knew she couldn't keep"
11"Lucien smirked, stepping into the"
12"The slam of the door"
13"Aurora trailed off, gesturing to"
14"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
15"Aurora corrected, setting the mail"
16"He scanned the titles, his"
17"Aurora hesitated, considering the wisdom"
18"she said, her voice softening"
19"Lucien turned, leaning against the"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Aurora stood frozen, her heart pounding in her chest at the sight of the man she'd been trying so hard to forget."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He scanned, his eyes lingering on a particular scroll"
1"she said, her voice softening despite herself"
2"she retorted, her voice wavering"
3"she felt, as if he could see every doubt and secret she'd tried to hide"
4"she insisted, her voice breaking"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Aurora corrected (correct)"
1"she retorted (retort)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.235
72.6711%